Blue Angel
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- Seen Apr 7, 2016
Yeah! Go Jax!
Now I see why you use the Exploding Charizard example.
I agree 100% with you and all those other people.
That kid was a jerk. You were kind enough to actually read and critique vs. locking him down immediately.
It was like watching an American Idol contestant brag about how great they are, sing off-key, say that they know they were great, then the judges tell them off for their cocky attitude. Then they leaves the stage cussing up a storm. See it too often...
I'd be honored if you took that much detail in reading mine when I finally get around to posting it here ^ ^
I read "unthirsty" and after the first 2 bad ones and 2 years, I was surprised to see that it looked better, a lot better. Although, I could tell from the comments he was still stubborn and kinda had to be forced to organize it into paragraphs like it is now.
Now I see why you use the Exploding Charizard example.
I agree 100% with you and all those other people.
That kid was a jerk. You were kind enough to actually read and critique vs. locking him down immediately.
It was like watching an American Idol contestant brag about how great they are, sing off-key, say that they know they were great, then the judges tell them off for their cocky attitude. Then they leaves the stage cussing up a storm. See it too often...
I'd be honored if you took that much detail in reading mine when I finally get around to posting it here ^ ^
I read "unthirsty" and after the first 2 bad ones and 2 years, I was surprised to see that it looked better, a lot better. Although, I could tell from the comments he was still stubborn and kinda had to be forced to organize it into paragraphs like it is now.
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