A Pokemon Journey!

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"Drew! That was very rude! Though quite funny!" I said giving him a high five.
I looked over to Liane and said, "Sorry, but it was funny! Don't blame me!"
 
I grabbed my three pokeballs, clipped them onto my bag and took a deep breath.
"You." I said in a dangerous voice "Are. THE. MOST. SICKENING PERSON I HAVE EVER MET!!!" I finished yelling at Drew, and throwing and empty, enlarged pokeball at his head.
putting my hands on my hips cockily, I glared at the people in the pokemon center who were now staring.
As a little boy, who was obviously a starting trainer, started to laugh, before anyone else could start,
"WHO ASKED YOU?!" I yelled at the boy who immediatly shut up, as I stormed out of the pokemon center.
 
"Oh crumbs..." I muttered under my breath as I watched her go. The sliding doors slammed behind her and everyone was silent during her departure.
I turned away from Drew, and Ash slightly angry myself.
"Why did you have to tease her?" I asked angrily with my back to them.
"What do you know? You wern't even here!" one of them replied.
I glanced round at them "Yeah, but I can guess the sort of thing you two would say to her!" I shouted at them.
With that I stormed outside to search for Liane. I had only gone a few steps before I noticed Liane ahead of me.
"Liane!" I shouted running after her "LIANE!"
I ran up behind her and came to a stop.
"Liane...whatever they said, they don't really mean it...they're just silly idiots...that's all..." I mumbled out.
 
I sighed and closed my eyes.
"I don't know...I'm just really mad right now...I don't know why." I said shaking my head "I'm not mad at any of you...and I know Drew was just kidding...but..."
I really didn't know...why I was being so touchy...
"Well..." I said turning around and smiling "Nevermind. I guess we all go through these days that nothings seems to go right huh?"
"I think I'm going to go get something to eat," I said waving slightly"Thanks for caring, and tell Ash thanks for being concerned if I was mad at him or not and tell Drew I'm sorry for being so dramatic!"
I walked off to a nearby restrurant and sat down.
Maybe a drink will clear my mind I thought to myself as I ordered a glass of water.
Or maybe it'll give me too much time to think...No! I'm being a pessimist! I'm supposed to be the optimist! I scolded.
Whatever... I thought I think I'll just wait until tomorrow...Maybe I won't be so depressed then.
 
I walked back into the Pokemon Center and confronted Ash and Drew.
"She says she's fine..." I told them looking at the floor "...And that she's thankful you were concerned Ash, and she understands you were just joking...Drew..."
I looked outside as the sun set lower. I realised it must be late evening by now.
"We really need somewhere to stay the night. Could you two do me a favour and find us all somewhere to stay the night please?" I asked them slowly "I...just want to check on Liane..."
I left Drew and Ash and headed back toward where I had spoke to Liane. The late evening sun created a shadows on the floor as the darkness crept closer. I found Liane sitting at a table flicking a straw idlely.
"Hey..." I said sitting down opposite her.
And then I saw Liane in a way I never had before. She wasn't just some pretty little girl with a temper, she was a real person with real feelings.
"I asked the guys to find us somewhere to stay the night..." I said trying to strike up a conversation but I stopped and looked at Liane.
"They can be difficult...boys...as can other things. If there is something bothering you, you should say something. But I don't want to push you or anything...but if something is wrong, don't be afraid to talk to me...ok?"

(Ok i'm tired now so i hope this is ok but i'm not at my best.
Naoko: I hope this isn't too serious or anything.)
 
When Dane walked out of the Pokemon center I looked over to Drew, "Nope, he doesn't have a crush on her. That was good though. Did that just come to your mind or what?" I said grabbing my pokeballs.
"Hey Nurse Joy, do you have any empty rooms available for use to stay in?" I asked smiling. ''Yes we do. Would the young lady like a separate room?" She asked smiling back. "No, she can share a room with Dane!" I said looking back a Drew grinning. We will be back later ok?"
"Thats fine. Have a good night!" She said we I walked toward the door.
 
Drew chuckled and turned around. "Excuse him, and yea, the girl will be having a room to herself." Drew slowly clipped the Pok?balls to his belt, rubbing the bruise on his forehead. Somehow he didn't feel too good, yet sitting on his bed the whole night wasn't a good idea too. Drew shrugged, as he ran out the center to look for Liane. He looked around the City. It was huge compared to Viridian, and he saw a small restaurant, and through its stained glass windows with a rock Pok?mon theme, Liane was there, sitting near the window.

Drew ran towards the restaurant, arriving at the counter.

"What would you like sir?" The waiter asked.

Drew looked up. "Cold Lemonade." Drew said, dumping the last of his change on the counter. A second person took a cup from a cup dispenser and filled it from a jug of lemonade. He handed the cup to Drew, as Drew took it and proceeded towards Liane.

"Is this seat taken?" He asked sarcastically. He sat himself down, and softly spoke.

"Sorry."
 
(Outskate: I was sitting next to Liane so it probally would have been a good idea to mention that i'm there too.)

"Do you really mean that?" I asked Drew dangerously. This really wasn't a time to joke.
"Liane...?" I said turning to her.
 
I laughed and shook my hands in front of me "It's fine you guys, I'm probably just overreacting...about...something..."
"I actually really don't know why I'm being so emotional right now." I said bringing my finger around the edge of the glass, the straw moving with it idly.
"Nothing a good night's sleep can't cure. It's just been an eventful day. Don't worry about it!" I said grinning at the two in front of me.

OOC:No, it's not serious Dane I'm serious when I say I don't know why she's depressed. _ _; I needed to play a depressed character for awhile.
 
I walked up to the counter and the waiter turned and said "Can I take your order!" "Umm, I will take a Cherry Vinillia Dr. Pepper." I said looking around.
As he handed me my drink he asked me if I was going ot battle the gym leader.
"How did you know I was a trainer.?" I looked at him in surprise. "For one your Pikachu following you everywhere and your friends. They have pokeballs at thier waist." He said looking at me like I was a moron. "Yes I am, why do you ask?" I asked curiously. "I hope you don't plan on using," I cut him off before he could finish. "I am a trainer so I know that using Pikachu would be dumb. I have other pokemon!" I said throwing my money on the counter and walking away.
 
OOC:-sigh- point exactly Randall. You've spelled Vanilla 'Vinilla'. and not seperating the quotes makes it sorta hard to read. I can't figure out where the waiter stops talking and Ash starts. Anyway, this is not spam, even though I won't post an IC post. My computer needs to be wiped clean of it's memory so I won't be on very often (Unless I get a sneak on my mom's comp like now.)
 
OCC:Cherry Vinillia Dr. Pepper." I said looking around.
thats what I said. you see where I said, I said looking around?
 
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Naoko-chan said:
My computer needs to be wiped clean of it's memory so I won't be on very often (Unless I get a sneak on my mom's comp like now.)
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I know I had to do that a couple of days ago. :\
Randall: Try to separate things a bit more. It's easier on the eyes. ;)
For example your post would be a little better paced like this:

I walked up to the counter and the waiter turned and said "Can I take your order?"
"Umm... I will take a Cherry Vanilla Dr. Pepper" I said looking around.
As he handed me my drink he asked me if I was going out battle the gym leader.
"How did you know I was a trainer?" I asked looking at him in surprise.
"Well for one your Pikachu follows you everywhere, and your friends have pokeballs at their waist" he said looking at me like I was a moron.
"Yes I am, why do you ask?" I asked curiously.
"I hope you don't plan on using-"
"I am a trainer so I know that using Pikachu would be dumb. I have other pokemon!" I cut him off before he could finish, throwing my money on the counter and walking away.
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Is there such a thing as a "Cherry Vanilla Dr. Pepper"? :confused:

Everyone: Not to rush things but we have gone on eight pages without sleep. I would be very happy if we can wrap things up for today and have tomorrow come soon. Thanks ;) )

"Well it's good to know your OK..." I said to Liane softly "But we all do get a little down sometimes..."
"Especially with people like Drew around" I thought to myself looking down at the table.
Then I noticed my watch glinting in the lamplight.
"Yikes! Look how late it is!"
"Err...It's kinda late...I think we should turn in soon" I said to them both.
Then I saw Ash come over to us with a drink looking a little flustered.
"Did you guys find somewhere to stay the night?" I asked him and Drew curiously.
 
"Yea, we booked rooms in the Pok?mon Center dormitories. " Drew said. He took a ring of keys out from his belt.

"Take one, pass it on." Drew ordered. He began sucking the straw of the lemonade until it made a large sucking sound.

"I'm off to fight Brock... And yes, it is a bit late, but while my Pok?mon are still in the mood to fight and not all 'Monday-Morning-School-I'm-So-Tired'" Drew took another breath and breathed it out.

"Watch if you like, you can learn a few things off me." Drew said, winking as he picked up his Pok?balls. It was obvious that Synthes was going to fight, but Weedle might not.
 
(Outskate: I was hoping we could all fight him tomorrow so that we can keep up with each other)

"Is the gym even open still?" I asked "I've read that gyms usually close at six o'clock sharp."
 
OCC:
[PokeCommunity.com] A Pokemon Journey!
Does that help Dane?
 
(Wow! Never seen that before. Do you and Naoko come from America or something because we certainly haven't got that in the UK...)

"Well do whatever you want Drew, I'm off to bed" I said shortly before walking away.
I headed to where the Pokemon center was with the sun barely peeking across the mountains casting a dim orange glow upon the city. The metal street lamps filckered to life and gave the path a warm glow as the center came into view.
"The others can do what they want but I'm going to bed!" I thought adamantly, though I couldn't help feeling a little lonely.
"Good evening!" the warm cheery voice of Nurse Joy broke me out of my train of thought. I had obviously walked into the Pokemon Center without realising it.
"Err..." I stuttered reaching for my belt "Could you heal these please Nurse Joy?" I finished politely.
"Of course!" she said smiling taking my four pokeballs and placing them on the machine.
I watched as the lights flashed and energy filled my Pokeballs restoring health to the Pokemon within.
"You have quite a few Pokemon for a starting trainer" Joy said as we waited.
"Yes" I said "I've done well so far. I've caught a Charmander, a Pidgey, a Caterpie, and..." I lowered my head "...a Mankey..."
I stopped, filled with memories of how I obtained my last Pokemon. Nurse joy handed me back my Pokeballs.
"Could you tell me where room 3b is please Nurse?" I asked.
"Of course, down the hall and on your right" she replied.
"Thanks" I said warily taking the hallway she had directed me too. I came to the correct door, pushed my key in and turned.
The room was pretty average really, small with one bed and table. I threw my bag onto the desk and lay on the bed without even stripping off and fell into a restful sleep.

I awoke sometime in the night feeling cold and lonely. Getting up, I pulled out Charmanders Pokeball and released him.
A little later I fell asleep again cuddled up warm with my best friend...
 
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(Okay. Fixed. That actually didn't take too long. And, No I'm not from America, I'm from China, but they've got it here...the only thing is is that having crazy asian parents, well...I don't exactly drink soda that often.)

IC:"I'd like to watch you Drew, but I'm tierd too." I said apologetically, leaving my half finished glass of water on the table, and placing 15 pokedollars on the table.
"That should cover the bill." I said taking the key on the table "Good night."
I was considerably happier, knowing that they actually cared, and walked into my seperate room with a small smile on my face.
"Come on out Delibird! Squirtle!" I said, letting the two pokemon out.
They both waddled over to the reclining chair and fell asleep on top of each other which I found extremely cute.
I took off my beret after I had showered and changed into my pajama's, and sat on the bed.
"And here we go, on an Epic adventure." I mumbled to myself.
 
OOC - Meh, I'm from Hong Kong, Dr. Pepper is a rare thing here.

IC - Drew was determined as he continued walking towards the gym. A big sign above the door in black block letters read: "Closed for the night, Gym Leader on a date."

Drew laughed. "Like that guy will get a date." Drew said to seemingly himself. He looked around, seeing a high wall that he could jump over if he tried, or a path that made the trip longer. Drew gave a sigh as he threw his messenger bag over the wall and climbed over. He returned to the Pok?mon Center as he looked on the small dogtag attached to the key.

"3C" Drew read out. He ran down the corridor and turned right.

"Guess it doesn't hurt to have a bit of rest."

OOC - We'll wait for everyone to go to bed.
 
OCC: Sorry for my absence but I am back! Yes I am from America! Oh and I am making a new rule that you all might like. We can catch Johto pokemon. No Hoenn yet. Maybe later on but yes Johto pokemon are now available! You can only have one starter. You can find it or trade it. But since there are four of us you might have to double up.. Or you can pick one of these pokemon.
After the starters are taken. (You will clame them so it is first come first serve) the last one will have to pick one from this list. After he/she picks the list will be deleted and they can be caught on your own. I clame Totodile!
STARTERS:
Totodile
Cyndaquil
Chikorita
ALTERNITIVE POKEMON:
Heracross
Ledyba
Magby
Mareep
Murkrow
Phanpy
Slugma
Wooper
Yanma

IC: "Well, I geuss I am gonna head to bed soon," I said looking at my watch. "It's only 9:00. I am gonna head out and see if I can find some pokemon. I will be back in about an hour or so. Good night everyone!" I said walking towards Viridian forest.
The night sky has fallen and almost an hour has past. A few pokemon were seen but Ash never had a chance to catch one. He was on his way back to Pewter when He stopped to rest at a small stream. Its a beautiful night,
he thought looking at the sky. as he looked upward a small splash of water hit him in the face. "What the?" He said as he looked back at the stream. A small pokemon sat in the water looking at him. Trying not ot move fast he pulled his Pokedex out of his pocket. Totodile, the water type pokemon, Totodile is usually a very energetic pokemon and loves to be on the limelight. "Wow a Totodile. It's mine," Ash whispered as he grabbed Pikachu. "Pikachu, started off with agility then move in for a thundershock." He told him.
In a flash pikachu was gone. It appeared behinf the Totodile then blasted it with his electricitiy. The Totodile fell but manged to back to his feet. "Ok Pikachu quick attack!" Again Pikachu vanished and then reappeared tackling the Totodile. The Totodile fell to the ground. "This is my chance!" I exclaimed grabbing a pokeball off my belt. "POKEBALL GO!" I yelled throwing the ball. It hit the pokemon and it opened, a red light covered the pokemon and it dissapeared into and the ball closed. It shook and the light on the front flashed. Around 3 minutes later it stopped and Ash grabed the ball. "I gotta get back to the pokemon center he said.
When he returned to the center Nurse Joy welcomed him in. "Welcome back!" She said smiling. Can you heal this pokemon?" I said handing her the ball. "Sure, can I ask what it is?" She said politely. "Its a Totodile!" I boomed excitedly. "Wow, those are rare in these parts. Here you go," She said handing me the ball.
I walked back to my room and opened the door. I flopped on my bed and thought, I can't beleive I caught a Totodile! He layed there for about 20 to 30 more minutes before falling into a deep sleep.


EDIT: 2000 post! WOOT!
 
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