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[HotM June] Pokémon - The Mystery of Celebi [FR Ger]
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May 27th, 2010 (1:43 PM).
As interesting as your story is - it's actually just one big spoiler.
The story should be more of a "vague" summary of what happens, not a list of events one by one or by the time we play it lacks any surprise. The summary should not include minor things such as battles, and smaller events.
A story's purpose here is to get the player interested in playing, not spoiling it before they even get there.
Your title screen is one of the best I've seen, I remember seeing it in the title screens thread a while back.
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