A Pokemon Journey!

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(I'm not even in this des. and undes. criticism. I really don't care.)
"And the point of that was?" I asked myself, as Drew gave his pokeballs to Nurse Joy.
"I noticed that both of them like me thank you very much it's not like your any different." I muttered under my breath, folding my arms.
Squirtle nodded vigorously "Squirtle Squirtle!"
 
Sitting up, I seen an explosion from town. Nice nap Ash thought as he stood up and ran into town. Seeing Dane,Laine,and Drew I asked. "Where did you go?" I asked loking at Drew. "We've been looking everywhere for you!" Thinking in the back of his mind.
Not really, I have had a short nap! "Anyway you all got your pokemon?" I asked ready to head out.
 
Drew nodded at Ash. "Yea, I went to get a Bulbasaur from Oak." Drew picked up the Pok?balls and attached them to his belt. He walked over to Liane, petting her Squirtle. "We need to battle each other some day..." He said, turning around at Ash.
 
(Ok, i'm a tad annoyed. I wrote a whole post continuing this and it seems to have dissapeared. Hmm...maybe I didn't enter it right or something but I'm so sure I did...
Well i'm not writing it all again so i'll just have to tell you basically what it said:

- I said how we had to get going to Pewter City.
- I saw a hurt Mankey a whole lot happened and I end up healing it.
- I decided to catch it and take it to the Pokemon center for a full heal telling you lot i'd meet you later.

Ok?)
 
Drew took another glass of water and decided to head out to Pewter City alone. He released his two Pok?mon, his Pidgey and Bulbasaur and started walking up North. During the end of Viridian City, Drew saw a fainted old man who lay over the entrance/exit. Ignoring the man, Drew stepped over him and continued to Viridian forest.

OOC - No coffee for him! xD
 
(...where is it Dane?)
"Hey!" I shouted after Drew "Wait up!"
Scooping up squirtle in my arms I glanced at Ash, and hurried after him.
"Ew." I said looking down at the old man.
Scooting around carefully, I waited for Ash on the other side of the old man.
"I need my COFFEE!" He shouted jumping up and rounding on me.
"Nobody goes through my property without my morning coffee!!!" He screeched.
"Okay Okay!" I said putting my hands up in self-defense.
"Get me out of here! Ash! Drew! Dane?! come on!" I shouted.
"C-c-coffee." He said drowsily, as he fainted on the floor again.
"Ew!" I squeaked as I ran after Drew, as far away from the old man as possible.
 
"Hey, Old man leave the girl alone! Have your dang coffee!" I said thrusting it forward. "Lets go guys! We have a ways to go before Pewter." I sid walking by the old man.
"What are you all waiting for?" Ash asked standing wit his hands on his hips.
 
(Naoko: I assume you mean where did I catch the Mankey?
Around the top of Viridian somewhere or really the grass to the west of Viridian, but this RP doesn't have to reflect the games does it?)

I paced in the center worrid about that poor Mankey I had brought. It had only been minutes since I had left the others, and Nurse Chansey had smiled as if it would not take that long to heal but...
"Are you the boy who brought in the Mankey?" A woman said sharply behind me.
"Yes..." I said turning round to face Nurse Joy "Will it be alright?"
"It will..." she said.
My heat leaped.
"But I want to know..." she continued "What kind of a trainer you think you are treating your Pokemon like that!" she finished angrily.
"Hey!" I said shocked "That wasn't my Pokemon, I thought it was wild! I brought it here because I was worrid about it."
"Oh..." Joy replied blushing "Yes it is a trainers Pokemon...so I assumed that you..."
"Well I'm not that kind of trainer!" I said boldly "I could never treat Pokemon that way!"
"Oh, I'm so sorry..." she said apoligising.
"That's Ok." I said calming down "Your just concerned about Pokemon, there is nothing wrong with that."
"Yes, I am sorry" she replied holding out Mankey's Pokeball "Here, he will be fine now. Just don't battle him too hard for a few days, but give him some exercise to get him healthy again..."
"But...but..." I replied quickly feeling a bit stunned "He's not my Pokemon, he's some other trainers!"
"Yes, but that trainer didn't want him and he now needs a better trainer" Nurse Joy said "He won't cope alone in the wild now he's trained, and you seem like the perfect trainer to raise him."
I took the Pokeball off her still feeling shocked.
"But what if he doesn't like me? Or if I do a bad job or something?"
"You saved his life" Nurse Joy said "I would think he would be honoured to have a trainer like you, I know I would..."
I left the center still feeling a bit shocked. On the way to route 2 I bought some coffee to hopefully liven me up, but I couldn't seem to drink it.
Finding the others I gave the coffee to Ash without even looking.
He handed it to some guy begging for coffee, but I didn't care.
I was still thinking over what Nurse Joy had said.
"I would think he would be honoured to have a trainer like you, I know I would..."
Did she really mean that? I looked at the others.

Strong, quick-thinking Ash.
Brave Liane who fights with her heart.
Drew, the bold and rebellious.
And me...

No, not one great trainer...four...

"What are you all waiting for?" Ash asked standing with his hands on his hips.
I smiled to myself and went to follow him wondering what lay ahead for us all as we stepped ever deeper into the wonderful world of Pokemon...
 
"Wait you guys!" I shouted, hoping they'd wait.
"I'm...a little tired, and well...." I flushed, embarrassdly.
"My house is right over there." I said pointing to the black gates I had walked through only hours ago.
"Sooo....can, we take a little...pit stop?" I asked shuffling my feet, waiting for them to say 'your tired already?!'.
Before they could say anything, I guess my mom's butler spotted me.
"Miss! Misstress has been worried sick!" He shouted, running toward me.
"B-but...." I sweatdropped, glancing at the three boys "I've only been gone for a few hours..."
"Mumbling something about getting eaten." Jaques' said, folding his arms and nodding as the gates slid open.
 
I stopped and looked back seeing Liane talking to someone. I turned and made my way back to her. "I geuss we could rest and travel in the morning. Its getting late as it is." Ash said looking to the sky. "Yeah lets stop!
 
Jaques' clapped his hands gleefully and rushed back through the gates.
I sighed, wishing I had never suggested it.
"Oh no." I mumbled, walking toward the gates, hoping Ash and the others knew to follow me.
(Dane, are you in viridian or Pewter? because we're taking a pit stop.....uh oh......)
 
Walking behind Liane i ask ed her, "You dont look to happy, are you alright? You look upset!"
 
(Yes I'm with you lot. Didn't my last post cover that?)

"Wow!" I said admiring the front garden "You have got a very nice house Liane!"
As we all stepped inside the gate closed behind us. I looked warily at the others, Liane herself looked rather fidgety. Ash walked close to her and asked her something I couldn't quite hear.
"I never thought that Liane would be this well off" I thought to myself.
 
Drew scratched his head, walking in through the well-kept entrance. He looked at the plants, sorted in colors. He kept walking... Thinking as he went. The household was very rich, compared to the apartment Drew shared with his friends. The butler, Jaques was hell dressed. Drew looked at Lianne who was pretty mucht the opposite.

'Aha!" Drew thought to himself.

He quickly ran towards Liane, putting his head close to her ear.

"Wear your white fluffy bunny dress before your mum sees you."

He stepped off, walking in front of Liane, covering her in case her mum sees her. Directing his next line at Liane at a suitable volume so that the other boys couldn't hear, Drew spokes again.

"We don't want such a pretty girl leaving our group now do we?" Drew turned around at Liane and winked.

"Hey Liane... Didn't you say you wanted to buy some Pok?balls at the Pok?mart?" Drew pretended.
 
I shook my head and said, "I'll just say they got dirty. Even the slightest amount of dirt will suffice."
"And I think it's too late to leave." I muttered to Drew, as I eyed Jaques, who was definetly looking forward to that promotion.
Jaques walked in before all of us and conversed with Mariette, one of the maids, and practically ripped his hair out.
"M-m-misstress i-isn't here at the moment." He said sadly "You'll have to come by some other time."
"Oh that's okay!" I said happily "Marietta, could we have some refreshments?"
She jumped, as she probably had never been directly addressed by someone in the actual family, and nodded as she hurried off.
"Well that's that. Nothing to worry about now!" I said cheerfully.
"Weeell well!" I heard a smooth voice carry from the top of the grand staircase.
I cringed.
"Little Lee is traveling with a bunch of boys." My brother Devin sneered.
"Big fat Devin is probably making out with a bunch of man-****s!" I snapped back.
Though my brother was probably the opposite. Thin and in a crisp suit, his chesnut hair was spiked up, and he'd be the last one to even think about something like a kiss.
"Empty come-back." He said calmly, knowing I knew I was faking it.
I huffed and folded my arms.
"Soooo, three boys plus one girl. Bet they all hit on you." He smirked at me.
I ignored the last comment, and said coolly "Ash, Dane, and Drew, meet my stupid brother who's ego doesn't fit in the universe, Devin."

(You guys can control Devin however you want, I based him off my ex. LOL. just don't bash him too much, and make sure he's arrogantly...cool. you know?)
 
Drew remained expressionless. He eyed the boy coming down the staircase, Devin. The look on Devin didn't seem to be a look that Drew liked. He looked up, staring at him.

"Oh... Does the widdle widdle mwa mwa's boy like mw swister? Oh is the widdle widdle mwa mwa's boy mwad?" Devin said in an annoying high pitched tone.

Drew remained expressionless. Violence wouldn't be needed. He ignored Devin and sat down on a sofa.

Devin crossed his arms. He jumped off the last couple of stairs on the staircase, purposely stamping his feet so that Drew was aware of him.

"I don't like that look of yours." Devin called out. The maids stood back in awe. Devin threw his hand back and was ready to punch Drew. Drew didn't move. The fist was barely an inch away from his face.

"I'm going." Drew said. He picked up his messenger bag and walked near the entrance.

Devin was annoyed. He ran up towards Drew, and this time he kicked him hard in his stomach.

Drew fell down. Laughing at Devin.

"That was weak." Drew said weakly.
 
(Yikes this is getting rough! Naoko I don't know exactly what you accused him of doing, but I don't think I want to know either! I don't know exactly how to progress this but...)

"Leave Drew alone you idiot!" I shouted running forward.
"I don't think i've ever met a more obnoxious person in my life" I thought angrily.
"Who exactly do you think you are pushing Liane and Drew around!" I shouted at him as he turned around.
He gave me an evil looking glare and came at me.
"Ok tweedy, I leave your lover boy alone...want to offer yourself as a replacement then?" he said smiling evily.
"Uh..." I said backing off.
He lifted his fist into the air as he came closer. I twisted my body and raised my arms to block the attack.
"Go on then do it!" I thought angrily determined not to run away.
Just as he swung his arm at me and expected it to connect with my arms, there was a sudden blinding flash...
 
(???blinding flash? and I think you two forgot to read that you shouldn't go overboard with Devin.
Me said:
just don't bash him too much, and make sure he's arrogantly...cool. you know?)
Click to expand...
Is that cool?)
I grabbed Devin by his ear and shouted into it, "Excuse me!!!"
He flinched and scowled "What?" He snapped.
"I think you should fix yourself good before I go tell dad what you just did!" I said, digging his face into the marble floor.
"I-think-you-should-fix-yourself-before-I-tell-MOM-what-you're-DOING!!!" He said.
"Oh, but your more important! Mr. I'm-going-to-be-a-CEO-one-day!" I sneered.
"Oh, no no! Miss Bachelorette-who's-going-to-make-dad-rich, your much more important!" He laughed.
I flushed, and scowled at him.
I knew he was referring to the fact that mom had always been going on and on about how I should be more lady-like for her to ever find me a 'rich' husband.
'That's just how wealthy families go' She said over and over.
"Same to you Devin." I said regaining my cool "Now, why don't we take a little experiment shall we?"
He looked utterly confused.
"I've been waiting for this moment ever since you smeared mom's lipstick all over my cloths." I said, smiling evilly.
"What. Did. You. Do." He asked threateningly.
"Watch that tone!" I said, having the time of my life "You certainly remember my old chemistry set that suddenly was completely depleated of it's supplies, and mom couldn't figure out where it had gone right?"
He nodded slowly, truth dawning like a hammer to the head.
"Well." I held my hand out expectantly to Jaques, who timidly handed me a silver cup coaster, which had a big red button on it.
"Watch where everything went." I said pushing the button down with my thumb.
Upstairs there was a large boom, and all the color flushed out of Devin's face.
"Might wanna check your room." I said, tossing the coaster to Jaques who caught it.
He dashed upstairs and I went over to where Drew was standing, still clutching his messenger bag.
"I'm sorry about that," I said apologetically "But my brother's probably just been dumped or something. I'll just grab something to go."
Mariette brought out drinks, and I asked her to serve while I grabbed a few extra clothes, and I asked Jaques, to prepare a few supplies, like food and potions.
"I'll be right back." I said dashing up the stairs, to hear Devin's agonized cry from the otherside of the open upper level.
Quickly locking myself behind the double doors to my bedroom, I sighed and slid down the mahoghany door.
"Well, for starters..." I mumbled grabbing my purse, and taking out a fat wad of pokedollars "Saving up always helps."
Grabbing a few extra clothes, and stuffing them into the navy blue side pack my mom had gotten me, I slung the pack over my shoulder and straightened my hat.
I glanced at my vanity and decided to grab a brush too.
When I reached out to pick up the silver brush, my hand bumped something round.
"A pokeball?" I read. From the note attached it was obviously from my Dad, and it was a-"A Delibird?!"
I released it, and a red and white bird-pokemon popped out, clutching it's white drag bag.
"You can put some extra things in your delibirds bag, like food and water, and clothes." I read from the note.
"Great!" I grinned "This'll definetly lighten my load."
I fetched a few more skirts from my wardrobe, and put them in as the Delibird held out the bag.
"Thanks!" I said smiling and patting it gently on the head.
It was obviously very friendly.
"Deli Deli!" It said, marching toward the door.
"Wait!" I said, but too late. It had already bumped it's beak into the locked doors.
"Get out here you little zit!" I heard Devin's muffled voice shouted as he pulled on the clacking doorknob.
"Great. Now we're stuck in here!" I hissed to delibird.
"Deli Deli." Delibird said shaking it's head and notioning me to unlock the door as it searched around it's bag.
I nervously clicked the door open, and When the door flung open to reveal a boiling Devin, Delibird presented him with a neatly wrapped gift.
"You really think I'll fall for that?" He said sweatdropping.
"Deli Deli." Delibird said simply, stuffing the package into his hands, and pulling me down the stairs.
"Right!" I said, stopping before the three boys, smiling sheepishly "Let's go. Quickly."
 
Drew's face was red! He opened his eyes wide. "Uh... yea... Let's... go..." He murmured. He walked towards the doorway, looking behind. "You guys coming or not?" Drew questioned. Drew opened the door, stepped outside and held the door for them. Drew took a deep breath. The air had a mixed scent of many flowers.
 
Ash, who was watching the whole incident walked toward Liane. "Kinda cocky isn't he? More like a jerk actually!" I rephrased my saying. "Anyway, where are we gonna stay tonight?"
 
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