Lot's WiP comic and general talk

Alex_Among_Foxes said:
Really? Now that's a surprise! I wonder who'll be the lead character in the Nuzlocke then...



Nope. With parents like his, he could be a lot worse.
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i updated page 1 a little more to fix sil's eyes -
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edit 2: you never know... i may go back & fix his croc muzzle... sometime....
but.... he doesn't look weird, does he? i tried redrawing his muzzle.... but i messed up... so i'm keeping this ver... 😅


edit: page 2 is done :D -
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page 3 is coming soon... i think :D
i think this was a sort of beta-test... or maybe not? to see how i'd do.... you think i should post it on deviantart now or wait a while? hmmm 😯


i don't even know what the main comic cover will look like 😯😧 not sure but any ideas at all? & what do i even call it, this comic?😅
 
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popplio25 said:
i updated page 1 a little more to fix sil's eyes -
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edit 2: you never know... i may go back & fix his croc muzzle... sometime....
but.... he doesn't look weird, does he? i tried redrawing his muzzle.... but i messed up... so i'm keeping this ver... 😅
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There's nothing wrong with this version, he looks fine! I didn't think he looked weird to begin with.

popplio25 said:
edit: page 2 is done :D -
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Looks great! Looking forward to seeing where it goes from here!

popplio25 said:
page 3 is coming soon... i think :D
i think this was a sort of beta-test... or maybe not? to see how i'd do.... you think i should post it on deviantart now or wait a while? hmmm 😯
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Awesome!
You are still working on some of the designs and things aren't you? I'd say wait until you have a chapter or so finished first.

popplio25 said:
i don't even know what the main comic cover will look like 😯😧 not sure but any ideas at all? & what do i even call it, this comic?😅
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You could always call it "[Main character's name]'s (PMD Style) Heart Gold Nuzlocke!" or something like that. As for a cover, I'd say give that some time as well, you neven know what might inspire something great!
 
Alex_Among_Foxes said:
There's nothing wrong with this version, he looks fine! I didn't think he looked weird to begin with.
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yay! 🤗



Alex_Among_Foxes said:
Looks great! Looking forward to seeing where it goes from here!
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🤗

i'm still working on page 3 :3

i'm still having trouble figuring out how to constantly make the building next to them look good...😯 & bigger 😑
& i think i suck at drawing trees.... 🙄

& now i can't figure out how to draw new bark (newwind town) from looking at cyndaquil😑

Alex_Among_Foxes said:
Awesome!
You are still working on some of the designs and things aren't you?
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yeah, i am
i still have to continue list 2 for this... i'm stuck at the pokeathalon...

Alex_Among_Foxes said:
I'd say wait until you have a chapter or so finished first.
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:3


Alex_Among_Foxes said:
You could always call it "[Main character's name]'s (PMD Style) Heart Gold Nuzlocke!" or something like that.
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:3

Alex_Among_Foxes said:
As for a cover, I'd say give that some time as well, you neven know what might inspire something great!
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ok :3
 
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Alex_Among_Foxes said:
Cool! What made you want to make even more teams?
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you know... team fluffears recruiting all these pokemon...

''team natsukashi''
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''team keisatsu''
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''team guispect''
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i bet you anything that hika will Not want all that stress, recruiting everyone one of them 😯😧
 
popplio25 said:
you know... team fluffears recruiting all these pokemon...

''team natsukashi''
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''team keisatsu''
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''team guispect''
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i bet you anything that hika will Not want all that stress, recruiting everyone one of them 😯😧
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That would indeed be a lot of Pokemon to have to deal with!
 
Alex_Among_Foxes said:
That would indeed be a lot of Pokemon to have to deal with!
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yeah.... she wouldn't be able to handle all that....


sooo..... if it comes down to it, i'll just have someone else ... aka: team phimamin handle those recruits... & let said recruited pokemon handle building their own teams....
that'd be a weight off hika, i think 🤗


Alex_Among_Foxes said:
Looks great! Looking forward to seeing where it goes from here!
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🤗

i'm still working on page 3 :3

i'm still having trouble figuring out how to constantly make the building next to them look good...😯 & bigger 😑
& i think i suck at drawing trees.... 🙄

& now i can't figure out how to draw new bark (newwind town) from looking at cyndaquil😑


Alex_Among_Foxes said:
Awesome!
You are still working on some of the designs and things aren't you?
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yeah, i am
i still have to continue list 2 for this... i'm on route 37 now...
 
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Alex_Among_Foxes said:
Looks great! Looking forward to seeing where it goes from here!
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by the way, untill i figure out how to draw the building from looking at the cyndaquil from the front & her nature/personality, on page 3 panel 5, i think i'll put page 3 on hold 😑


but if you want to see it before it's done, here -
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popplio25 said:
yeah.... she wouldn't be able to handle all that....

sooo..... if it comes down to it, i'll just have someone else ... aka: team phimamin handle those recruits... & let said recruited pokemon handle building their own teams....
that'd be a weight of hika, i think 🤗
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Always nice to see friends and teammates helping each other!

popplio25 said:
i'm still working on page 3 :3

i'm still having trouble figuring out how to constantly make the building next to them look good...😯 & bigger 😑
& i think i suck at drawing trees.... 🙄

& now i can't figure out how to draw new bark (newwind town) from looking at cyndaquil😑
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Well, I suck at drawing stick people much less trees, so don't feel too down about it. Just spend a bit of time practicing them, and maybe check out how some other comic artists draw them for some inspiration. 👍

popplio25 said:
yeah, i am
i still have to continue list 2 for this... i'm on route 37 now...
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Still making progress! And since you already have your much more elaborate list finished, you don't have to start from the complete beginning.

popplio25 said:
by the way, untill i figure out how to draw the building from looking at the cyndaquil from the front & her nature/personality, on page 3 panel 5, i think i'll put page 3 on hold 😑

but if you want to see it before it's done, here -
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The page looks really nice! And yeah, if you feel like you need to take a break, do it. The last thing you want to get is burned out.
 
Alex_Among_Foxes said:
Always nice to see friends and teammates helping each other!
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yeah 🤗



Alex_Among_Foxes said:
Well, I suck at drawing stick people much less trees, so don't feel too down about it.
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🙂

the main trouble is the research library center building to be figured out from cyndaquil's front & some of new bark from that prospective 😑

Alex_Among_Foxes said:
Just spend a bit of time practicing them, and maybe check out how some other comic artists draw them for some inspiration. 👍
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i could do, yeah :3



Alex_Among_Foxes said:
Still making progress! And since you already have your much more elaborate list finished, you don't have to start from the complete beginning.
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🤗



Alex_Among_Foxes said:
The page looks really nice!
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thanks ^^

Alex_Among_Foxes said:
And yeah, if you feel like you need to take a break, do it. The last thing you want to get is burned out.
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i know 😑

🤗
 
Alex_Among_Foxes said:
Always nice to see friends and teammates helping each other!
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you know what i randomly found on my 5th playthrough of legands arceus...

[PokeCommunity.com] Lot's WiP comic and general talk


one of the villains in pmd explorers of sky
& eevee, one of which is liu the vulpix's timid & bashful best friend and teammate.... *her one is female, but 😶*

that has to be the most random thing that comes from arceus ever 😯 i wonder if the god of pokemon, arceus knows 😶...
foreshadowing, maybe... or just a coincidence.. 😮
 
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Alex_Among_Foxes said:
For Oras I'd say Relaxed, for Oshi I'd say Timid. Something about her eyes that just seems like she's always a little worried about something.
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good choices... i'll take them :3

& i think so too about little oshi 😯



how about these two? 😯
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these two are only two of 5 pokemon of this group...


what do you think about the post 3 posts above this one, by the way? 😯
 
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popplio25 said:
how about these two? 😯
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these two are only two of 5 pokemon of this group...
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For Rin, I'd say Timid again, but if you want to keep them somewhat varied, you could always go with Careful instead.
For Alto, (great name by the way) I would go with Adamant.

popplio25 said:
what do you think about the post 3 posts above this one, by the way? 😯
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Not sure I know what you mean. About the Eevee and that other Pokemon? I'd say weird coincidence, unless you want to make it into something, in which case it's a happy accident.
 
Alex_Among_Foxes said:
For Rin, I'd say Timid again, but if you want to keep them somewhat varied, you could always go with Careful instead.
For Alto, (great name by the way) I would go with Adamant.
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careful is good.. i'll take it, for rin... but i'd also say timid too... 😯

& yes, adamant for alto... & thankyou, i think so too :D



Alex_Among_Foxes said:
Not sure I know what you mean. About the Eevee and that other Pokemon? I'd say weird coincidence, unless you want to make it into something, in which case it's a happy accident.
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👍
 
Alex_Among_Foxes said:
For Rin, I'd say Timid again, but if you want to keep them somewhat varied, you could always go with Careful instead.
For Alto, (great name by the way) I would go with Adamant.
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how about these ones, i wonder?
i haven't drawn them yet, though.... just from how they look

https://pokemonfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Mani_the_totodile
https://pokemonfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Den_the_chinchou
https://pokemonfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Rilli_the_azumarill
https://pokemonfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Tekka_the_ninjask




https://pokemonfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Joli_the_bellossom
https://pokemonfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Dola_the_aron
 
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I'd say it's too tough to tell without seeing how you draw them and what the expressions on their faces are. I wouldn't want to give a Pokemon that looks strong or quick a Nature like Lax...
 
Alex_Among_Foxes said:
I'd say it's too tough to tell without seeing how you draw them and what the expressions on their faces are. I wouldn't want to give a Pokemon that looks strong or quick a Nature like Lax...
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oh... ok :>
i'll draw them either later or tomorrow, then 🤗
 
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