FireRed hack: [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)

[skyhart]

Here is what I meant by the width, It should be in the attachment.
Its the black outline pixel.

I could just be me, but I think it would look better if it was just one pixel wider.

EDIT: oops, I forgot to point at the smaller image, but its the same exact pixel though, I'm sure.

 

[minchan]

Here is what I meant by the width, It should be in the attachment.
Its the black outline pixel.

I could just be me, but I think it would look better if it was just one pixel wider.

EDIT: oops, I forgot to point at the smaller image, but its the same exact pixel though, I'm sure.

oh you meant the bigger one? cos i thought that was ok looking. lemme see... *opens paint*

Here's what I came up with:

They're slightly different but they both have the extra pixel now. (the big ones)
the difference is that I changed the outlines slightly on each. ^^

 

[skyhart]

oh you meant the bigger one? cos i thought that was ok looking. lemme see... *opens paint*

I'm not saying I'm 100% right, but if you like zoom a LOT, i think you will know what I mean.

EDIT: It kinda looks the same, are you sure you know which one I'm talking about
I guess I was kinda not clear, lol, I meant the pixel that is like dented into the leg.

 

[minchan]

If that's not it, I'm not sure what you mean. ^^;

I'm not really a spriter. I mean I can sprite but I'm not great.
So my edits might be totally wrong anyway.

 

[skyhart]

I really don't want to double post, but it's the only way I could get an attachment
EDIT: YES!! you posted before my double. lol
EDIT: this time I actually "marked" the actual pixel or in this case pixel"s"

You could move the top one or both.

 

[minchan]

I really don't want to double post, but it's the only way I could get an attachment
EDIT: YES!! you posted before my double. lol
EDIT: this time I actually "marked" the actual pixel or in this case pixel"s"

You could move the top one or both.

I did edit that pixel. On both my edits before.
Maybe you're not looking in the right spot?

 

[skyhart]

My fault lol, I guess it will look better if you move 2 pixels then.

1) the one you already moved 2) and then one right below it

Maybe moving both would help, but who knows
Hey btw, where is Vannah?

 

[minchan]

Any better?

And I have NO idea where Vannah went off to. LOL

 

[Vannah☆]

Im here. And heck no, that's not working for me. xD We need to like, get on msn or something. I've been on skpe this entire time with some friends.

 

[skyhart]

I don't know about everyone else though, but in my opinion it looks AWESOME!!!
If this next comment sounds sexist or rude then I apologize.

Most women's legs are thicker at the upper thigh, and thins down at each lower part of their leg.
Not trying to say thats fat. I didn't mean fat by thick. Just thick, lol. Don't know how else to put it so sorry if this is offensive to anyone. I'm not trying to be.

Edit: if you want go ahead and add my msn thing

 

[Vannah☆]

I dunno. If we're gonna keep it that way, then the shading needs to be fixed or something because that just looks unnatural like her leg got swelled up or something. xD We really need to stop flooding this board with edits though.

 

[skyhart]

Sorry about the edits, lol.
Oh and I was actually just going to say to change the lightings and shadings, but I think that the size and shape is really good.

 

[minchan]

Well I dunno much about spriting - in terms of highlights and shadows and positioning, but I guess you could add me on msn and/or skype. I'll pm you both.

 

[skyhart]

Well I dunno much about spriting - in terms of highlights and shadows and positioning, but I guess you could add me on msn and/or skype. I'll pm you both.

If you want just go ahead and add me, my msn thing is on the post thing.

 

[Vannah☆]

Final sprite hopefully:

EDIT:

Remember Koccinip? Redid him a bit.

 

[13ullseye.]

is there anyway i can be a beta tester? and this is by far the best hack i have seen yet :):):):)

 

[skyhart]

is there anyway i can be a beta tester? and this is by far the best hack i have seen yet :):):):)

In the earlier posts of this hack, it was stated that they were full.

 

[Westrmistr]

Hey everyone! I'm back! I've missed so much o__O

The tiles and Trainers look good. But that's the best I can tell you because I haven't studied them. I'll let the people who have seen them help out for now. ;)

I like how my Tropie is coming, and it IS a baby Pokemon, like Vannah said. I was going for something like Pichu to Pikachu, but they're a little too simple. And Riolu to Lucario are too similar. So Tropie is actually in the middle. But, it's time for Tropie madness!

Edited Tropie.

Tropie with a top hat!

 

[jbs829]

the female trainer's face looks too long, and something about it just doesnt look right

 

[Vannah☆]

Three females now. You see, the main characters are 17 or 18 in the story. Therefore, they have longer more mature faces and more developed features. This excludes the rival who's about 13 14 or 15. I made the first female there have a smaller face, but to do that, she has to be shorter, which would make her look a bit younger than she is.

As for Tropie... The flat-ish head bothers me now. The hat is cute though.

Again...

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