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I'm going to one this Tuesday xD
I'm not gonna get drunk though.
 
GAIZ.

I didn't get any comments on my story, so imma repost :D!

And this time comment please D<

[jq]"The fantasy turned into an illusion. The dream turned into nightmare." She uttered the words quietly, whilst reflecting upon her journey of self discovery. She faded away into the darkness, trapped by her fear of never becoming normal. She, like many others, was hidden in a non-existant world believing her false hopes as she slipped into non-existance.

I recall the day, the beginning of the future." Her last day on earth began for her one day in July. She did not realise at the time but she was absorbed in the belief of another non-existant fate, one of which had no grounding to begin with. She almost foretold it, but didn't quite accept how likely it was. She was stuck in the realm of another dream that faded away a little while ago. She gave up that option, it was long gone. Her beliefs, needs.. all of that left her for nearly a month until she regained those throughts or so she thought. She was viewing this opportunity as invisible up until now... it soon faded as soon as she wished for it. Not long after, she followed the same false hope of the previous fate except this time she had a chance to make a difference. Like the other opportunities, it disappeared so easily. Back into a world in which she had nothing to have true determination for. The knowledge and mindset had allowed another thought to enter her mind. This remained for a long time, but like every other chance it dissolved as if she had no control.

Stuck in self pity, she pitted many forces against each other, hoping to cure the fear and the belonging that there should be something inside of her. Now a few months after each journey, she realises sacrifices were made for the ones in which deserve said opportunities even more than her.

She faded back into the world in which her desires might appear in the future one day.[/jq]

Imma bring it to TCTI too.
 
Hey Nica. Just a note overall on your aggravation with interactions with people in person.

The one thing that is a pro to having an online relationship is that it's harder for people to judge you. People are so quick to judge you in person.
 
I know, right? I feel like I can be so much more loose with o/l friends than with IRL friends.
 
Nurse Nica said:
GAIZ.

I didn't get any comments on my story, so imma repost :D!

And this time comment please D<

[jq]"The fantasy turned into an illusion. The dream turned into nightmare." She uttered the words quietly, whilst reflecting upon her journey of self discovery. She faded away into the darkness, trapped by her fear of never becoming normal. She, like many others, was hidden in a non-existant world believing her false hopes as she slipped into non-existance.

I recall the day, the beginning of the future." Her last day on earth began for her one day in July. She did not realise at the time but she was absorbed in the belief of another non-existant fate, one of which had no grounding to begin with. She almost foretold it, but didn't quite accept how likely it was. She was stuck in the realm of another dream that faded away a little while ago. She gave up that option, it was long gone. Her beliefs, needs.. all of that left her for nearly a month until she regained those throughts or so she thought. She was viewing this opportunity as invisible up until now... it soon faded as soon as she wished for it. Not long after, she followed the same false hope of the previous fate except this time she had a chance to make a difference. Like the other opportunities, it disappeared so easily. Back into a world in which she had nothing to have true determination for. The knowledge and mindset had allowed another thought to enter her mind. This remained for a long time, but like every other chance it dissolved as if she had no control.

Stuck in self pity, she pitted many forces against each other, hoping to cure the fear and the belonging that there should be something inside of her. Now a few months after each journey, she realises sacrifices were made for the ones in which deserve said opportunities even more than her.

She faded back into the world in which her desires might appear in the future one day.[/jq]

Imma bring it to TCTI too.
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Well, this appears to be a rather common feeling as of late, and you certainly have enough description to get the idea across. ...The third paragraph is a bit shaky, though. It might only be because of a failure to read it properly, however I am not quite certain of what you were trying to say here. I would suggest taking another look over it, at the very least.

bgt said:
The one thing that is a pro to having an online relationship is that [S-HIGHLIGHT]it's harder for people to judge you.[/S-HIGHLIGHT]
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...Oh, my... People not being judged as easily on the Internet.....Haha, that is rich. Really.

People reaching judgments on others is done just as quickly and easily on the Internet as it is in real life. In fact, doing so over the Internet is probably easier, if anything, due to the lack of any facial reactions and the loss of sarcasm that can lead one intention to come across completely differently.
 
Forci Stikane said:
Well, this appears to be a rather common feeling as of late, and you certainly have enough description to get the idea across. ...The third paragraph is a bit shaky, though. It might only be because of a failure to read it properly, however I am not quite certain of what you were trying to say here. I would suggest taking another look over it, at the very least.



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...Oh, my... People not being judged as easily on the Internet.....Haha, that is rich. Really.

People reaching judgments on others is done just as quickly and easily on the Internet as it is in real life. In fact, doing so over the Internet is probably easier, if anything, due to the lack of any facial reactions and the loss of sarcasm that can lead one intention to come across completely differently.
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It may be easier but at least we don't have to see your face when your making your shallow judgements about people.

Since when was anyone serious on here Nick. What is this, serious business?
 
Did you know that there are 57 mistakes in the new harry potter? ;;
 
Heyy everyone :]
Someone check out my poem I posted yesterday: CLICK
I've had no comments yet >.<
 
Zenus said:
Heyy everyone :]
Someone check out my poem I posted yesterday: CLICK
I've had no comments yet >.<
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done. :D
pity that the poetry section is so dead.
 
Thanks cerebra. Well it's probably gonna get more active according to GavZ. Him & the moderator of the poetry section are accordingly setting up a Poem of the month/week (can't remember which) competition which will hopefully interest some people.
 
Oh thats cool. Maybe I post one too then.
 
Well I'm looking forward to it anyway : ) I'll probably never win though XD;
 
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