FireRed hack: Pokemon Orange Sands......

[Binary]

Pokemon Orange Sands
The site
-by Forgotten Memory
Hack
of-

Introduction

What the? are you serious?...Yes iam and here comes my first hack ever! Pokemon Orange Sands! Well i hope your all going to enjoy this one. This is my first hack so..do wish me the best!

Story

Your dad is a famous scientist who has just been called by his friend in small islands which were recently discovered by scientists. Therefore you have to go on vacation...isnt that great? It is said that the island holds a special
secret within it. You and your brother are really keen to have pokemon and their dream is just about to come true......

Features

-New islands to explore!
-new OW
-D/P pokemon...probably
-New gyms and rivals..
more.......

Process

Mapping:

Scripting:

Other:

Team

me-leader, mapping, spriting, OW editing, pallete editing
Kristian-Scripting and some mapping
Vavavoom-some mapping
Forgotten Memory(DP Master 92)-mapping and pallete editing
EsMaS-Spriter
If you want to help, pm me!

Screens

Spoiler:

Nice house dude

yes theres a glitch on this one

more coming soon....

Beta centre

Pre-Alpha-70% complete

Credits

zel & DJG-for their wonderful mapping help and advice
Crashlink-rom base
Kristian- for helping me with this thing!
Esmas- sprite
Okami-baby lapras sprite
Teh_Blaziken-storyline help and ideas
Coronis & Serebii- Neo TR sprite pics

Banners

Could someone make some?

-by kristian

by me

by me

by me
click on copy link location!
Thanks everyone!

 

[Rekkage]

Looking good!
I'm no expert hacker, but I like what I see so far ^^
Do you need any help with spriting? 'Cos I used to do it all the time, and although I'm a little rusty, I'd love to help :3

Oh, and I'm pretty sure I can make you a banner - is there any specific pokemon you want on it?

 

[Zeikku™]

it looks ok so far, keep it up!

 

[destinedjagold]

hey there CelebiXD. I'm glad ya joined the fun in hacking! Good for you! I feel happy!

The story is kinda hanging.., but oh well... The two-storey house has a tile error there.., but oh well...

The hack's going great so far. Keep it up and wishing for the best!

As always.., DJG...

 

[cooley]

Wow, this looks better than I thought...Good luck, Awesome features.
If you need help, I'm always here....

If the color hurts your eyes, then highlight it...xD

 

[Midnight Beat]

This looks really good, you have a workable story. But honestly, and I say this with the utmost respect, what else is there? You seem to have a firm grasp on tile editing as well as pallete editing, but how far have you come on the scripting part? Another thing, what features do you plan on putting in this hack? And by features, I mean little things that will set your hack apart from the rest.
~Best of luck

 

[Saurav]

The screenshots looks great and really change that yellow font color, you expect anyone to read it fully? <_<

 

[Ripper]

Aghhh! The yellow burns!

It's great to see someone starting a new hack. What's not great is that you've made a mistake in the script you've made. 'I' should always be a capital. Please check your grammar and spelling before creating scripts as IMO hacks are very annoying to play if you can constantly spot errors in the scripts.

The maps are looking alright (apart from the afformentioned error). I would be happy to help you with mapping as that it my specialty.

The story also seems alright. Are you intending to keep the badge system?

 

[Binary]

Thanks for the wonderful comments!

Looking good!
I'm no expert hacker, but I like what I see so far ^^
Do you need any help with spriting? 'Cos I used to do it all the time, and although I'm a little rusty, I'd love to help :3

Oh, and I'm pretty sure I can make you a banner - is there any specific pokemon you want on it?

Yes thank you for your kind concern....
I would like a tropious on it if you could make it.

Aghhh! The yellow burns!

It's great to see someone starting a new hack. What's not great is that you've made a mistake in the script you've made. 'I' should always be a capital. Please check your grammar and spelling before creating scripts as IMO hacks are very annoying to play if you can constantly spot errors in the scripts.

The maps are looking alright (apart from the afformentioned error). I would be happy to help you with mapping as that it my specialty.

The story also seems alright. Are you intending to keep the badge system?

First of all...
I know the color sucks and as all of you have requested it...*goes to change color* now how's this?
Yes i noticed the grammer mistake..silly me :D
Yes i hope to keep the badge system since when you recieved a package from your dads friend he tells you to explore the islands
for him.

BTW People!
Ive made 2 maps..
and some new screens are coming soon!

~Celebi
-EDITED-
Update!!
Screens: (Yes i know there is a mapping error, i can't fix it however, any help?)

It is a script..yes i know there is a mapping error which iam trying to fix but iam unsuccessful so could someone help me?

 

[destinedjagold]

The mapping error is easy to fix. You just have to look closely at the tiles. Anyways, there's a wrong spelt word there. "KAY recive a POKEMON!"..? It should be 'receive' or 'received'.., but no matter, I kinda like the colors of the grass, though, keep it up! ;)

 

[PB.]

It looks good, i like the fact that there is a brother in it, its nice to introduce the characters family in it.

 

[Saurav]

By the way, what are the starters pokemons?

 

[Νιτραμ]

You mean that pink girl sprite standing under/on the fence. Change her people number to anything but 1 and those which you are already using. You can do it via AdvanceMap, events section of editor.

 

[Shiny]

Nice work, keep up the good work & you can go far

 

[Binary]

You mean that pink girl sprite standing under/on the fence. Change her people number to anything but 1 and those which you are already using. You can do it via AdvanceMap, events section of editor.

yes theres a girl standing on the fence *oh...crap!*
I try to place the girl somewhere else but the girl remains in that area:(

The mapping error is easy to fix. You just have to look closely at the tiles. Anyways, there's a wrong spelt word there. "KAY recive a POKEMON!"..? It should be 'receive' or 'received'.., but no matter, I kinda like the colors of the grass, though, keep it up! ;)

I know its easy for you to say, but something is wrong with my rom,
im not able to edit it! *oh..crap!* and thanks for notifying me with the grammer mistake
BTW at the moment, im trying to fix bugs!
some more screens soon.....
And im gonna change my rom...
BTW anyone wanting to help me please pm me because im busy these days.

~Celebi

 

[Necrono]

Looks good Celebi. What are the Pokemon that will be in the hack? To be honest, I don't really like made-up Pokemons, but hey, that's your hack! :)

I like the fact that his family members are here(like in Carter's hack) too. It's a bit irritating that the father has been missing in all/most Pokemon games.

 

[destinedjagold]

just a random question,
how do you post screenshots?
im trying to post my hack but i cant figure it out

wanna know something..?

Spoiler:

your post is a spam

Btw Celebi, I do think those errors are easy to fix, however, it's a FireRed hack, so maybe Ruby and FR are different. Oh well... I'm sure you'll find a way.

Also, I just noticed now,

Spoiler:

why am I in the credits..? I really never did anything as of now, I guess...

Spoiler:

if you mean in the Map Rating thread, well...

Oh well.., it won't do harm, I guess...

I wish you the best of luck and keep it up as always! ;)

 

[Uchiha20XX]

The sprites look a little rushed.

 

[Shiny]

Just a word, make sure the punctuation is perfect, other than that it seems all good

 

[Islander Jon]

Lookin' good. I'm a little new at this, but some people think those "i"s are pet peeves of theirs.