• Ever thought it'd be cool to have your art, writing, or challenge runs featured on PokéCommunity? Click here for info - we'd love to spotlight your work!
  • It's time to vote for your favorite Pokémon Battle Revolution protagonist in our new weekly protagonist poll! Click here to cast your vote and let us know which PBR protagonist you like most.
  • Welcome to PokéCommunity! Register now and join one of the best fan communities on the 'net to talk Pokémon and more! We are not affiliated with The Pokémon Company or Nintendo.
    Register

Through Umbreon Eyes

Lol! Alligators live close to Marsy and thier nothing special so yeah...Marsy's got nothing more to say...PHWEEE!...semi-hyper
 
*laughs so hard she's crying* Row, row, row your boat...

Yes, we must save the butter wars! *throws popcorn ball* Please don't die, my butter wars. You were my only friend. Uh, besides all the people on my friends list.
 
Lol! Adding Team Rocket in was a good idea!
 
BUTTER!! *chases after popcorn ball, tackling it* Heh heh heh, you're MINE!!! *pounces on it and rolls it across the floor* Kreeee!

Stepping aside from the Butter/Popcorn ball, when's the next chapter coming, Kree?

Kreeeeee! *attacks ball again*
 
*CharMz laughes is %&# off*
XD That's funny...XD Anyway...NEXT CHAPTER!!!




In accordance with the prophecy.
 
Last edited:
Awhups. I see everyones gotten... not as crazy without me here. Well... *shove a piece of popcorn into my ear*
Nice new.... like 3 chapters.

In Accordance With The Prophecy~
 
The next chapter will come soon enough but Rinny-Spoon-chan is moving so it will come later than usual.
*Shoves butter up nose* The wheels on the bus go round and round all the live long day!
 
Last edited:
~Mars~ said:
The next chapter will come soon enough but Rinny-Spoon-chan is moing so it will come later than usual.
*Shoves butter up nose* The wheels on the bus go round and round all the live long day!
Click to expand...
Wow. That doesn't help much. xD I'm moving not moing...whatever that is O.o

Anyways, yes, the computer isn't hooked up, so I'm posting by school. No new chapter, yet. So sorry...but it will come soon, I assure you!
 
Rin-Rin said:
Wow. That doesn't help much. xD I'm moving not moing...whatever that is O.o

Anyways, yes, the computer isn't hooked up, so I'm posting by school. No new chapter, yet. So sorry...but it will come soon, I assure you!
Click to expand...
0.o oops... well I will fix that.
:( man no new chapter well then I will wait besides my loudmouth cat is calling me.
 
~Mars~ said:
0.o oops... well I will fix that.
:( man no new chapter well then I will wait besides my loudmouth cat is calling me.
Click to expand...
Meh. It's nothin'. Just a little typo. And, to be exact, I'll be on either Thursday or Friday, unfortunately. Yup, DSL's not up until Thursday. My deepest apologies ;.;
 
very awesome fanfic, rin-rin! :D i really enjoyed the part when Team Rocket came in. The plot of this story is very evil *turns into evil person* verrryy nice. Easily 10 out of 10. I never knew how interesting umbreon could be.
 
*points up* Agreed. And, I hope your 'moing' goes well, Rinny-Spoon-Chan!!

Kreee! The nickname I made up for you is in your sig!! ^_^

*chokes on Butter-Popcorn Ball*
 
dark_espeon said:
*points up* Agreed. And, I hope your 'moing' goes well, Rinny-Spoon-Chan!!

Kreee! The nickname I made up for you is in your sig!! ^_^

*chokes on Butter-Popcorn Ball*
Click to expand...
I made that sig and avy, by the way. I got impatient and made my own out of this character I made up over the summer--the Goober! He's the little gray guy that seems very happy...I think he's cute for some reason...

--Hopefully, the next chapter will be posted later to day...We're getting DSL back today...so they say >>
 
Arrgghh now i'm going to die because of stupid typo that is now non-existant!

Please don'y mak fun with the wholemoing thing please.
 
*sees Saphi choke on popcorn ball* Glad you like it. Want another?

Eee, can't wait 'till next chap., Rinnyspoon! ^^ But in teh meantime... *flings butter everywhere*
 
Well, this sucks -.-; We got the internet hooked up and everything, but guess what? We unpacked every single box and searched through both cars, but couldn't find the friggin' DSL modem...
 
Oh, ****... That sucks...

Sorry 'bout that, Marsy (can I call you that?) I just thought it would be fun to say. *gets mad at self for being so schtoopid* How could I?! To be so mean, heartless, and cruel!! I do not deserve to live for this!! Goodbye, my dearest friends!!! *stabs self with pencil*

*looks around* I'm alive!!!

Stab bats bats stab stab bats stab stab... Same word, backward and forward.... o_o'

Kreeee! *jumps up and catches butter in mouth, running in circles trying to eat teh butter*
 
Yeah, that really sucks. >_> Hope you can find it soon...

Stab bats stab bats stab bats stab bats. 'Tis a palindrome, my friends.

*watches Saphi run around* Keep...trying! XD

In accordance w/prophecy.
 
Anyway, y'know, I wonder why they couldn't the word for Palindromes a palindrome itself. Must resist urge to... umm... correct spelling n' stuff.
That REALLY sucks though, Rin-ran.
I'm a Goofy Goober YEAH! You're a Goofy Goober YEAH! We're all Goofy Goobers YEAH! GOOFYGOOFYGOOFYGOOFYGOOBERS!!!
 
Gohan said:
Anyway, y'know, I wonder why they couldn't the word for Palindromes a palindrome itself. Must resist urge to... umm... correct spelling n' stuff.
That REALLY sucks though, Rin-ran.
I'm a Goofy Goober YEAH! You're a Goofy Goober YEAH! We're all Goofy Goobers YEAH! GOOFYGOOFYGOOFYGOOFYGOOBERS!!!
Click to expand...

Hm...I wonder what happened to that club :/

Incandescent starlight shown through the steadily growing crack in the corner of the ceiling. Dust particles could be seen in its trail of rays, flitting about lazily in the air. WaterWing was resting in the corner, her head bowed with her chin softly touching her collar bone. Phlow's sleeping form was curled up tightly in the center of the cell, gently heaving up and down. However, BoughLeaf was wide awake the whole of the night, up administering the crack on the ceiling and scraping his stubby fingers against the solid concrete. Luckily, he found a weak spot which easily gave way to his unsharp claws, showering gravel down the wall. The pebbles chinked off the musky floor.

Phlow's ear twitched as he felt the wind of a rather large pebble sweep down by his ear. He looked up, curious to what the source of all the raining rocks was for. He did a combination of a yawn and a growl once he say the illuminated neon-green figure of the tree gecko. Seeing that this was no major problem, he tucked his head back into his folded arms and attempted falling into a very difficult sleep.

WaterWing knew what the naive child was trying to do, though. She was awakened the second he climbed up the wall. She squinted and watched as the Treeko mumbled to himself "Moonlightmoonlightmoonlight" as if it were some incantation to heal his emotional wounds. BoughLeaf had been working on the crack when the two weren't looking, as if it were a sin to try and escape from the dank prison cell. He didn't want to be caught seeking for freedom.

Although the fact that he was trying to escape was obvious, the wise Wartortle knew that freedom and fresh air wasn't BoughLeaf's impetus. He wanted to set the poor Umbreon free. He wanted to save Moonlight for he was the only one out of them other than the Treeko himself who knew his mother.

BoughLeaf had at last developed a hole in the wall large enough for his fist to fit through. The frail creature ran his fingers over the hole and gasped in awe as he felt the night wind whistle through the hole and cool the sweat upon his face. He wanted to drink the cool breeze. He managed to fit his hand through the hole and flit his fingers about in the wind. He hadn't felt true air in forever...it felt like his entire body was being recreated. The memories of the sweet forest smell of pine trees seemed to fill the cell. He closed his eyes and saw the towering trees bounce up from the ground. The slimy disappeared and the rough bark under his fingertips. The hand going through the hole was searching for worms for him to eat...

He slowly opened his eyes and looked down into the dark cell, his eyes traveling down the trail of starlight. "Mother..." He whispered.




Honestly, I don't know what to put next O.o You'll have to wait for the next chapter (which will be later today :D) God, that's a short chapter :X
 
Last edited:
You must log in or register to reply here.
Back
Top