jombii
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It's okay Doctor. I will be checking this saturday night for inactive players. :)
^^oops. Sorry. I read your appearance section and thought you weren't finished yet since you will still be updating the section. Didn't read through the whole SU after that though. :(
Well, in that case, I need you to expand more on your Appearance section. Describe what he looks like in his entirety. It's not enough that I take a look on your avatar, which is highly resembling Brendan, and have him in my mind already. How tall is he? What color are his eyes? Is his hair blonde or black? Does he even have hair? I need to see things like that. Or better yet, draw the entirety of him. :)
@Cayo:
Notes on your SU:
Spoiler:5'9 about 180lbs. Athletic, somewhat short black hair, a muscular build. He likes to stick with athletic clothing. Shorts, plain t-shirts and when it gets cold just a sweatshirt with track pants. Isn't a fan of jeans or khakis as he feels that they restrict movement and prevent him from having more fun with his Pokemon!
Make this sentences. Like "Trick is standing at a height of about 5'9" etc...
Spoiler:He also carries around the usual backpack.
It isn't really required but it would be helpful if you could describe the bagpack.
Also, fixed your spaces in the History. Do this and you're accepted. :)