dragoniteuser
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Well Gentle, Careful, Timid and Hasty comes to my mind first....
I just had the best idea ever!
Write a song / poem / prose about Bug Pokémon.
Well, rather not prose, because it tends to become quite long very easily.
I love it shinysweety!
I though it was really smart and funny! :)
I think the rythm's a bit off... The first two lines of Twinkle Twinkle Little Star have fourteen syllables together, while your first line (which corresponds with the first two lines of the original song) has only thirteen. And after a while, it just gets plain confusing when you stop going to the next line after you finished your line.
I'm quite critical about songs, being a singer-songwriter. Don't take it personally.
Evolves from Weedle
Then it's Kakuna
It's got a needle,
A forest kahuna.
A poison sting
It's got a pair
A fast wing
Moves through air!
How do you guys like my poem about Beedril?