colours

Because gender changes are amazing.

Okay-ish works XD And I did leave :p but came back. Again. XD

I just woke up from my night's sleep~

I uploaded the poem yo.

No he didn't, Alex killed himself. XD

The sky is up :3 And I'm on PC again~ How are you doing these days?

Hello.
...
*hugs*

I've got my mojo back. I'm writing again.
I'll review your work tonight and I shall be donating tomorrow. I'll discuss how much on MSN later.
Talk to when you get on!

I'm on your profile, stalking.

well I figured the lack of emotes was a tip off. :(

I was being sarcastic :(

no, I have absolutely no clue

Oh definitely. How've you been lately, anyways?

No, no. It's fine.
I know how school can do that.

Finishing up a hack that will be posted later.
Oh by the way, you mentioned MSN sometime ago, correct?

Hey Cookie, remember me?

All we can do is offer advice. Remember, you give advice to help the person and not yourself. But I know how you mean. It'll be nice if we see her improve, so hopefully she'll listen to some more cronstructive comments and implement them into her poetry in the future.


That's why you dont tell them how to write, you should just direct them in a proffesional point if you know where I'm coming from. For example. if someone were to write about "Love" you couldn't say "hey, no this is not a good theme and it doesn't work and I dont like it because... etc." but you can however comment on such things as flow, language, dailogue, technique and such.


Welcome to the life of a critic. You see, some people have the mentality that when someone has reviewed their poetry, they think "I did not ask you to that you didn't have the permission". Rather they prefer "Wow this poem is amazing it really spoke to me I love it!" poetry isn't like that. I hate those comments as poetry has depth, and so should it's replies.


Well, now I dont mean to be harsh, but this is the truth; those who do not accpet constructive crit. cannot be called artists in any shape or form. As a writer you want to imprve and get better, you can only do that by learning, and through reading reviews you improve!

you edible delight you >:C

Your omnipresent sense of affection doesn't dazzle me u_u

And shush. I already know that.

FINE YOU UGLY SON OF A BAG V_V"

You'll do fine with all of it babe. Dun't worry.