Those are common sense. If you write badly, then you're going to be called a troll. If you're not constructive, you're flaming.
It's not deviantART. That'd be retarded of me to even suggest that. But to my credit, there are several other writers there and all have worked on song-writing, poetry, newspapers, articles, and more. Just because the community as a whole focuses more on visual art doesn't mean that the written work doesn't get attention. I fixed most of my problems going there.
They weren't just missing. I invoked frustration and curiosity, just as I wanted. You'll note that nearly the entire thing is Blue's thoughts, and the narrative caters to his thoughts. It all works together to make the reader feel as Blue was. I wouldn't call that accidental.
I never said it was the "reader's fault" alone. I agreed that certain parts were worded badly, but overall there was misinterpretation on your end on things that weren't worded badly and otherwise clear. I suppose I don't consider you an equal anymore, mostly because of your refusal to admit your own fault and the little gaggle of harpies you, Astinus, and Mika comprise of, but you're still good at what you do so I respect that. It's unfortunate that you're writing me off due to presumed assumptions on my end, which, as you put it, is ironic because I've made no assumptions. It's like when Mika got "offended" because I made the logical conclusion she was ignoring me. It's utterly ludicrous.
In any case, if you want to discontinue talking, that's fine. You've shown you're not a very constructive person, and most of your comments are bloated with ego. I don't like dealing with someone like you. Arrogance disgusts me.