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dragoniteuser said:
Hey, for 12 year old, this story is pretty darn great! :D
Did you just made it up, or you had the general dea about the story before you started writing?
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Thanks Draggy.
I had the basic subject of the story planned out yes.
but when i started writing i just made it up as i went along.
 
Curious. said:
To clarify.. sorry. Is there a stroy writing competition? What it the subject?
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No not a competition, just to have fun, and well to show off out creativity! You should write a story too!
 
Yeah these two statements kinda exclude each other...
I would like to remind those that haven't voted to do so, cause the more the members vote, the more fair results we'll have!
 
dragoniteuser said:
Yeah these two statements kinda exclude each other...
I would like to remind those that haven't voted to do so, cause the more the members vote, the more fair results we'll have!
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What do you mean, vote?
do you mean on the "omastar, bug or not" thing.
because i did vote on that.
 
Not omastar, but the crabs, trapinch and vibrava, and paras and parasect.
I'll finish the story when I'm home, I'm at school right now on my iPod, hacked into their network, haha.
 
tkallab said:
Not omastar, but the crabs, trapinch and vibrava, and paras and parasect.
I'll finish the story when I'm home, I'm at school right now on my iPod, hacked into their network, haha.
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wait your at school and your talking to us?
that don't make sense... :\
 
I had fun last night using Head Butt on a bunch of trees til I caught a Lv 8 Pineco in Ilex forest and Lv 4 Heracross in Azela town! Then was training them up!

~My current team in Heart Gold~

Butterfree, Parasect, Pineco, Heracross, Ledian
 
xVenomx said:
I had fun last night using Head Butt on a bunch of trees til I caught a Lv 8 Pineco in Ilex forest and Lv 4 Heracross in Azela town! Then was training them up!

~My current team in Heart Gold~

Butterfree, Parasect, Pineco, Heracross, Ledian
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Awesome stuff! XD
..So that's where you find a heracross! I was wondering where you catch those. :3
 
Curious. said:

Awesome stuff! XD
..So that's where you find a heracross! I was wondering where you catch those. :3
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Yeah Toga - Used a Lot of Head Butts in Azela Town! Found 3 Aipoms (Caught one) and a bunch of Spearows and then finally a Heracross!

I think Toga needed an asprin after he was done head butting! LOL
 
shinysweety said:
cool your hacking but how with a ipod?
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Sorry Sister but i must tell you now.
Please try to make your posts a little longer.
And try to remember your capital letters and full stops.
It's always better if you make neat posts.
This is how i would have written your post:
"Cool, your hacking, but how?, with an ipod?"
I can't say i'm the best at vocabulary, but still, try to make your posts more neat.
 
shinysweety said:
cool your hacking but how with a ipod?
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Well, actually, I just knew the password, but that's a lot less cool, and the word 'hacked' is shorter than 'I knew the password. But let's not get off topic.

Anyway, I'm gonna be finishing my story in a few minutes. (That is, I'm gonna start finishing my story in a few minutes, it'll most likely take fifteen minutes to finish finishing it, haha.)

By the way, Xilfer, if shinysweetie is your sister, can't you just tell her personally? Isn't that easier?
 
tkallab said:
Well, actually, I just knew the password, but that's a lot less cool, and the word 'hacked' is shorter than 'I knew the password. But let's not get off topic.

Anyway, I'm gonna be finishing my story in a few minutes. (That is, I'm gonna start finishing my story in a few minutes, it'll most likely take fifteen minutes to finish finishing it, haha.)

By the way, Xilfer, if shinysweetie is your sister, can't you just tell her personally? Isn't that easier?
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Trust me tkallab, you don't know my sister!
She would NEVER in a million years, listen to me if i told her personally.
She'd just start telling mum that i'm saying mean things.
P.S. Hope your story is good, i can definetely wait 15 minutes, cuz i gotta go help mom.
Cya.
 
Yanmega was the fastest flyer in all of Sinnoh. Everyone knew this and they would be happy for Yanmega, were it not that he was very smug about it. He often challenged other Pokémon to a race, and he won everytime, for about halfway, his Speed Boost would kick in. Thanks to this trump card, he even beat several Ninjasks. Never in his live had he lost, and everyone had to hear it every day.
One day, Yanma was sick of it. He said to Yanmega: "I have had it with your 'Blah blah blah' about you being all that fast. There are more important things in life!" "Are there now, little fella?" Yanmega replied, feigning kindness. But then his expression changed, and he and at the little Yanma he snapped: "I'll have you know that I am the greatest creature Mother Nature has ever made!" The brave little Yanma took a step back, but the sudden explosion of Yanmega did not scare him. "Oh, really now? Would you like to prove it? We are racing from the Survival Area to the Resort Area." "No, we are not", said the Yanmega, "You might hurt yourself!" He started laughing. But Yanma said, smiling: "I'd worry about myself if I were you..." "That does it!" Yanmega yelled, his voice breaking. "I will see you toworrow at sunrise at the Survival Area!"

At sundawn, the next day, the two dragonflies stood at ready. Yanma looked at Yanmega, but he raised his head, his eyes closed, as if Yanma was not worth looking at. The little Yanma sighed and pointed his view at the Kricketune in front of him and his opponent. When he knew both contestants were paying attention, the Kricketune started counting down from three. Then he shouted 'Go!' and the two winged bugs took off.
Yanmega speeded over the water, evading rocks pointing out of the water surface. Every now and then he looked behind him, and everytime, he was surprised to find Yanma almost being able to touch his tail. This continued until route 228 came in sight. Yanmega knew that Speed Boost would kick in soon, and that the difference in speed between him and that little brat would become bigger and bigger. Happy about this fact, he started accelerating. Looking behind him, he realised that Yanma was now further behind him than he had predicted him to be at this point in the race. Even happier about this, he continued into the desert, not suspecting a thing.

Sorry, y'all, another cliffhanger. I need to think how I'm gonna write the next part. Do you like it?
 
tkallab said:
Yanmega was the fastest flyer in all of Sinnoh. Everyone knew this and they would be happy for Yanmega, were it not that he was very smug about it. He often challenged other Pokémon to a race, and he won everytime, for about halfway, his Speed Boost would kick in. Thanks to this trump card, he even beat several Ninjasks. Never in his live had he lost, and everyone had to hear it every day.
One day, Yanma was sick of it. He said to Yanmega: "I have had it with your 'Blah blah blah' about you being all that fast. There are more important things in life!" "Are there now, little fella?" Yanmega replied, feigning kindness. But then his expression changed, and he and at the little Yanma he snapped: "I'll have you know that I am the greatest creature Mother Nature has ever made!" The brave little Yanma took a step back, but the sudden explosion of Yanmega did not scare him. "Oh, really now? Would you like to prove it? We are racing from the Survival Area to the Resort Area." "No, we are not", said the Yanmega, "You might hurt yourself!" He started laughing. But Yanma said, smiling: "I'd worry about myself if I were you..." "That does it!" Yanmega yelled, his voice breaking. "I will see you toworrow at sunrise at the Survival Area!"

At sundawn, the next day, the two dragonflies stood at ready. Yanma looked at Yanmega, but he raised his head, his eyes closed, as if Yanma was not worth looking at. The little Yanma sighed and pointed his view at the Kricketune in front of him and his opponent. When he knew both contestants were paying attention, the Kricketune started counting down from three. Then he shouted 'Go!' and the two winged bugs took off.
Yanmega speeded over the water, evading rocks pointing out of the water surface. Every now and then he looked behind him, and everytime, he was surprised to find Yanma almost being able to touch his tail. This continued until route 228 came in sight. Yanmega knew that Speed Boost would kick in soon, and that the difference in speed between him and that little brat would become bigger and bigger. Happy about this fact, he started accelerating. Looking behind him, he realised that Yanma was now further behind him than he had predicted him to be at this point in the race. Even happier about this, he continued into the desert, not suspecting a thing.

Sorry, y'all, another cliffhanger. I need to think how I'm gonna write the next part. Do you like it?
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Yeah, i like it!
I like the way you do cliffhangers all the time, thats how all the great writers do it, TO BE CONTINUED.....oooooooooooohhhhhhhh"cough"ooooooooh, that kind of stuff.
 
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o.o i just read on the first(or the second) post that i will get a prize for winning the draw-off xD is that true?
 
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