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[JX Valentine]

and now I realize that I've been kind of neglecting my mod duties in favor of...really happy Sims.

Ah, the Sims. The computer game that makes a pervert and a peeping tom out of all of us.

And now I'm really confused. Seal of approval?

Oh, no, my dear. Stamp of approval. Stamp. It's something completely different. Really.

Seriously, maybe Oni was thinking of the old way I reviewed? Or someone else's current reviewing system? Or maybe the way the USDA reviews chickens and livestock?

 

[Astinus]

Ah, the Sims. The computer game that makes a pervert and a peeping tom out of all of us.

This is why I'm really glad that EAxis got with the times and realized that not everyone chases after the opposite. And with the quality of pictures I can take in the game...!

*shuts herself up*

Oh, no, my dear. Stamp of approval. Stamp. It's something completely different. Really.

I reiterate: I'm in college, and I can't read.

Seriously, maybe Oni was thinking of the old way I reviewed? Or someone else's current reviewing system? Or maybe the way the USDA reviews chickens and livestock?

And now I have the image of my smiling face on a gold sticker that says: "Approved by the gods of neutrality! Good quality fanfiction to feed your family!"

Seriously, Oni, what did you mean?

 

[Bay]

Man, whenever I'm busy, this place gets busy. XD

On that post Oni Raichu did, too me I think the writer is putting some effort into his/her story. I remember doing my first story I probably had a thousand grammar mistakes. He/she has a gist of telling a story but not really the showing part yet and the pacing. Yeah, pretty much how I would do a review on that story is to tell him to work more on the emotions and to look over the story and fix the story (both on grammar and other things like emotions) up to his/he ability until he's ready to post.

And on Sims? Hadn't played too much of it because of school and work, but I saw my sister played that game and was addicted to it for quite some time. XD

Okay, now to get my lazy butt and revise Chapters 8 and 9 of "Nothing, Everything". XD

 

[Percy Thrillington]

I have a seal of approval? I honestly did not know, and now I realize that I've been kind of neglecting my mod duties in favor of...really happy Sims.

And I would never approve a story like that. Why? Because I'm a mean old b-witch without a care in the world, and no other color but black in my heart.

I would tell that person who wrote that story that they should improve, and at least know how to spell a Pokemon's name right. And to make paragraphs, and spell-check, and add more, and all these other random pieces of advice that I don't give anymore because I don't review.

And now I'm really confused. Seal of approval?

Oh, Skunter, your links...I can't click them. :< But yeah, if your fakemon fills a role that no canon Pokemon and fulfill, then you are all right.

I was stuck on the next sentence and I had already done one week later of n00b reviews, so I just saw your username as I was scrolling down and I was reading through one of Johto101's fan fics, which reminded me of the way Jax (as she, herself, guessed) used to do that yoke of approval on fics on PFU. I wrote it down, unaware of the controversy it would cause.

 

[Sydian]

o.o There we go. All of oni's Special fics. If I find any more, I'll let you know.

Thanks...I'm gonna read Friday...since it's the only one my stupid school isn't blocking. X.x

( good story bad way to write )

Heh heh. ;D

Oh yeah, I'm having some personal problems and won't be able to post chapter three of Just A Brother for a while...my thread won't be closed for...need say, neglect? xD The only time I've had to get on here is at school, and it blocks my own story...so...nyah. X.x And mah story's going good so far...I can't wait to get everything up...and written...haven't had time to write, either. And I've had writer's block.

 

[JX Valentine]

Oh yeah, I'm having some personal problems

Hope everything clears up soon. O_o It's okay. Sometimes, we all need a break from the computer to take care of things.

my thread won't be closed for...need say, neglect? xD

I let my stories idle for a few months too, so I think you can get away with it. XD

 

[Astinus]

Oh yeah, I'm having some personal problems and won't be able to post chapter three of Just A Brother for a while...my thread won't be closed for...need say, neglect?

If you don't post every three days, your thread gets closed. I've just been lazy and haven't gotten around to closing threads yet.

So just as a note, people: If you haven't updated your fic yet, do so. Otherwise, your thread gets closed.

I wrote it down, unaware of the controversy it would cause.

I love the fact that since I don't use emoticons in my posts that much, no one knows if I'm being serious or not.

 

[JX Valentine]

If you don't post every three days, your thread gets closed. I've just been lazy and haven't gotten around to closing threads yet.

Oh yeah. I forgot that you make an exception with me because I'm your lover.

I mean...

 

[Astinus]

I just choked on some blueberry nuggets.

Right, aren't we supposed to be discussing fanfiction?

I'll start: I was going to write something today, but I left my pencil in my other class. Now I can't write anything, so I'm going to skip my math class and organize my pr0ny pictures of my Sims.

 

[BREAKINGBEN]

Heh, uhm... here's a weird question but, How do you type Ho-oh's cry? I need it for the first chapter of my fic >.<.

 

[Astinus]

Like so: CAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I normally just write that "Ho-Oh screeched/cawed/cried". There's no need to actually write the sound that it makes. It's like a few good paragraphs of Pikachu talking in "Pika pika chu pi ka!" I just say that Pikachu chattered, and just kind of leave it at that.

 

[BREAKINGBEN]

Well, I don't really want to give it away that it IS Ho-oh.. I want people to guess at it :).

 

[JX Valentine]

Well, I don't really want to give it away that it IS Ho-oh.. I want people to guess at it :).

You can still go with what Astinus suggested, simply replacing the word "Ho-oh" with either a physical description ("a rainbow-colored bird screeched" or even just "a bird screeched") or calling it "fierce but melodious" -- or something along those lines. I would suggest playing the cry over and over again and trying to describe what you hear.

 

[BREAKINGBEN]

Ok, I guess I'll just go with a description.

 

[Gummy]

If you don't post every three days, your thread gets closed. I've just been lazy and haven't gotten around to closing threads yet.

So just as a note, people: If you haven't updated your fic yet, do so. Otherwise, your thread gets closed.

Wait, you are joking here, right? What if there are no replies to a chapter and the next one can't be finished in three days?

 

[bobandbill]

Wait, you are joking here, right? What if there are no replies to a chapter and the next one can't be finished in three days?

... he's joking. Would be odd otherwise...

 

[Gummy]

Ah, thanks, bobandbill (btw, Astinus is a girl). Got a little scared there. I don't even start writing my next chapter until about four days after the previous one was posted/finished.

 

[Unforgettable]

This is why I'm really glad that EAxis got with the times and realized that not everyone chases after the opposite. And with the quality of pictures I can take in the game...!

*shuts herself up*


I reiterate: I'm in college, and I can't read.

I just died. And I'm happy for it too! Not every girl likes a guy, and not every guy likes a girl. I'm surprised that there weren't redneck hardcore church people complaining about it yet.

And it has been proven, college makes you ability to read go down. And the ability to spell also. XD

 

[JX Valentine]

Ah, thanks, bobandbill (btw, Astinus is a girl). Got a little scared there. I don't even start writing my next chapter until about four days after the previous one was posted/finished.

So, I'm guessing you also took my comment right after that post seriously in light of the one just before it? XD

(Although I might be serious. I may or may not know that Astinus is very good.)

 

[Sydian]

If you don't post every three days, your thread gets closed. I've just been lazy and haven't gotten around to closing threads yet.

So just as a note, people: If you haven't updated your fic yet, do so. Otherwise, your thread gets closed.

Yikes. I'll be on it tomorrow. X.x

My fic is going a million times better than my other...-throws it out- EVIL!