Showcase Hall of Adventures Page 2

Started by Aldo June 1st, 2019 8:55 PM
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Aldo

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Remakes gone better but still wrong:

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Seliph

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Definitely an improvement!

From what I can tell: the forehead in the first one looks very big. Maybe lower the height a little? Also the fist could use some work (but I know: drawing hands is difficult)

The second one looks good for the most part. The thing that sticks out is the hair. It could use a little more detail especially as everything else feels a lot more detailed in comparison.

Aldo

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Thanks~ I'll try your suggestions