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[Gizamimi Pichu]

Hm, thanks guys, I'll keep that in mind. I think my problem (in the past) with fanfiction, is I've limited myself to canon, apart from creating a few original characters to throw into my own cast.

...This is unrelated, but a memory made me think of it randomly:

Have you guys ever written a bad-fic on purpose?

 

[txteclipse]

ur doin it wrong. Say it with me - "what is this i dont even"

How do you even why is this isn't what? Or, my personal favorite, "are you high?"

EDIT: Ooh, Tetris theme remix on DI's Hard Dance channel.

EDITEDIT: Aww, it's over.

 

[Feign]

Have you guys ever written a bad-fic on purpose?

A story RP parody (see my blog) of the matrix, was the closest thing. Otherwise I haven't written much fan fiction.

If anyone is still around in about an hours time though, feel free to read my one shot of a schizophrenic man living in a Pokemon world XD

 

[Gizamimi Pichu]

he's not Of course he is! Bill is a complex and deep character on multiple levels, and takes incredible amounts of mojo to write.

*snerk*

The fact that 'mojo' and 'Bill' are in the same sentence should not be amusing me like it is. XD (Okay, it SHOULD be!)

 

[Breezy]

Hm, thanks guys, I'll keep that in mind. I think my problem (in the past) with fanfiction, is I've limited myself to canon, apart from creating a few original characters to throw into my own cast.

...This is unrelated, but a memory made me think of it randomly:

Have you guys ever written a bad-fic on purpose?

my first poke'mon fanfic

an letter off compaint!!!

Are those bad fics? Lol. The second one is still kind of scarily accurate even though it's four years old.

 

[Feign]

lol... interesting.

Also does anyone have a main conflict my schizophrenic character can have, besides the smaller inner conflicts? Right now it seems more like a "Day in the life of" type of thing XD

 

[Misheard Whisper]

Breezy, how could you? ^_^ Those are scarily good and terrifyingly awful at the same time!

I have no idea what I just said. Who did why how that WHUT.

 

[Citrinin]

Also does anyone have a main conflict my schizophrenic character can have, besides the smaller inner conflicts? Right now it seems more like a "Day in the life of" type of thing XD

Interior monologue about religion? (although, be careful that you are doing schizophrenia, and not DID by accident.)

 

[Feign]

Hmm yeah I think I already seem to have a bit of the latter embedded in the character >.>

Ah whatever XD I'll have it up soon so that I'll get everyone's review of "Wtfbbq"

 

[Misheard Whisper]

How about ethics? Bloodthirsty killer vs diehard pacifist? And I don't know the difference between schizo and DID, do I?
Me: No, I don't. Do you?
Me: No, I already asked you. I don't.
Me: Well, don't get huffy with me. I was just asking.
Me: But I already asked!
Me: That doesn't mean I can't ask. For all I know, you might have just been testing me!
Me: Testing you? Why would I do that?
Me: Because that's what you do! You're the wannabe psychologist.
Me: No, I'm not. I want to be a burlesque dancer!
Me: . . . no, you don't.
Me: You're right. I was joking.
Me: Why?
Me: Because that's just how I roll.
Me: . . .
Me: EDIT: I think I got ninja'd.
Me: You mean we got ninja'd.
Me: Same difference.
Me: That made no sense.
Me: Why not?
Me: Because 'same' is the opposite of 'different', and the two don't go together.
Me: Yes, they can. Look, I'll prove it. *scribbles*
Me: That's not proof, that's a Dragonite on steroids!
Me: Exactly. The Dragonite defies your so-called 'logic'
Me: If you say so.
Me: I do say so.
Me: Say so again, and I'll show you the true meaning of pain.
Me: . . . Touche.

 

[txteclipse]

How about ethics? Bloodthirsty killer vs diehard pacifist? And I don't know the difference between schizo and DID, do I?
Me: No, I don't. Do you?
Me: No, I already asked you. I don't.
Me: Well, don't get huffy with me. I was just asking.
Me: But I already asked!
Me: That doesn't mean I can't ask. For all I know, you might have just been testing me!
Me: Testing you? Why would I do that?
Me: Because that's what you do! You're the wannabe psychologist.
Me: No, I'm not. I want to be a burlesque dancer!
Me: . . . no, you don't.
Me: You're right. I was joking.
Me: Why?
Me: Because that's just how I roll.
Me: . . .

DID is pretty much where you have two or more distinct personalities taking control alternately (like your example there) while schizophrenia is more like paranoia, hallucinations, and such. It is kind of hard to tell the difference, but I think schizophrenia doesn't necessarily mean multiple personalities.

In any case, I'd personally go for the person with no conscience. They could just as easily flay a person alive as make a sandwich, and not feel any remorse nor understand why it's wrong. Those types are the scariest (face eater guy was one of them).

 

[Misheard Whisper]

i hate ppl like that.

I ninja'd you there, txty. Lol. Look at that post again.
Me: Yeah, look again.
Me: Not you again!
Me: Yes, me again! What'cha gonna do about it?
Me: *pulls out shotgun and shoots Me in head*
Me: I think you just caused a paradox. You killed yourself without killing yourself.
Me: Damn. *universe collapses*

 

[Feign]

It is up, and yes I totally took Shakespear's quote as a title but :P

And yes there are two whole mentions about Pokemon :P

EDIT: make that 3 references of Pokemon.

 

[Misheard Whisper]

Will review that in the morning. Currently trying to finish Chapter 2 of Shattered before bed, so no time now. Definitely will review, though.

 

[txteclipse]

It is up, and yes I totally took Shakespear's quote as a title but :P

And yes there are two whole mentions about Pokemon :P

EDIT: make that 3 references of Pokemon.

'Twas bizarre. I could slightly tell that you wrote it in two hours or so, however.

Dangit, now I want to do one. But I need to finish my current chapter and sleep. BAH!

 

[Feign]

'Twas bizarre. I could slightly tell that you wrote it in two hours or so, however.

Yeah, I wasn't putting *that much* effort into it (especially plot wise), but it was fun to write XD

I did however enjoy the fact that I almost nearly wrote it completely as though he were the narrator (sans the fact that its written in 3rd person).

EDIT: Okay for the most part I solved that.

 

[Misheard Whisper]

If you wrote it in two hours, I recommend you look it over a few more times. I haven't looked at it yet, but I don't want to read it if it's a rush job. >:{

 

[Feign]

It was only a rush type, only because it was done half heartidley. Think of it like getting an idea out of the way XD (another reason why it was a one shot). It seems okay grammatically, but perhaps plot wise it could have been better. Though I did say it sort of seemed like a 'day in the life of' XD

Nonetheless, I'm glad I finished it, regardless of how it turned out (aside from the grammar and spelling aspect, as I don't suffer that much from them).

That and also because I'm supposed to be planning my real chaptered fic XD (which of course would take longer to write/edit etc).

 

[Bay]

i hate ppl like that.

I ninja'd you there, txty. Lol. Look at that post again.
Me: Yeah, look again.
Me: Not you again!
Me: Yes, me again! What'cha gonna do about it?
Me: *pulls out shotgun and shoots Me in head*
Me: I think you just caused a paradox. You killed yourself without killing yourself.
Me: Damn. *universe collapses*

XD That quote actually reminds me of the ending of Lu's fic Aftershock. Now the character in that story IS CRAZY, him trying to figure out the universe and trying to change it. xD

txteclipse, agree that it's a perfect song for Umbreon. Actually, for any Dark type. :D

 

[Misheard Whisper]

Swampoleongaurdian [sic]: "lol hi guys this is a story thread that im posting in writer's lounge!"
Us: "'Kay. We're going to give you advice."
Swampoleon: "wut u gais r meen!!11eleventy"
Us: "Um... 'kay?"
Swampoleon: "heres another idea thread!!!111"
Us: "We're going to comment, assuming you're actually planning on writing this."
Swampoleon: "lol jk gais heres another thread and another thread and another thread."
Sparkling Dragon: "WTF."
The rest of us: "Word."
Swampoleon: "omg u gais r pestering me!!!1"
Everyone and their mothers: "lols heres more idea threads!!111sixtytwo"
Jax: "Uh, 'kay, so I saw all this going on in Writer's Lounge, and is anyone else getting annoyed?"
liveitout: "I think idea threads are just there because people don't actually want to write. :)"
Jax: "...Are you ****ing serious?"
Remus Lupin: "Yes. That too."
Harry Potter: "What?"
Remus Lupin: "Oops. Too much information."
The rest of the FFL: "We can't stop these people from posting threads, but it's totally a problem. Seriously."
Jax: "You know what? How about I just work on a plot bunny thread?"
Bay: "Oh, by the way, Serebii covers all kinds of topics in their WL, whereas we try to dump all these topics into the FFL. That might be the problem."
The rest of the FFL: "lulz, Serebii."
solvino: "Hey, guys. 'Sup?"
Kanto Lover: "Plz beta my fic here's the prologue?"
The rest of us: "WTF, mates?"
Astinus: "Oh, by the way, did anyone else notice how stupid some of these guides are? By the way, I'm also proposing we redo a lot of crap in this forum."
The rest of us: "...YAY REWRITES!"
Swampoleon: "U gaiz r meen!" *gives up*
Us: "Finally."
Breezy: "Hey, what's a destiny fic?"
The rest of us: *Complex discussion on the nature of the above*
Astinus: "Sorry guys, no revolution. My computer died."
Everyone: "Aw . . ."
Feign: "Let's all write stories about psychos!"​