Cirrus

Actually, the theft was unintentional, crazy as it sounds. I have adopted Blados as a second name for my characters ever since I browsed some Dark Dawn forums.. as for Isaac, I've always wanted to name one of them Isaac. xD But I'll try to find another second name, if you want it changed. I'm just having trouble finding a name that doesn't sound so 21st century.

Alright, I wasn't aiming for all-powerful like, just important. But yeah simply mercantile will work, too.. lol

Wow...this actually fits much more than I could have hoped for. Thanks. I appreciate it, and the background info as well!

I noticed in your 'location' section is written Eleusis. I like the word, and I was wondering if I might be able to steal borrow it for something RP-related. I promise it is nothing malicious.

Yes, yes - I'm quite the name stealer. xD I haven't played the DS one, though.

Isaac's parents have broken connections with his uncle. That's why it was so easy for the merchants to kill him. The reason to why they are distant, I was hoping I could include something like a "side quest" about Isaac, if the flow of the RP allowed it.

I could edit that part so his family is merely a rich one, if there's any particular problem?

Thank you for the Arianne being female. Otherwise Crea was going to be... well, it's hard to be a teenaged girl amidst a group of older men. T.T

Well, I assume, anyways.

Alright.. I still see no problem with it, lol.

I'll see into editing my post right away.

I see nothing wrong with the formation of my SU, really.. lol Maybe it's just your bandwidth? As for the spelling mistakes, I think more than I type. Hope that's understandable, as I've no spell check. xD I'll fix 'em, though

Hm. What kind of light swords exist, then?

Last line should explain it now.

Add lines in between paragraphs, and try not to leave lines stranded by themselves on the page (corroborate them into larger paragraphs). This will help readability. I spot a few spelling mistakes (or maybe just one, I dunno) so fix those too!

Also katanas don't exist, unfortunately. ; o

Hmm... your character needs some motivation. Why would he join a band of mercenaries? He seems more likely to work by himself.

I have literally no idea what you're talking about. Just tell me how to fix it. xD

So you're actually greek? ;B

Well the thing is I, umm.. kinda started writing about a character with a similar personality to the muse. xD; Maybe you'd like to have a look at it? I can write something else, though, I have something in mind.

I'll do my best. Your RP looks so pro. xD

Eleusis? As in, Ελευσίνα? ;D

Is there another spot in your RP, by the way? I see Arianne's legend open, but I'm not sure if I HAD to choose a legend or not.

What's an Rper if they're not dedicated?

On the case of being a consultant, I'd be delighted. Even though my character won't be as important as the others, I think she'll be the least bit cardinal in some ways. I won't be inactive too much, if at all. ('ve actually been surprisingly good at dividing up my time as of late...)

Either way, I'm glad that you did decide to accept me, even in the way you did.

I understand where you are going with this. Ultimately, I'll be fine with whatever choice you make.

Anyways in an attempt to at least make myself a little bit happier with what you decide, I revamped the whole thing a little more. I deleted some of the things that were a bit repetitive in the writing and switched out many for synonyms that wouldn't harm it to much. I added a bit more to the sample (again) and made sure that it flowed well in most cases.

I'd say probably 30 years after FSN, 40 after FZ. Emiya Kiritsugu had any sequential wars rigged to be terminated after Heaven's Feel 4 (though Heaven's Feel 5 took place earlier than expected, thus undermining his plans). So, if Heaven's Feel 6 were to take place, I'm sure 40 years is enough time for the dynamite Kuritsugu laid to have diffused. Since the Grail is technically "gone" anyways, it probably wouldn't even trigger that system. And since the Magecraft Association opposed the Fuyuki Grail and had it dismantled, it'll be more of a "SURPRISE SUCKERS" when it actually goes down. XD

So I was thinking the best way to go about it might be to hold a Heaven's Feel 6 that takes place a few decades after the end of the true end of Heaven's Feel. Since it's implied there would be no more Grail Wars after, it'd give at least an interesting scenario where the Masters have no preparation or overall awareness of the war before it happens. As for the reason for a new Heaven's Feel, I'm thinking of weaving it into my antagonist's backstory.

I'll see what I can do!

OH DEARIE. I completely missed that when I first looked. Well, then I again, I was in school at the time and was quickly skimming since I had to get back to my project. XD;

Well thank you so much for the acceptance! I look forward to RPing in this. :3

That's not true... fate/extra is "HOLY GRAIL WAR IN THE CYBER WORLD OMG". XD
Thanks for the list, I'll give it a read through. The problem with Caster is thinking up a Master character that isn't completely useless in contrast to their Servant, so I'm looking at a unique way to spin that, too. Then again, how necessary a useful Master is would really depend on the participants in the war. I'll mull over some ideas, anyways.

Yeah, I really want to do a Caster, which is difficult since I'm not familiar with two many legends involving those practicing witchcraft (though, looking at Rider and Caster in FSN, it might not matter). I was looking at the likes of Circe or Hecate from Greek Mythology, but I want to look a little more.

Is there anything in particular you'd like to see from the plot? I'm trying to figure out a way of doing the RP without the plot just being "lolHOLY GRAIL WAR!!!!!111" v.v;

Did you have any ideas for characters you'd use in a FSN RP? I'm thinking about just making it a close-knit RP between a few people with a little more planning than normal.

Oh? I was waiting for some kind official post saying I got accepted but whatevers. X3;

Okey-dokey! It's stash that away in my mind for future reference. Unless you wish me to revisit my SU once more? I'm still in for RP'ing, don't worry. :3