A Pokemon Journey!

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"Oooo!" I said, puffing my cheeks out "Those pesky...rockets! We just got rid of them!!!"
"Squirtle Squirt!" Squirtle said, puffing his cheeks out also and putting his hands on the side of his shell, imitating myself.
"We need to find Drew though!" I said storming out of the pokemon center.
"Squirtle Squirtle Squirt!" Squirtle said a question mark appearing over his head
"If the rockets are out there we'll need our pokemon, so we better keep them for now." I said returning Squirtle.
 
While the others watched the television I was with Pikachu as Nurse Joy sprayed some potion on him.
"Your Pikachu looks very strong," Nurse Joy spoke breaking the silence. "How long have you had him, Year or so?" She asked.
"Nope! I just got him a couple of hours ago!" Ash said looking suprised at her comment.
"But I thank you for your comment on him!" Ash said smiling. "Come on guys! Pikachu is fine he can come with us!" Ash hollered at the others.
 
(BTW the Team Rocket was meant to be the actual Grunts not Jesse and James, but the way you took it is funnier)

"Nurse Joy could you heal my Pokemon please?" I said handing them to her in a daze. Then she turned around and placed then on the healing machine.
"What are you doing?" Ash said "We have to get going already!"
"I know..." I said wearily "They just need a quick one"
"Here you go! All done!" Nurse Joy said handing me back my pokeballs.
"Thank You..." I said before following Ash out of the door...
 
So where to look first? Ash thought to himself. "I see a path over around the bend. We could go over there though its out of the city limits. We have out POkemon so it should be fine!" Ash said walking toward the path.
 
"Hey! Whats that!?" I cry pointing to an object floating high above the entrance to route 2 "It looks like a balloon or something..."
 
Leaning in Ash tried to see what it was but could tell. "I don't know what it is, Pikachu zap it with a thundershock!" Ash spoke the commands. After PIkachu zapped the floting object I turned to Dane. "Go check it out and meet me at the pokemon center in a hour.
I will check out the path!" Ash said hurrying along the path. "See ya in a bit!"
 
I looked around at the two boys, who were now running down their respective paths.
"W-w-what about me?!" I said loudly.
"Boys are always unreliable. I'll look around town." I said, letting squirtle rest awhile longer.
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After a long time of searching I sighed, and took a break in a nearby coffee shop.
Ordering myself a strawberry smoothie, I sat down in one of the stools next to the elevated tables next to the window.
"He just disappeared..." I said my straw hanging a centimeter away from my mouth.
 
[ Sorry guys. x.x Oh and, Naoko, I think I attached a little picture for the appearance. Ahhh I'll attach it again. ]
Drew was exhausted from the walk. He was different... Pidgey was perched onto his shoulder, and on the side was a Bulbasaur... Drew rushed to the Pok?mon Center straight ahead.

"Excuse me... Have you seen 2 ummm... Ugly... looking boys about my age and an ok looking girl around my age around here?" Drew asked. He looked around the Pok?mon Center and through the glass that seperated the Center from the Coffee Shop was Liane. "Hope she didn't hear that..." Drew hissed to Nurse Joy. Nurse Joy chuckled.

"Did you want your Pok?mon healed then?" She asked kindly.

"Sure..." Drew replied. He returned his 2 Pok?mon to their respective Pok?balls and handed them to Nurse Joy.

[ Naoko can notice me or something. x.x ]
 
Squirtle now sat across from me and it was easily enjoying a glass of iced water I had ordered for him.
I sighed and watched people passing by the shop.
"Where is that stupid guy?!" I huffed.
"Squirtle!" Squirtle said pointing directly to the pokemon center where Drew was talking to Nurse Joy.
"You could've told me earlier!" I hissed at him as I swept him up and left some bills on the table, heading too the pokemon center.
"S-s-squirtle!" It cried, holding on to the glass of water for dear life.
"This isn't yours! I'll get you another one later." I said, swiping the glass out of it's hands and returning it.
I navigated past the crowd of people and ended up in front of Drew "Where were you?!" I asked, hands on my hips, and an annoyed expression etched on my face.
 
[In time with Liane deciding to look around]
Running and panting I rush along the path towards Viridian Forest, comming ever closer to the strange object in the sky.
"What is that thing anyway?" I think to myself.
Getting closer I can see that it is indeed a hotair balloon in what looks like the shape of a Meowth.
"Weird..." I say before I shout upwards "Who are you?"
Then I hear three people reply that I hoped I'd never see again.

Allow Jesse to answer that as you prepare for trouble,
Team Rockets on the scene so make it double,
To protect the world from devastation,
To unite all people within our nation,
To denounce the evils of truth and love,
To extend our reach to the stars above,
Jesse,
James,
Team Rocket are bringing you fear and fright,
Surrender now twerp or prepare to fight!
Meowth thats right!

The Meowth chimed in this time to finish their motto and I knew this meant trouble.
"Haha twerp! Thought you'd seen the last of us eh?" Jesse laughed from the balloon.
"More 'hoped' actually" I replied bitterly.
"HEY!" they both cried shocked.
"No one speaks to Team Rocket like that!" James said angrily "Especially not little twerps like you!"
"Who cares?" the Meowth said cutting in "Either nab his pokaymon or lets get going!"
They both nodded at Meowth which I found slightly amusing.
"We will deal with you later twerp!" Jesse said before letting the balloon set off again "We have some business in Viridian to settle!"
"They did cause that fire...but i've got to know what they are up to" I thought before chasing after them.

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[In time with Drew's post]
From the balloon Team Rocket could see me chasing after them as we reached Viridian.
"Your not gonna believe this Jess, but the twerp is following us!" James said kind of shocked.
"Who cares about some little twerp?" Jesse said angrily "If he even dares follow us we can deal with some little boy!"
"Thats not what I heard..." Meowth said "I know that boy was more of a problem then you are sayin' he is."
"So what?" Jesse said sounding slightly worrid "We are Team Rocket, we always lie and dodge the truth. What else is knew?"
"Plus he has some friends too" Meowth continued "I say we catch them off guard and steal their pokaymon instead of the centers."
"Hey, yeah! That's not a bad idea Meowth!" James said both him and Jesse beaming.
"Yes, who wants sick and injured Pokemon anyway?" Jesse cried hatching the perfect plan "We will pretend to invade the center, and then steal all the twerps pokemon when they are not looking!"
"Ahahaha!" they laughed thinking they had the perfect plan.
"Onward James!" Jesse commanded "We have some twerps pokemon to steal!"

I raced forwards towards the City.
"I wonder what Team Rocket are planning anyway?" I think "Whatever it is, it can't be good news for us!"
"Hey wait a second!" I cried slowing "Liane and Drew, I forgot about them! They have no idea whats going on!" I shouted before taking off again.
I raced into the city dearly hoping I wasn't too later as the Rockets balloon loomed overhead...
 
Drew stared at Liane. "I'm not too sure myself. I went back to Pallet to get Bulbasaur from Oak. I call her Synthes. nice name huh?" Drew said to Liane. He bought his two hands back behind his head and yawned. He bent down next to Liane and whipsered in her ear. "You're the center of attention for the two other boys eh?" Drew chuckled and made his back straight. He released his two Pok?mon from his Pok?balls and began to walk towards the door. "Where are they?" Drew asked, turning around.
 
I flushed and said "That's not really important right now, for the reason you just stated! I don't know where they are either!" I said.
Why was every boy I met soo....augh!
I stepped outside of the pokemon center and looked around.
I caught a glimpse of Dane, running toward us "Hey! I found Drew!" I yelled pointing to him. (I still can't see your attachment.)
 
Liane shouted something to me but I couldn't quite catch it. I definatly heard her say "Drew" so maybe she had found him? But there wasn't time for that!
"Liane! Team Rocket are above you...run!" I shouted.
"What?" I heard her cry at me but it was too late. I watched in desperation as Team Rocket threw a load of black orbs from their balloon. Black orbs that turned out to be...
"BOMBS! Liane, get out of the way!" I shouted desperatly at her.
I watched her look up and see Team Rockets balloon and the bombs heading her way. I thought she would run...or at least scream...but she just stood there...
I felt awful but there was nothing I could do...
 
"Pfft, Mr. Dane only cares about Liane. Can't he see me?" Drew hissed. His 2 Pok?mon, Synthes and his Pidgey fell into a battle stance. "Pidgey now!" Drew commanded. Pidgey gave a high pitched whistle as beating of wings could be heard in the distance. Synthes leapt up frantically trying to take down the flying balloon.

"Synthes makes me look bad..." Drew said, smacking his forehead.

Oh and... *image removed*
 
"Oh no." I said looking up and frozen on the spot.
"Squirtle, watergun!" I called.
Squirtle shot a jet of water at the bombs, leaving the wet bombs unignighted (lack of better word)
"Okay, time to go!" I said dashing into the pokemon center.
 
(I was hoping you would do something along those lines Naoko. ;) )

In their balloon Team Rocket looked down on the current events angrily.
"Little twerps, they put out the fuses on the bombs!" Jesse cried with rage.
"And now we don't ave any bombs left!" Meowth said shocked.
James laughed to himself and Jesse turned round in anger of his amusement of the situation.
"What are you smirking at?" she shouted angrily.
"I'm smirking Jess, because I know that an unignited bomb is still a potential explosive device" he said smiling producing Koffing's Pokeball "And lucky for us I have just the thing..."
"Ah!" Jesse said grinned "Koffings Self Destruct!"
"Yes!" James said raising the ball "Koffing go!"
The Koffing materialized near the unexploded bombs as I came closer.
I noticed Drew's Pidgey, and what must be his Bulbasaur.
I could also see Liane, looking shocked but ready.
"We can easily take on Team Rocket!" I thought happily.
"Charmander I choose you!" I cried throwing the ball. Charmander appeared near Koffing ready to take him on.
"Ok Drew...Liane..." I said nodding at them.
Drew had already sent out his Pidgey and it flew up towards the balloon.

Team Rocket had noticed this unfortunatly.
"Ekans go! Poison Sting attack!" Jesse shouted releasing her Pokemon.
It struck the poor Pidgey directly and I watched as it fell downwards hurt from the attack.
This had bought Team Rocket the time they needed though.
"Koffing NOW!" James cried.
I watch as the Koffing became encased in light and I knew we had just a few seconds to do somethingfast...
 
"Squirtle, use water gun to blow that koffing away! fast!" I shouted, as Squirtle jumped all the way up to the koffing, which was now glowing immensly with blinding light.
Squirtle shot yet another jet of water out of it's mouth and sent the koffing only a few feet away, when it exploded.
I screamed and ducked into the pokemon center, grabbing squirtle and dragging him in with me.
Hopefully Dane and Drew would have sense to have run for cover.
 
Synthes, Vine Whip the Koffing and throw them at... uh... Drew looked around his surroundings. There was a few houses, a Pok?mart, a Pok?mon Center, and an Abandoned Gym. "THE GYM!" Drew finished. Synthes hurled its vines at the purple Pok?mon and threw them at the abandoned gym. It exploded, as the gym followed shortly after. A pile of rubble remained from it. Drew commanded Pidgey to burst the balloon and walked into the Pok?mon Center.

Once inside, Drew took a cup of water from a tray on the counter and started sipping it. He turned around to find Liane. "Not bad, not bad."
 
(err...a little fast Drew. I know it's a role play but you can describe things more you know. Naoko doesn't write a lot, but what she writes flows smoothly and works. I write a little too much, but I like to describe feelings and emotions plus I like to set the scene and such, else the whole thing won't make sense.
Drew commanded Pidgey to burst the balloon and walked into the Pok?mon Center.
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Wow that's fast. You did that all in one sentence? And what happened to Team Rocket?

Once inside, Drew took a cup of water from a tray on the counter and started sipping it. He turned around to find Liane. "Not bad, not bad."
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This is ok if a bit random. We almost died out there and you seem totaly cool about it. Also, who's saying the last line?

Personally I think this would flow better:

Defeated, Koffing was forced to return to James's Pokeball.
"Grrr!" Jesse cried in anger "These twerps keep ruining our plans!"
Once Team Rockets Koffing was out of the way Drew turned his attention on the balloon itself. Drew ran to his poisoned Pidgey on the floor and sprayed antidote to cure it's poisoning.
"You ok now Pidgey?" Drew said looking at his pokemon with worry.
"Pwee!" the Pidgey cried and flew upwards into the sky.
"Ok Pidgey! Tackle and burst that balloon!" Drew cried.
"Pw, pw, pwee!" Pidgey cried and shot straight through the balloon bursting it.
"Ahhh! Team Rockets blasting off again!" Team Rocket cried as the balloon flew out of sight.

Drew turned to Dane and Liane, giving them both a nod as if to say "You ok?"
Dane gave a swift nod and Liane followed suit.
Drew walked into the pokemon center feeling slightly shocked. He took a cup of water from a tray on the counter and started sipping it. He turned around to find Liane.
"You were good back there you know..." (whoever's meant to be saying this line) said.

(I'm sorry Drew it's just you are really skipping things which are important to know. Just don't take this badly, ok? Just try to elaborate more and give us some facts.
In fact, there is nothing I can really do to continue the story as you have ensured that i'm not saying the last line therefore i'm not there yet.)
 
[OOC] Bleh. I didn't even know that you cared. [/OOC]
"Not bad, Liane... Not bad." Drew finished. He sat down on a sofa beside her. "Ash likes you the most." Drew whistled and walked up to the counter, picking up his 2 Pok?balls he had given to Nurse Joy.
 
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