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You imply that I don't already sleep with the mod.

I mean, what?

Oh, but it's not for lust. It's for love this time. :P *gets shoot a thousand times*

And Giratinasaur, total agreement with you on Serebii on that one. The only lighthearted stories they'll accept are parodies. And also, the audience seem to like the more darker fics and think angst teenagers are developed characters. -_-

I think it's safe to say NE is mostly a lighthearted story (the suspense and mystery elements are used in a less intense tone) ...until Jacob suddenly had a change in personality. :O
 
Going with the two thread idea . . .

We all post our bits, discuss and edit them in one. Then Astinus reposts them all in a second thread and locks it. If further sections are added later on, she just unlocks the thread, adds, and locks it again! Hm?
 
Should we add our tidbits here? I'm thinking to write a small guide on what is best to avoid writing on.

Also I don't imagine that I'm going to have a big long guide, instead rather, smaller tidbits, that would be just as useful. So as long as it fits in a category (with other people's advice), could that work?
 
I imagine so: a community written guide would consist of many things, and a small contribution is still a contribution. ^^
 
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For those who have read my fic, if they compare that version of the prologue to this version, maybe some more things will be understood. Please feel free to comment.
 
Kanto Lover, regarding the prologues...

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Even though some of the points you responded to were really just opinion versus opinion
I understand that. I wasn't planning on even implying that all guides must follow what my opinions were on writing. If that was true, then no fanfiction out there would have description only because of how awkward I find description (both writing and reading it) to be, especially physical description of a character.

There were somethings that I pointed out that weren't a matter of opinion, such as the minimum word count of short stories. What I'm hoping for with this new guide that's being talked about is a not-so-specific guide. It should be a more general guide, a place for new writers to begin getting advice to figure out how to write fanfiction before they develop their own style. It would be like the basics being shared.

Right now, I'm rather tired from a bad sleeping schedule and from a long day at work (and I doubt that I'll be able to sleep well when I go to bed soon), so I'm not going to say anything in terms of planing out this guide, or any of the other changes to this subforum. If any of you have any more input on this, then feel free to say whatever you have to say.

I'll start the two threads when my mind is actually working.
 
Hooray!

I'm curious: how far ahead do people write ahead before posting a chapter? That is, do you have, keep, say, a chapter or two ahead in Word just in case? The idea occurred to me today, as I'll be away for a few days next week.
 
Hooray!

I'm curious: how far ahead do people write ahead before posting a chapter? That is, do you have, keep, say, a chapter or two ahead in Word just in case? The idea occurred to me today, as I'll be away for a few days next week.

I post two chapters for every one I write. In other words, I don't write ahead.
 
Dude, seriously, Kanto Lover, we just got done using you as an example for why we should split off from the FFL and make separate threads. Especially now that you've given us the entire blinking prologue to your fic. O_x Get a beta!

I don't mean to be biting, but... yeah. It's going to be hard to comment a la beta-style via this thread because, remember, you only got two comments last time around. It might be more beneficial if we could separate your question (i.e., "How does this look?") into its own thread so we can spend some time on discussing what's going on and how to improve your story. As it stands, this thread boxes us in and limits how much conversation we can get going about your work.

And even then, it seems like what you're trying to do is get the entire thread to act as your beta for you. Don't you already have one? I mean, I'm all for commenting on prose and whatnot (and I really have to do so recently because I have, like, three or four stories that still aren't over a month old that are either review requests or otherwise review promises), but it seems like what you're expecting from us is the detailed proofreading that you should really only be getting from someone who's working closely with your work before you post it. Which is, by definition, a beta reader.

As for Citrinin's question, I tend to finish up a half a chapter before I post the next one for AEM. Which, actually, is a bit of a problem because it means there's a bit of a wait for the next one. It was nice when I actually had another chapter waiting in the wings last month because I couldn't stop writing the stupid thing, but. *shrug*

(Also, not having a new chapter waiting before I posted the next one is what's killing A Midsummer Knight's Dream. Because then I wander off somewhere between chapter twelve and thirteen.)

In other words, in answer to the question of whether or not you should work ahead, I say you might as well do it.

P.S. Guys, my beta finally joined PC. Now, to rope her into this thread. *evil hand rubbing*
 
Valentine said:
P.S. Guys, my beta finally joined PC. Now, to rope her into this thread. *evil hand rubbing*
This will be the best evil plot ever. >:D he will have to endure our... posts?

Thanks for your replies. ^^
 
I write ahead for a couple reasons. One, to make sure that I'll actually stick with that project. I would write a few chapters first before I know that I'll be fully committed to that story. Second reason is so I'll have a chapter ready to be posted, considering during uni breaks I have a lot of time to write and when uni starts I don't really have that much time. This break through I haven't written anything besides the 7k story because I suddenly got a lot of things to do this summer. :X

And Valentine, hah my review is more like a mini beta report? XD; I don't really think so. I just explain a couple of things and give advice. Half of the review is actually me posting long excerpts from my fic to better illustrate my explanations. XD In all seriousness though, I get what you're saying. The only problem is maybe there might be a few more people that would also post threads just asking if this scene is good enough and such if you encourage Kanto Lover to do that (though yeah, good that you told her it's better if she brings whatever writing problems she have with the beta).
 
I usually write ahead, having around 1000 words of the next chapter done before I post the current one. Lately though, I've been procratinating, so now I'm behind in my writing and I'm too lazy to write more than I have too. <_<
 
Yay! Procrastinators of PC unite!
Tomorrow . . .

That's the problem I had with all my dead chaptered fics. I lost a little interest after a while. As a result, I didn't feel such an urgent need to write. So I procrastinated. That made me feel further and further away from my fic, making me feel less and less like wanting to write. So I procrastinate more. Eventually, I just go 'screw it!' and delete the file. Not happening with Shattered, though.
 
I've got about ten chapters of two separate stories written and I haven't posted either of them here. I guess that's probably because of a great abundance of writer's block (and also because the five-pages-per-week thing I did with Metal Coat was a real pain...).

So yes, I like to write (or at least think) ahead when I can.
 
Can I safely say that I am the only one that actually finishes the entire fanfic before posting it? While I mostly write one-shots, the one multi-chapter fic I have was completely finished before I released it online.

The reason why I do this is because it tends to take me a long while to write a fanfic. For instance, the multi-chapter fic took me two years to write. So I would like to have an entire fic finished before posting it so that there's not years between chapter postings, to the point where people might forget that the fic exists.

I'm also tending to agree with Valentine, Kanto Lover. You're asking for a group of people to look at your entire prologue in a thread that is for general discussion. If you want more than one or two people to look at your prologue, you should post it in a separate thread. Or at least talk to your beta.

I'm working on starting the revolution here in the Writer's Lounge, everyone. Good news there.
 
This whole issue is the reason that I mostly write oneshots. Requires far less commitment. Go ahead, tell me I'll never be a good author if I keep that up. ^_^ I know. I'm working on it. If I finish Shattered, I'll take it as a sign of improvement.
 
Everyone, I'm ashamed to admit this, but my memory needs refreshing.

What topics would be covered in the stickied FFL thread, compared to being discussed in their own separate thread?

I'm going to assume that the FFL would be used to discuss small writing questions, like the one we just had. I would just like a distinction made by other people before I set things in stone.
 
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