Map Rating/Review Thread

[Tyrantrum]

@.:God:.: This is the best map I have ever seen from you. ;D
Though there are some tile errors and empty spaces, the shape is really good.
7/10

 

[.:God:.]

Hey Wind~, can you tell me where the tile errors are?

 

[Tyrantrum]

 

[Geeked]

ZOMG, Wind, did you start another hack or is that a map in your new one :p

It's a bit empty, the grass could be replace with a small tree, overall not bad just lacking vegetation, 7.3/10

 

[Tyrantrum]

ZOMG, Wind, did you start another hack or is that a map in your new one :p

It's a bit empty, the grass could be replace with a small tree, overall not bad just lacking vegetation, 7.3/10

Nope..just a random map. =P
If I mapped for my new hack, I would've mentioned it. xD

Though, I didn't want to add too much vegetation, because it might be over-crowed. xD
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EDIT: I fixed it up a bit. ;D

 

[WindBlows]

Map Name: Snow Route A

Map Game: Pokémon Heroes

Comments: NOTE: The route is closed from the bottom part cause the trees will be opened with an event.

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[Thrace]

Ok, a new map! Route 1...

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Rating: 7/10
Comments: Looks really good, the small hill, albeit unnecessary, definitely adds something to the map. The shape of the map is good as well. The random placement of trees might be awkward for people playing it. Whats with the random grass placement? Grass grows in clumps doesn't it? The ledges don't really have a purpose.
Suggestions: Arrange the grass in clumps. Make a path where there is no grass so that the ledges have a reason for being there. Re arrange the trees.

Map name: Rosewood Town
Codebase: Pokémon FireRed

Description:
A beautiful Town located on the coast of southern FALNA. It is well known for having some of the most beautiful sunsets in the entire Region, so it is visited quite often by tourists. Professor Zack's lab is located here. He gives new trainers their starter pokemon much like that of his once mentor Professor Oak.

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Comment:
I'm open to any constructive criticsm. And regarding that description, I couldn't resist and let my imagination work. This is the result :P

Rating: 5.5/10
Reasons: Its decent. Some rather nice paths. Interesting shape but way too empty. The houses have roofs that are too big. Nice shape of the beach though.
Suggestions: Fix the tile errors, add more trees, fix house shape, use a combination of ground tiles make the land bit a bigger.

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Rating: 8.5/10
Reasons: Looks really nice, Wind~. The different levels are arranged really nicely. The path looks a little weird though, why is there grass in the town? Bad use of bushes and small trees.
Suggestions: Don't really have any except fixing the stuff in the reasons.

Map Name: Snow Route A

Map Game: Pokémon Heroes

Comments: NOTE: The route is closed from the bottom part cause the trees will be opened with an event.

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Rating: 4/10
Reasons: That would be a pain to play through. Why not make the grass grow in clumps? Would look a lot better imo. Always try to use more than one stair horizontally, if you only have one it looks weird. The cave on top of the mountain is too small.
Suggestions: Once again just fix up the reasons. Maybe make a bit more space to walk around in as well.

 

[Satoshi Sugimori]

Map name: Rosewood Town
Codebase: Pokémon FireRed

Description:
A beautiful Town located on the coast of southern FALNA. It is well known for having some of the most beautiful sunsets in the entire Region, so it is visited quite often by tourists. Professor Zack's lab is located here. He gives new trainers their starter pokemon much like that of his once mentor Professor Oak.

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Comment:
I'm open to any constructive criticsm. And regarding that description, I couldn't resist and let my imagination work. This is the result :P

Looks nice.. Only a few tile errors at the water edge the rocks are the wrong ones but I really like it :) I rate it an 9.2/10

Nope..just a random map. =P
If I mapped for my new hack, I would've mentioned it. xD

Though, I didn't want to add too much vegetation, because it might be over-crowed. xD
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EDIT: I fixed it up a bit. ;D

Very nice Wind~ Don't have any real comments on it XD Rate it an 9.8/10 almost a perfect score :O ;)

Map Name: Snow Route A

Map Game: Pokémon Heroes

Comments: NOTE: The route is closed from the bottom part cause the trees will be opened with an event.

Mapshot:

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The trees are too blocky and a bit a waste of not using the whole map but the way you made it to go trough is pretty nice I rate this an 7.8/10

 

[Ninja Caterpie]

Ok, I made the grass a little more clumpy, although it's sorta not my style. Now you can actually get through the route from the top without walking through grass. :D

 

[Disturbed]

Here goes...

Map name: Rosewood Town
Codebase: Pokémon FireRed

Description:
A beautiful Town located on the coast of southern FALNA. It is well known for having some of the most beautiful sunsets in the entire Region, so it is visited quite often by tourists. Professor Zack's lab is located here. He gives new trainers their starter pokemon much like that of his once mentor Professor Oak.

Mapshot:


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Comment:
I'm open to any constructive criticsm. And regarding that description, I couldn't resist and let my imagination work. This is the result :P

Rating: 3/10
Reason: Although this is probably your best map, there is far too many tile errors. The shape of the cliff needs more "funk" and has tile errors going all across the water. Which is a incredibly easy fix (use a block edit). The house soley on the beach has a tile error (bottom left.) There is no point in the fence on the lower level. There is alot of empty space, and not enough flowers. Everything seems too evenly lined up. But this is still your best map :P

Nope..just a random map. =P
If I mapped for my new hack, I would've mentioned it. xD

Though, I didn't want to add too much vegetation, because it might be over-crowed. xD
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EDIT: I fixed it up a bit. ;D

Rating: 7.5/10
Reason: I don't see any tile errors, so that is good. But you will be able to see the cliffs going into the border on the right. I believe the vegitation is a little too full. (Don't listen to Xray :P) Maybe 2 less flowers, and 4 less bushes would work. Great work though.

WAIT: Do my eyes deceive me? 2 of your flowers have different shapes then the others. Hah, that is a great subtle addition.

7.8/10 now!

Map Name: Snow Route A

Map Game: Pokémon Heroes

Comments: NOTE: The route is closed from the bottom part cause the trees will be opened with an event.

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Rating: 6/10
Reason: You could of given the mountain more shape, along with all the cliffs. I love the shape of the trees though. Nice flow to them. I Don't really like how the bridge was used though. Also, no tile errors. So that is good. Nice job

Ok, I made the grass a little more clumpy, although it's sorta not my style. Now you can actually get through the route from the top without walking through grass. :D

Rating: 6/10
Reason: I spot 2 tile errors :\ The ledge at the top can be shortened, but the grass is placed nicely. Maybe add a few more flowers.



And now I'm done!

 

[.:God:.]

Map name: Rosewood Town
Codebase: Pokémon FireRed

Description: Due to complaints of citizens in neighboring cities, the house' size had to minimized as it was blocking the beach view. Due to complaints of citizens IN Rosewood Town, they said it was too empty. Therefore, more trees and flowers were planted.

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Comment:
I'm open to any constructive criticsm. And regarding that description, I couldn't resist and let my imagination work. This is the result :P

 

[Darthatron]

Map name: Rosewood Town
Codebase: Pokémon FireRed

Description: Due to complaints of citizens in neighboring cities, the house' size had to minimized as it was blocking the beach view. Due to complaints of citizens IN Rosewood Town, they said it was too empty. Therefore, more trees and flowers were planted.

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Comment:
I'm open to any constructive criticsm. And regarding that description, I couldn't resist and let my imagination work. This is the result :P

You appear to be missing a part of one of the trees. And it still seems a little too empty. I give it a 5/10, for effort.

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Now, I have two maps. Please rate them and tell me how to make them better. ^^

Credits to X-Buster for his Super D/P Rom Base.

Name: Timber Grotto
Info: This is where your mother lives.
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Name: Route 1
Info: Connects to the above map. It's meant to be very grassy.
Picture:

 

[Tyrantrum]

Map 1: Okay, the pond looks weird, and it's kind of empty. =\
And I'm guessing the grass is supposed to be there? O_O
5/10

Map 2: Okay, the shape is okay again, and the pond is slightly better. Though..is it supposed to be THAT easy to get through? Because you can go through the entire route without stepping on a single tile of grass. =\
5.7/10

Work on the shape of the ponds, and emptiness. xD

 

[Disturbed]

Map name: Rosewood Town
Codebase: Pokémon FireRed

Description: Due to complaints of citizens in neighboring cities, the house' size had to minimized as it was blocking the beach view. Due to complaints of citizens IN Rosewood Town, they said it was too empty. Therefore, more trees and flowers were planted.

Mapshot:


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Comment:
I'm open to any constructive criticsm. And regarding that description, I couldn't resist and let my imagination work. This is the result :P

It is an improvement, but you are missing a tree, as stated by Darthatron.
5/10 (Still empty)

You appear to be missing a part of one of the trees. And it still seems a little too empty. I give it a 5/10, for effort.

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Now, I have two maps. Please rate them and tell me how to make them better. ^^

Credits to X-Buster for his Super D/P Rom Base.

Name: Timber Grotto
Info: This is where your mother lives.
Picture:


Name: Route 1
Info: Connects to the above map. It's meant to be very grassy.
Picture:

MAP ONE: I think there might be a bit too many flowers, and too much empty space. Scatter the tall grass some more?
6/10

MAP TWO: Not bad, but I think it'd be better if the water had more shape >.>
I know you said there is supposed to be alot of grass, but maybe just pull some out, and add some trees.
7/10

 

[.:God:.]

Map name: Rosewood Town
Codebase: Pokémon FireRed

Description: Complaints from Rosewood Town villagers have forced Falna Region government to plant more foliage.

Mapshot:


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Comment:
I'm open to any constructive criticsm. And regarding that description, I couldn't resist and let my imagination work. This is the result :P

 

[Disturbed]

Okay, now posting my top 5 maps in my *cough*humble *cough* opinion. So enjoy and please rate! Also, you may have seen some of these before... too bad for you ^_^
:D

Map one: Some random requested map or something ><
Comments: None

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Map two: Unknown Forest (literally)
Comments: hmm, Connection only at bottom right, and all the borders work, thank you very much!

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Map 3: Some random requested Academy
Comments: Secret exits, all borders properly work, so don't call me off on them. (Most of them are connections anyways) Also, there is a reason the beach is kinda empty.

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Map IV: Dirtbeat mountain
Comments: Um, well... I'm aware of some emptyness, but can't be full everywhere!

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Map V: Rocket Town (requested)
Comments: none

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Well, thats all for now.

 

[Makorin]

hey peepz
ive got a map tht seems good 2 me but i wanna c wat the community thinks
(see attachment)
Comments: um will its a cave and im not the best with caves but i wanted some practice so i did some and did this map...
thnx

 

[Surf]

hey peepz
ive got a map tht seems good 2 me but i wanna c wat the community thinks
(see attachment)
Comments: um will its a cave and im not the best with caves but i wanted some practice so i did some and did this map...
thnx

i like it 's i'll give it a 7 because i think it's a bit empty

 

[Golden Shaymin]

I don't really have a name for it but I thought that I want to take a break from mapping on snow and have a go at grass

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[Hiche..]

I don't really have a name for it but I thought that I want to take a break from mapping on snow and have a go at grass

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Not a bad map for sure.
You placed the paths in a great way.
There are many empty spaces.
There is a tile error in the path though.
Rating: 8/10