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Cause you think that arrogancy and vanity are their dreams and goals! At least that's what you wrote...
 
dragoniteuser said:
Cause you think that arrogancy and vanity are their dreams and goals! At least that's what you wrote...
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exactly :D
And ur point is?

oh and not only their dream, its their point in life

p.s. it awfuly rude to call other ppl opinions dumb :/
 
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True, and I apologise for that!
But your last statement kinda works in my favour!
 
Sorry for not posting, school, and other stuff.
@ fire bug type - I actually like that idea. I'm glad we have a new one.
What I'd like Bug and Ice. I don't know if theres already one, but it would be cool.
 
cyan. said:
Sorry for not posting, school, and other stuff.
@ fire bug type - I actually like that idea. I'm glad we have a new one.
What I'd like Bug and Ice. I don't know if theres already one, but it would be cool.
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Bug / Ice would rule. I hoped Kricketot was Bug / Ice when I first saw his silhouette.
 
I can answer this topic......

It's about...Scyther and Scizor!

"In Ilex Forest, there lived a Scyther and a Scizor. They were brothers, and they fought often, Scizor had always been the strongest, even before evolution, and so, no doubt how much he taunted Scyther, telling him to use a Metal Coat to evolve, Scyther would refuse. Now, whilst they battled often, every time the result was the same - Scyther's powerful Slash and X-Scissor attacks would barely affect Scizor, who would promptly obliterate him with Aerial Ace. Even when Scyther learnt Aerial Ace, he couldn't win...and so he left the forest, dejected. He travelled all across Johto, fighting against far more powerful enemies, no matter what their typing, even managing to defeat fire-types...but he knew he couldn't defeat his brother. So, he venture over Mount Silver, nearly losing his wings to frostbite, and eventually arrived at Saffron City. There, he saw a human attempting to teach his pokemon to smash bricks with his fists (little did he know he was outside the fighting dojo). He wanted to learn this ability, but didn't know where to begin. And so, he approached the trainer. Whilst Scyther could understand his speech, the human could not understand Scyther's, however, a female human turned up, using psychic pokemon to easily defeat this man's fighting pokemon. Scyther realised what he needed to do. The next morning, he flew in through the window, retrieved the human, and flew into the building next-door where the woman had come from. She sensed Scyther's intentions, and started ordering her pokemon to attack. One by one, they succumbed to his X-Scissor and Night Slash, although he was on the brink of defeat by an Alakazam, when the brick-smashing human commanded him to use Quick Attack! He obeyed, and the Alakazam fell. As he'd been commanded by a human, the woman gave the man a badge. The man then exited, and he got his Hitmonchan,Lee and Top to teach Scyther Brick Break. Scyther then left, with a feeling of hope that he would be able to stand up to his brother.

Back in Ilex Forest, his brother taunted him endlessly, as he continued to use his old attacks, however, after a long,long battle, stretching through the night, he seized the opportunity to adopt the correct stance, and used Brick Break on Scizor's head! However, Scizor hit him with a Bullet Punch.....neither wanted to give in...Scyther had more willpower, but Scizor had hurt him badly....then...they both nodded to eachother, and collapsed, and Scyther rejoiced, proud he was able to give his all, and give his brother the fight he knew he longed for."

So, wadda ya think? Needs some work, I mean, I typed non-stop for 5 minutes after giving it no previous thought, but I'm happy with it.
 
It's great! Truely amazing story!
 
Amore said:
I can answer this topic......

It's about...Scyther and Scizor!

"In Ilex Forest, there lived a Scyther and a Scizor.........
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Its really good, but you can see that you were rushing it a lil bit, i liked it a lot but i didnt like the ending where they both knocked each out. You probably didnt want it to end in a cliche like they all do, with the main guy wining.
:D
Id make one, but i cant really get anything for htis story, and i need to study geography really bad, i wasted my entire weekend :,( now i need to pay it up by pulling an all nighter.
 
Good luck with that one xD
I always fall asleep.

And yeah, you're right, I didn't want the cliche. If Scyther could learn a fire-type move, I would have him winning....but Brick Break is only normally-effective.....and Scizor's more powerful....so it didn't seem right to have a Scyther winning against a Scizor who was apparently better even as a Scyther.

Btw, nice avvy DragoniteUser
 
It was a good story! Kudos!
 
Nice Story Amore also I don't think I've said welcomed you yet so welcome :)
also Venom is that Paras/Parasect picture hand drawn If so did you draw it if so than awesome job If it is not then I still like it :)
 
Yanmega was the fastest flyer in all of Sinnoh. Everyone knew this and they would be happy for Yanmega, were it not that he was very smug about it. He often challenged other Pokémon to a race, and he won everytime, for about halfway, his Speed Boost would kick in. Thanks to this trump card, he even beat several Ninjasks. Never in his live had he lost, and everyone had to hear it every day.
One day, Yanma was sick of it. He said to Yanmega: "I have had it with your 'Blah blah blah' about you being all that fast. There are more important things in life!" "Are there now, little fella?" Yanmega replied, feigning kindness. But then his expression changed, and he and at the little Yanma he snapped: "I'll have you know that I am the greatest creature Mother Nature has ever made!" The brave little Yanma took a step back, but the sudden explosion of Yanmega did not scare him. "Oh, really now? Would you like to prove it? We are racing from the Survival Area to the Resort Area." "No, we are not", said the Yanmega, "You might hurt yourself!" He started laughing. But Yanma said, smiling: "I'd worry about myself if I were you..." "That does it!" Yanmega yelled, his voice breaking. "I will see you toworrow at sunrise at the Survival Area!"

I hope you guys like my cliffhanger. If not, too bad for you, I need to go to bed. Also, I really like your story, Amore. It's awesome!
 
great story Tkallab so...who won? :) I'm Routing for Yanmega I think he can smoke that young hoodlum :D

also not on topic but how awesome would a Pokemon based on this bug be
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Its a Cold environment Bug. Bug/Ice anyone?
 
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Looks lika an earwig to me... What exactly is it?

You know, a termite Pokémon would also be awesome!
 
All mistakes are fixed. Just a note: I am sorry if I might be quite behind most days. Since I started school TERM 4 today. :\ So obviously I'll have little time to update the thread. Thanks. :) Have fun guys.

PS: Send me some votes people! ;D
 
Well your story is of to a good start! Wonder how's the rest gonna play out!
 
Great story tkallab Amore and Draggy, i liked'em alot.
man 2 pages since i was gone, pheeeeeyouuuuuwww.
I wanna make a story too, ok here goes.
(Before the story starts: i'm a great and imaginative writer, i know im sounding a little braggish there but its true, so i'll try my best, however im not too good at my vocabulary yet so try not to notice that.)
Heracross and Pinsir
Pinsir had nowhere to go, his home had been destroyed by the oncoming army of heracross, and he needed to protect his family at all costs, as the army was heard approaching they fled as fast as they could, "why are the Heracross doing this?",He said.
On the other hand Heracross, was feeling very guilty, he had just destroyed so many trees, which was Pinsir territory, although the emperor Heracross was always right, this just didn't seem.....right.
Heracross slipped away from the rest of the army, who were crawling stealthily up trees, ready too either cut them down or hide in them and take out remaining Pinsir, Heracross knew this wasn't right, regardless of his teachings.
Pinsir used Dig, and opened a borrow, just in time too, because the children were exhausted of running, plus, they barely missed the Heracross army who were passing along the borrow, one of them decided to sit down, and sat ON the borrow, Pinsir quietly ordered all of them too be quite, the Heracross then set off with the rest of the army.
After they were gone, pinsir and his family got out of the borrow, they saw Heracross, Pinsir ordered his children to get back in the borrow, and so they did, "What do you Heracross want?!", Shouted Pinsir.
"I don't know...", said Heracross, "but i want to help you get rid of the army"
Pinsir, new that Heracross were now their enemy, so Pinsir launched a powerfull Brick break that almost knocked out Heracross, but Heracross got back up, "STOOOOOP" he shouted Pinsir looked behind him and saw the Heracross army, ready with Focus blast to knock out both Pinsir, and his Family, "why must we do this?", Asked Heracross "why must we endlessly destroy Pinsir territory?".
"Do you question the emperor!?", asked a Heracross from the army,
"Yeah i do!, and if he's got a problem with that so be it".
"You want to help me?", asked Pinsir to Heracross, yes, i think our teachings were wrong, we shouldn't listen to our emperor, not if we don't want to, and i, for one, do not like the idea of raiding so many Pinsir borrows, and destroying their trees, and with that Pinsir and Heracross fought the Heracross army and rounded up all remaining Pinsir, and defeated the army, and even to this day, one specific family of heracross, live with the pinsir, and Pinsir are always on the lookout, if Heracross were to arise again.....

Ok i admit it could have been better, i was making it up as i went along, and yes it's not really about RIVALRY but hey, i tried.
 
Hey, for 12 year old, this story is pretty darn great! :D
Did you just made it up, or you had the general dea about the story before you started writing?
 
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