(Naoko: I still don't get this "power playing" thingy fully, but what you did didn't qualify for it in my eyes. You kept to my personality quite well. You didn't use me that much (You made me say one line, which I should have stuck at the end of my post anyway). Feel free to use me if you need to, as long as you keep my character's personality correct. )
After all that had happened I just stood there shocked.
"What the hell is wrong with Liane?" I asked Ash but he shrugged.
"It's ok" Brock said "All the ladies act that way with me. But really, they can't resist me!"
"Someone please knock this guy off his high horse" I thought, though I couldn't help admiring his confidence.
"I'm Dane" I said to him, offering my hand as a proper introduction.
"Brock, Pewter Gym Leader!" He replied happily, taking my hand and giving it a warm shake.
Something about this guy gave me goosebumps all over. I couldn't quite put my finger on why, but maybe it had something to do with the authority this guy held, but I only broke hands with him half-heartedly.
"A-and that was Ash!" I said waving toward him as he took off into the Pokemon Center "But I really must be going after Liane sir"
I took off towards the Pokemon centre stealing back glances at Brock as I went...
(Randall: I've altered this so it makes more sense now.)