Recent content by Radish

Oh I get what you guys are trying to say. I totally didn't understand what was going on. You guys don't realize that there are spaces inbetween all sentences. The only thing i didn't do was double space between paragraphs. I don't see that all that often in many of the novels i read so i...

I hope i take negative comments as well as you do in the future :)

Well i know it might be kind of confusing but thats the way i intended the story to be. I'm introducing things as they become relevant. You don't actually know who's talking until the characters are introduced. Later on when your introduced to their names and learn more about them I explain...

my critique of your prologue is that it's too short near the end it seems like you were rushing to get your ideas down and the prologue seems to be a skeleton of what it could be. The plot is there but your insight into the reactions of the president and the tension in the room at the time of...

I'm posting it in sections. This is just the intro to the story the chapter signifies a new development or a change in location I would use seperation but forums don't allow me to use tabs to signify a new paragraph Edit: How does it look now?

If anyone could please help me im probably being a complete noob but i have been trying to catch caterpie for AGES! I have been fighting level 4 pokemon at route 204 forever and i still haven't run into one. Is there something special i have to do to enable migration? I already have firered...

The Sother Region: Sludge Stains Contents: Section 1: The Theft Section 2: Hitting the Trail Section 3: A Sludge Stain on the V Section 4: Struggling with Forgiveness Section 5: Friendship Section 1: The Theft Chapter 1 “Hit him with your poison sting!...” “Oh man I...

new fanfic writer Hi all out of shot of creative thinking i began writing a fanfic which is going to end up creating a new region in the pokemon world. The story centers around characters loosely based upon reallife people i know and situtions we have dealt with along with adventures we have...

I know this thread has gone a lil off topic i just felt like adding my opinion Fan fiction artists should expect to not get any recognition We should be making fan fiction because we enjoy it as a fans not because people should necessarily praise it for using our fan-boyish knowledge to create...

I Don't think pokemon should come to an end i think it should reinvent itself. We need a new storyline to be pulled into. There are already so many pokemon whats the point of making more? I mean the pokemon world is so humongous. I liked gold and silver because of the way they started the...

I think this should be corrected pokemon isn't dying out the tv series is... I mean i totally lost interest in pokemon the show around season 5 and i missed everything else up to season 10 and i tuned in and oh look brock is still there... no misty.. ash is still main character... and guess...

remember everyone mew's not under the truck oldest lie in the book lol

I gotta say chimchar was the best choice for me I mean honestly how can you go wrong with flaming monkey? and it learns fighting moves~! EH! SWEET!@ you guys have to agree with me on that a flaming monkey is way cooler than a penguin and a plant turtle. not saying its more powerful its just...

yes of course forum rules i browsed through it most of it's pretty standard this place is a lot more lax and a lot less flaming goes on than a lot of forums ive been on. but i haven't been here that long so i duno

I recently stumbled upon this site after an urge to relive my childhood and play a game i haven't played since i stopped it way back in grade 7. I've been trying out the shiny gold hack of firered on this site. I didn't know there were such huge pokemon forum communities.