Lot's WiP comic and general talk

Yeah, that makes sense if you'd rather not draw people. The timeline still looks good without it anyway!
also.... it's in progress, i think, but, i made a new dnd character yesterday... :love:
she's not related to nicon in any way, though...



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she's so pretty, i think :D ^^
but!
I. am. so. bad .at. hands! .... & feet! 😣
but i think i like her more then nicon : D

her name is now ''saria'' ... saria Gracewood :love:
she has a childhood pet & best friend... she is a Almiraj which is a rabbit with a horn & she's named ''nutmeg'' :love: i think nutmeg came out so adorably, too :love:
 

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it went from ''na & alo are from paldea'' to ''na & alo are from serene village on the water continent'' :love: :coolrim:

That makes sense because of the story changes. I had just thought you'd already done that dialog fix I guess. :p

also.... it's in progress, i think, but, i made a new dnd character yesterday... :love:
she's not related to nicon in any way, though...

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she's so pretty, i think :D ^^
but!
I. am. so. bad .at. hands! .... & feet! 😣
but i think i like her more then nicon : D

She reminds me a bit of Dawn from Pokemon from how she looks. Her hair looks especially nice!

her name is now ''saria'' ... saria Gracewood :love:

That's a very nice name! ^^

she has a childhood pet & best friend... she is a Almiraj which is a rabbit with a horn & she's named ''nutmeg'' :love: i think nutmeg came out so adorably, too :love:

Nutmeg also turned out really nice! You could almost remove the horn and add her as a background character to Buttermilk's comic since she looks so rabbit-like.


Cool! It certainly looks friendly.
 
That makes sense because of the story changes.
:woop:

I had just thought you'd already done that dialog fix I guess. :p
no problem :>

She reminds me a bit of Dawn from Pokemon from how she looks. Her hair looks especially nice!
thanks :D

i updated that post while you were typing & i drew on her bracelet which isn't weaved from mistletoe, but it's got a poinsettia on it, as it says on the description :love:

That's a very nice name! ^^
thanks! :D i think so too :3

Nutmeg also turned out really nice! You could almost remove the horn and add her as a background character to Buttermilk's comic since she looks so rabbit-like.
thanks! i'm glad you like her :D
i think i might add the back spots that she has :woop:

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Cool! It certainly looks friendly.
thanks!:love:
 
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I'm sure you'll think of something for her to sing for the comic at some point, but you could always have her sing a tiny part of "Somewhere Out There" from An American Tail as a way to test how it might look. (and because the mouse theme is fitting :p)



The waltograph one looks better to me, the tangled one looks a bit too sharp.



That's really cute! Do you think you'll have any of her sister's friends join Buttermilk to find something to help make her sister feel better?
i made a alternate scared expression for buttermilk : o

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i updated that post while you were typing & i drew on her bracelet which isn't weaved from mistletoe, but it's got a poinsettia on it, as it says on the description :love:

Her flower bracelet is very pretty! The red leaves really help it stand out.

thanks! i'm glad you like her :D
i think i might add the back spots that she has :woop:

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Her spots look nice, and they also make her look even more like a mythical animal.

i made a alternate scared expression for buttermilk : o

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That's a really nice change! And I also just realized you don't have a 'laughing' Buttermilk expression on this list.
 
Her flower bracelet is very pretty!
i know : D

they're the petals of a poinsettia :>...

The red leaves really help it stand out.
:love:

Her spots look nice, and they also make her look even more like a mythical animal.
:love:

That's a really nice change! And I also just realized you don't have a 'laughing' Buttermilk expression on this list.
you're right there :3
that's next, then :>

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i know : D

they're the petals of a poinsettia :>...

Indeed! And they have a very pretty red color to them. ^^

you're right there :3
that's next, then :>

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I like that you have a couple of different versions for when she's either laughing slightly or laughing a lot, that's a good detail!

i thought of something after encountering a big bug flying around in the toilet room upstairs... 😣

main enemy/villan is a big black fly/bee bully named ... i don't know what his or her name is yet....

I'm sorry you had to put up with one of those big flies, that couldn't have been pleasant...

But that sounds like a good idea for a bully character.
 
Indeed! And they have a very pretty red color to them. ^^
yeah, it does :woop:

I like that you have a couple of different versions for when she's either laughing slightly or laughing a lot, that's a good detail!
thanks :D

I'm sorry you had to put up with one of those big flies, that couldn't have been pleasant...
i tried to get to the window to let it out this morning *or rather a while after i woke up at 12: something pm.. or 11: something am.. i forget*... but i gave up.... 😑
so mum got it out the window :>

But that sounds like a good idea for a bully character.
yeah, i thought so, too.... :>

i think i'm gonna draw him/her sometime :woop:

main villain maybe? :hattremhuh: villain that made summer sick, maybe? :hattremhuh: villain that she tried to befriend, but decieved her, somehow , cause she was too naive & made her sick somehow, maybe? :hattremhuh: i don't know... some idea for more story plot/back story for the script... something that i still don't know how to write 😑
 
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i tried to get to the window to let it out this morning *or rather a while after i woke up at 12: something pm.. or 11: something am.. i forget*... but i gave up.... 😑
so mum got it out the window :>

At least it's gone now! ^^

i think i'm gonna draw him/her sometime :woop:

Cool. I wonder what it'll look like? :hattremhuh:

main villain maybe? :hattremhuh: villain that made summer sick, maybe? :hattremhuh: villain that she tried to befriend, but decieved her, somehow , cause she was too naive & made her sick somehow, maybe? :hattremhuh: i don't know... some idea for more story plot/back story for the script... something that i still don't know how to write 😑

Maybe it asked her to get something from a dangerous place, and when she gets the thing for it, she gets sick on the way back out?

would you believe it? the potle region has 150 pokemon in the dex now : o

Hey, that's awesome!
 
At least it's gone now! ^^
:love:

Cool. I wonder what it'll look like? :hattremhuh:
:woop:

Maybe it asked her to get something from a dangerous place, and when she gets the thing for it, she gets sick on the way back out?
maybe.... just maybe.... :D to get what & get sick by what, though, i wonder :hattremhuh:

that can go with this part - '' villain that she tried to befriend, but decieved her, somehow , cause she was too naive & made her sick somehow, maybe'' :3

maybe he's got two faces to him? :o yeah, he's a male now :>



maybe he'll say things like ''it's your fault for being so naive & quick to help'' :0

i think he might be the one behind everything :0


now, kyle the fennec fox... he may act like a jerk... but i don't think he'd do anything like him :>



i made this :3 https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/adventures-of-buttermilk-the-mouse-comic-stuffs-1058654914
Hey, that's awesome!
it is, isn't it :love:
 
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maybe.... just maybe.... :D to get what & get sick by what, though, i wonder :hattremhuh:

that can go with this part - '' villain that she tried to befriend, but decieved her, somehow , cause she was too naive & made her sick somehow, maybe'' :3

maybe he's got two faces to him? :o yeah, he's a male now :>

Hmm, not sure. It could also be a perfectly fine thing, but the place where it is is dangerous, and going there is what makes her sick?

maybe he'll say things like ''it's your fault for being so naive & quick to help'' :0

i think he might be the one behind everything :0

That does sound like something a villain would say, indeed.

Does he have anyone that works for him?

now, kyle the fennec fox... he may act like a jerk... but i don't think he'd do anything like him :>

He's probably just having a bad day. :p While the fly is just evil. >.>


Is that for storing info about the comic?


Those all look great, but the inverted colors on Locaw look especially nice!

he's some kind of villianous trickster...

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the bottom one is how he first appears, i think... : o

He kinda reminds me of this villain:
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Giving me more of a trickster energy rather than a dominating evil kinda feeling like certain others. Good art of the fly by the way!
 
Hmm, not sure. It could also be a perfectly fine thing, but the place where it is is dangerous, and going there is what makes her sick?
hmmm.... maybe :o :hattremhuh:

That does sound like something a villain would say, indeed.
yeah :3

Does he have anyone that works for him?
hmmm.....
i don't know....
don't think so? :hattremhuh:

He's probably just having a bad day. :p While the fly is just evil. >.>
yeah :>


Is that for storing info about the comic?
yeah, it is :love:


Those all look great, but the inverted colors on Locaw look especially nice!
thanks! :D

He kinda reminds me of this villain:
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Giving me more of a trickster energy rather than a dominating evil kinda feeling like certain others.
who's that? :o

Good art of the fly by the way!
thanks :3
 
Hmm, not sure. It could also be a perfectly fine thing, but the place where it is is dangerous, and going there is what makes her sick?
i made 2 new characters... based on my old deerling pokesona & my old riolu pokesona that i don't use anymore :>

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i think i'm not good at drawing deers 😅

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i decided to base her off a racoon
 
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hmmm.....
i don't know....
don't think so? :hattremhuh:

He doesn't really need them, I was just curious if he was going to be the only evil character in the story.

yeah, it is :love:

Nice!

who's that? :o

He's the villain from the movie The Princess and the Frog. Here's the trailer that came out for the movie:

i made 2 new characters... based on my old deerling pokesona & my old riolu pokesona that i don't use anymore :>

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i think i'm not good at drawing deers 😅

Deer have some weird shapes to them anyway. :p And I think you still did good with it!

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i decided to base her off a racoon

A racoon really does fit a Riolu's design, more than I would have even guessed before seeing the two right next to each other. That surprises me. I really like the lighter color eye mask on Chiruri!

i changed my violet+expansion team line-up a bit :D
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to have a young snubbull,
the young torkoal & my little young yungoos in it :love:

Cool! But what made you want to change them around? :hattremhuh:
 
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