A Pokemon Journey!

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I sighed, and nodded "Sure, Forgiven, and Ash is right, let's go." I said returning my squirtle and walking on down the path casually, not really caring whether they were following me or not.
(Sorry, short, g2g!)
 
(Yes that is short. It doesn't really give me a lot to work with. Are we just going to keep walking down this road or will something exciting happen? I'm not going to try anything in case you don't like it. I wanted to add Team Rocket or something just to add some drama. Is this going to be like the TV show where the story revolves around Ash?)

"Thanks" I smiled moving faster to catch up with her.
"Are we ever going to reach Viridian City?" I pant as we climb a stony hill.
Reaching the top of the grassy hill, we can see the tops of buildings over the trees in the distance.
"That must be Viridian City!" I cried pointing and bouncing on the balls of my feet. Then I heard a *pop!* sound and something hit the floor. It seemed all my shaking had caused one of my Pokeballs to come loose, and now it was rolling away down the other side of the hill!
"Hey, come back here!" I cried taking chase of my runaway ball as it rolled faster and faster. I couldn't tell if the others behind me were following me or not. As the path leveled out I made a grab for the ball...and tripped landing on my butt my ball rolled towards a nearby tree and was stopped by something.
Then I heard a mans voice coming from the trees.
"Well, well, well..." It spoke "What do we have here?"
 
"Hey!" I shouted as the boy ran off (too lazy to go see if my character knows his name yet, so for now, your 'the boy'.)
I scowled and went all the way back down the hill, muttering 'boys' as I stomped back down.
"EeEeEek!" I screeched as the ground gave way underneath me and I fell into a pit, my bottom hitting the ground hard.
"Ouch..." I said biting my lip "That's going to leave a mark."
I looked up, and saw that I had fallen into a 7 feet deep pit, and I wondered who could dig something like this.
"HEY!" I shouted "ANYBODY?!" I flopped my arms in frustration.
 
OCC: No it not gonna be exactaly liekhte show. Its not ALL gonna revlove around me! lol...There can be team rocket but only team rocket cause we dont know abou Johto or Hoenn!

IC: "Pika?" Pikachu said looking back. "What is it buddy?" I asked trying to see what ha saw..."Hey where did the others go?" Ash said as her started walking back toward Pallet. Great! Somthing to backtrack! Looking around I spotted a pit with fishy characters swarming it...
I know them. Their the ones that the cops are after. Team Rocket! "Pikachu, use a thundershock!" I yelled trying to distract the Rockets. "What are you doing here?" I yelled leaping from a small ledge.
 
"Hey! Who are you?" I said to the figure.
"Not who I am but who we are" The voice corrected.
Then I saw that the first figure was joined by a second.
The two figures began to speak in a poetic way along to creepy music which came from nowhere.

Prepare for trouble,
And make it double,
To protect the world from devastation,
And unite all people within our nation,
To denounce the evils of truth and love,
And extend our reach to the stars above,
Jesse,
James,
Team Rocket blast off at the speed of light,
Surrender now or prepare to fight!

It was then I noticed a CD player on the floor which was playing the creepy tune. I kicked and interupted the music.
"Hey!" The woman said "Your going to pay for that twerp! Right James?"
"He shouldn't even be here Jesse" the man the woman was addressing said "Meoth should have caught him in the trap!"
"Meoth said he caught someone" Jesse replied "I guess we will just have to deal with this twerp ourselves!"
"Hand over the rest of your Pokemon!" James commanded.
"No" I said "Give me back the one I lost!"
"Hahahahaha!" They laughed.
"Your not getting your Pokemon back from us" Jesse said nastily "We are Team Rocket, and stealing Pokemon is what we do!"
"I'll fight you for it!" I cried
"Haha! Just try it!" James laughed.
"Alright I will!" I said checking my pokeballs.
"Oh no! I must have dropped Charmander, my best Pokemon. I don't know if Pidgey can beat them alone..."
"Ekans go! Teach this twerp a lesson!" Jesse cried throwing her ball.
"Koffing get him!" James shouted throwing his ball too.
"Pidgey I choose you!" I said throwing my own ball.
"Ekans Wrap that stupid bird!" Jesse commanded.
"Pidgy counter it with Tackle!" I cried.
My Pidgey struck the snake bravely and escaped being wrapped but didn't do much damage.
"Hahaha! You think you can beat us with that puny thing? Koffing use Smokescreen!" James cried.
The koffing exhailed a large amount of gas which enveloped my Pidgey.
"Pidgey no!" I shouted in desperation as my poor pokemon was lost in the smoke.
"Hahaha! Next time don't mess with Team Rocket!" Jesse laughed.
"Pwee!" My Pidgey tweeted.
"Huh? Pidgey?" I said
Suddenly the smoke seemed to shift and was blown away in a massive gust of air.
"Pidgey!" I cried happily as the pokemon appeared unharmed "But how...?"
Pidgey's special ability "Keen Eye" Prevents it from loosing accuracy from attacks such as "Sand Attack" and "Smokescreen" The Pokedex in my pocket stated.
"Oh...Pidgey must have gained experience from the battle and learned Gust then!" I said.
Then my Pidgey directed a gust towards Team Rocket's pokemon blowing them backwards into Jesse and James. My pokeball fell out of James grip and flew forwards next to me.
"We will finish this later, we have to help the others!" I commanded picking up Charmander's pokeball.
My Pidgey tweeted in response and followed my lead back up the hill...

EDIT: This all happens just before Ash meets Team Rocket. They sneak up the hill another way and that is where you catch them.

(Sorry a lot I know :nervous: )
 
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(??? okay, so I'll just sit here. lol jk)
Completely frustrated out of my mind I sighed, and let my arms hang on my sides.
I took a deep breath and-
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!" I yelled, trying to get anyone's attention.
When nobody came after a few seconds of complete silence except some pidgeys flying away, I flopped to the floor.
"Hehe, no use little girl!" I heard a high voice laugh.
I looked up and saw a laughing meowth.
"Eep!" I said as it started talking again.
"Nobody's gonnah hear you!" He said, walking away.
i scowled and folded my arms.
"I'm the damsel in distress again. Where are my knights in shining armor?!" I yelled up the pit.
 
(here my lady!)

Racing up the hill I see the hole in front of me and a Meowth standing above it teasing whoever was inside.
"Pidgey Tackle that Meowth!" I commanded.
"Pwee!" Pidgey cried as he swooped down and knocked the cat out and down into the hole.
"Hey!" The Meowth said "Don't do that!"
"Huh?" I said "A Meowth that talks!?"
(Naoko I'm really sorry please forgive me but) "Don't just stand there gawking, help me out!" the girl said sharply.
"Oh, right!" I said "Pidgey can you lift her out for me?"
I wasn't sure if my Pidgey had the energy to lift a person but it seemed willing to try. It flew down into the hole and let her hold its claws.
"Just get her high enough so she can reach the top Pidgey!" I cried.
"Pwee!" my Pidgey tweeted in response and flapped it's wings harder as it began to tire.
"It's no good, we need Drew!" I shouted to her.
Just then Pidgey began to lower. I realised the Meowth had grabbed the girls leg and was pulling them both down...
"No!" I cried as the Meowth clung onto the girl.
It was then I remembered my other pokemon.
"Charmander go!" I cried throwing the ball. Charmander materialized in the hole below Meowth.
"Charmander attack it with your tail! Use Ember!" I cried.
"Char!" my Charmander cried before swinging it's tail at the Meowth which just caused it to climb further up her leg.
"Charmander stop! You might hurt her!" I shouted as my Charmander stopped swinging.
"Can you reach your Squirtle?" I asked the girl.
 
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(It's okay, just you making Liane scream in 'distress' made me annoyed. That kind of controlling where you don't make her look like an idiot is okay.)
"Yeah, hold on, I got a better idea!" I shouted up, and then smirked down at the meowth.
Pulling back my other leg, I kicked the meowth on the head, sending it flying into the side of the pit, and sliding back down.
As I climbed out of the accursed hole, I sighed.
"Thanks!" I said.
"Heeeey!" The meowth said jumping up and down "What about me?!"
"Too bad so sad!" I said, pulling my eye lid down and sticking my tounge out.
 
OCC: Wait who did I attack then? Last I check I used a thundershock on the Rockets! Now if they are all gone, you all ignored my post. But Ido see your edit and thats fine...Just a little confused!
 
(Ah! I get it.)

"Ok Charmander! Let it rip!" I shouted.
"Ahhh..." the Meowth wimpered turning round to face my Charmander.
"Char!" it cried angrily flicking red hot Embers at Meowth.
"Yearrrr!" The Meowth screamed on fire comically flying out of the hole and above us.
"Well...at least we helped him out of the hole!" the girl said laughing.
I laughed along with her as the Meowth flew away.
"Yeah! You did good Charmander!" I said as my Pidgey helped it out of the hole.
"Char, char!" it cried happily.
"You too Pidgey!" I said happily to it as it tweeted.
"I never thought to tell you to kick the Meowth" I said to the girl "Your very clever!"

(All that ok?)

EDIT: Randall, I thought you were attacking Jesse and James after I left. Meowth was never with them. He was springing the trap.
Your post was fine I explained that earlier with an "EDIT".
 
OCC: Anyway, carrying on!

IC: "Are you all ok?" I called from the upper ledge around 20 feet away. "I turn around and you gone! Lets go!" I called motioning towards the ledge he was on. "We're almost to Viridian, I can see the pokemon center!"
 
We both run up to where Ash is standing.
"Sorry" I said to Ash "I lost one of my pokemon and chased after it. Liene (is that right?) followed me and got caught in a trap made by Team Rocket! It was all my fault...again."
Looking around I see Jesse and James all black and electricuted.
"Did you do that!?" I ask Ash shocked.
 
"Yeah that was me! I have seen the rockets making trouble on TV and I wanted to stop it before it started! Are you guys alright? I was kinda worried!" Ash said looking dead at Liane.
 
"Liane was brilliant" I said "She's a smart girl. But where's Drew got to? We could have done with him back there to help us..."
 
"True! He traveled ahead I think...I'm not sure. Anyway lets go before it gets dark. The sun is setting anyway." Ash said hurrying along. "I like the way you handled your Charmander back there Dane.
 
"Well...fire types are strong, but are also difficult to train." I reply as we approach Viridian City.
"I'm really impressed by the strength of your Pikachu's electrical attacks. But both me and you are going to suffer against the Gym Leader in Pewter City though unless we both capture a pokemon that's effective against rock types. Pikachu and Charmander are weak against rock and ground types. Liane's Squirtle will have the easiest job because it's water type pokemon..."
 
"If you two are done talking about who's pokemon is good, and who's raised their pokemon well, we need to find Drew." I said, folding my arms.
'Where did he go anyway???' I thought to myself.
(Sorry about the absence, I had to go to a gym meet)
 
Naoko-chan said:
(Sorry about the absence, I had to go to a gym meet)
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(It's ok, we all have normal lives to live as well as virtual.)

"Sorry..." I reply blushing "I'm a walking Pokemon dictionary sometimes. I've read so much about them, and I want to make good use of it all. But from what i've seen from you and Ash you fight more with your heart's, then your minds. And your such great trainers because of that..." I stop realising I'm going on again.
"Is Drew some kind of bird catcher or something? I ask picking up the conversation again "The way he summoned all those Pidgey to come to our aid..." I trail off as we arrive at the edge of route 1 and stare at the large buildings in front of us.
"Sure is bigger then Pallet Town!" I say excited "Shall we head towards the Pokemon Center first or do you want to try and find Drew...?"
 
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"Ummm..." I said thinking "We last saw drew when we were coming to viridian, now we're here, but where is he?"
"I think we should drop off our pokeballs first, then go look for him inside viridian, since we won't have our pokemon with us, we won't go outside the city limits." I said, making up my mind.
 
"Ok" I replied nodding "That's a good idea."
We approached the Pokemon Center and the automatic doors zipped open for us as we stepped inside. Looking round I could see a small crowd huddled around the TV set sounding very worrid about something.
"I wonder what that is all about" I thought to myself wondering over.
When I got close enough I could hear what all the fuss was about. I could hear the female reporter from the news channel giving some kind of report:
"...and the cause of the fires around Viridian Forest were none other then the evil Pokemon Theives 'Team Rocket'! The police in the area have had no luck tracking them down as they seemed to have ran from the incident soon after starting it. Officials believe this was done in an attempt to scare the community and put everyone off guard whilst Team Rocket complete their fiendish schemes. We will bring you further updates as the story unfolds..."
I turned my head away from the set, in shock at what I'd just heard.
"Dad..." I wispered under my breath...
 
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