Lot's WiP comic and general talk

[popplio25]

Soru looks so sad! D: Quick, someone give her a hug!

yeah, she does...

i'm sure someone will D :

Riri, would you do the honors?

riri: *nods* she hugs
soru: 🙁 ....... ...... .... 😌 i might draw a picture of that ^^

I do like the change of it being a Hisuian Zorua over a common one, makes the whole 'fish out of water' theme of the story be a bit more understandable.
Riri looks like a nice friend as well!

i think i might make the change, then.... :D
& yeah, she is :3

Sorry, but "Journey of Pride" just sounds like something Vegeta would say he went on when he was a child lol.
And honestly, "Fiery Binds" sounds sounds like more of a chapter name than the name of a whole story to me.

i haven't seen...... dragonball? before, so i probably won't know the reference....

& i like them as titles :D

Their parents might be fine with the moves they have, but they seem to lack a bit on the defence side of things. Maybe they could ask a friendly Water/Poison Type to help them out?

hmmmmm...... hmmmmmm...... you might be right about that.....

ok.... enter clod the male water/poison type wooper/clodsire!
with the moves: Chilling Water, Low Kick or Body Press, *so jia can have his smart strike & tock can have his sing* , Zen Headbutt or Mud Shot & Acid Spray...

i updated it

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how can he walk with those stubby little ... legs/flippers/paws? 😯

& an the kirlia - gardevoir (F) :3

Cool! Love the inclusion of the Alolan Vulpix!

thanks! 🤗

& remember when you asked me if my teal mask/indigo disk teams were pmd? & if they were, Different timelines?

well...... this, being violet, might very well be a different timeline from mellow the snowy pikachu's timeline 😯



also... how do you think pag, sylva & buri will react when they see miraidon, i wonder? i mean he's been with their parents all that time... & they've not seen him before 😯koraidon's cuter, by the way ^^

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

i might draw a picture of that ^^

That would be a cute picture!

i haven't seen...... dragonball? before, so i probably won't know the reference....

& i like them as titles :D

A brief look at the mind of Vegeta, so you know what I mean by that:


And I'm glad you're happy with them!

hmmmmm...... hmmmmmm...... you might be right about that.....

ok.... enter clod the male water/poison type wooper/clodsire!
with the moves: Chilling Water, Low Kick or Body Press, *so jia can have his smart strike & tock can have his sing* , Zen Headbutt or Mud Shot & Acid Spray... & an the kirlia - gardevoir (F) :3

i updated it

Spoiler:

That team looks like it has a much better chance of seeing their adventure through to the end!

how can he walk with those stubby little ... legs/flippers/paws? 😯

Hahahaha! 😆 Probably pretty slowly!

thanks! 🤗

& remember when you asked me if my teal mask/indigo disk teams were pmd? & if they were, Different timelines?

well...... this, being violet, might very well be a different timeline from mellow the snowy pikachu's timeline 😯

also... how do you think pag, sylva & buri will react when they see miraidon, i wonder? i mean he's been with their parents all that time... & they've not seen him before 😯koraidon's cuter, by the way ^^

They'll probably be a little afraid of him at first, being all future looking, (and Korai/Mirai don't exactly have the most... Calm and slow going personalities if you get what I mean. Just look at how it interacts with Penny in the story lol) but because Miraidon is so good natured, I don't see them being worried about him for very long! (also, they are small children, even smaller than some human babies, and Miraidon is big enough for a full size human to ride on, so size could easily add to any shock the kids might feel when they first see him)

 

[popplio25]

That would be a cute picture!

yeah ^^
i was working on it since yesterday :D

A brief look at the mind of Vegeta, so you know what I mean by that:

yeah...... i had a feeling it was dragonball...

i'm glad i don't watch that anime.... not my thing, i think ^^'

And I'm glad you're happy with them!

🤗

That team looks like it has a much better chance of seeing their adventure through to the end!

great! :D
i think they'll be legands when it's all over... & would've met legands, too 😯

Hahahaha! 😆 Probably pretty slowly!

😅

They'll probably be a little afraid of him at first, being all future looking, (and Korai/Mirai don't exactly have the most... Calm and slow going personalities if you get what I mean. Just look at how it interacts with Penny in the story lol) but because Miraidon is so good natured, I don't see them being worried about him for very long! (also, they are small children, even smaller than some human babies, and Miraidon is big enough for a full size human to ride on, so size could easily add to any shock the kids might feel when they first see him)

yeah, that's all very true, i think 😯
i wonder if it'd be the same for dakko, vul & pix in kitakami when they get there & meet them....
& for mellow's group with the cuter koraidon in the scarlet timeline? 🙄😯



also, we have to factor in the fact that he's able to run fast & climb cliffs like it's nothing*also slip down them*.... & fly & swim, too... & fall from great heights & land safely on the ground or in the water....
& also fall over waterfalls if your not careful😲

 

[popplio25]

That would be a cute picture!

it's done :D ... i just edited a bunch... but i drew some, too :3 -

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[Alex_Among_Foxes]

She finally gets a hug! :D

 

[popplio25]

She finally gets a hug! :D

yeah, she does 🤗

They'll probably be a little afraid of him at first, being all future looking, (and Korai/Mirai don't exactly have the most... Calm and slow going personalities if you get what I mean. Just look at how it interacts with Penny in the story lol) but because Miraidon is so good natured, I don't see them being worried about him for very long! (also, they are small children, even smaller than some human babies, and Miraidon is big enough for a full size human to ride on, so size could easily add to any shock the kids might feel when they first see him)

yeah, that's all very true, i think 😯
i wonder if it'd be the same for dakko, vul & pix in kitakami when they get there & meet them....
& for mellow's group with the cuter koraidon in the scarlet timeline? 🙄😯



also, we have to factor in the fact that he's able to run fast & climb cliffs like it's nothing*also slip down them*.... & fly & swim, too... & fall from great heights & land safely on the ground or in the water....
& also fall over waterfalls if your not careful😲

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

yeah, that's all very true, i think 😯
i wonder if it'd be the same for dakko, vul & pix in kitakami when they get there & meet them....
& for mellow's group with the cuter koraidon in the scarlet timeline? 🙄😯

also, we have to factor in the fact that he's able to run fast & climb cliffs like it's nothing*also slip down them*.... & fly & swim, too... & fall from great heights & land safely on the ground or in the water....
& also fall over waterfalls if your not careful😲

I would say that because Koraidon doesn't look so 'future tec' it would be a little easier to get used to him, but not that much easier because of all the other things he has in common with Miraidon.

 

[popplio25]

I would say that because Koraidon doesn't look so 'future tec' it would be a little easier to get used to him, but not that much easier because of all the other things he has in common with Miraidon.

yeah, i think that's very true 😯

 

[popplio25]

I would say that because Koraidon doesn't look so 'future tec' it would be a little easier to get used to him, but not that much easier because of all the other things he has in common with Miraidon.

i made & drew/edited mellow's sister, topaz & her friend/team mate, rilla the grookey, in galar :D

does her fluff look right, i wonder 😶




& i wonder how they'll react to zacian when they first meet his shadow-type thing in the weald? 😯 topaz... & areni have never seen him before.... since they're from paldea *adelap*😯 well... neither has rilla....

fun fact: i just found out that ''In the English Pokedex, Zacian is stated to be the elder sister of Zamazenta and fights to protect her younger brother with her sword. Of course, this makes Zamazenta the younger brother, given the role of guardian to defend his elder sister from danger with his shield. '' - https://gamerant.com/pokemon-sword-...amazenta/#the-warrior-pokemon-and-their-types

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

i made & drew/edited mellow's sister, topaz & her friend/team mate, rilla the grookey, in galar :D

does her fluff look right, i wonder 😶

She looks great, and so does her fluff!

& i wonder how they'll react to zacian when they first meet his shadow-type thing in the weald? 😯 topaz... & areni have never seen him before.... since they're from paldea *adelap*😯 well... neither has rilla....

Topaz looks like someone who wouldn't be prone to fear very easily, maybe she'd be a little taken off guard, but not the type to try running away, at first at least.

fun fact: i just found out that ''In the English Pokedex, Zacian is stated to be the elder sister of Zamazenta and fights to protect her younger brother with her sword. Of course, this makes Zamazenta the younger brother, given the role of guardian to defend his elder sister from danger with his shield.

It also says that they could've been rivals, so take what the Dex says with a grain of salt. (if you're familiar with that saying)

 

[popplio25]

She looks great, and so does her fluff!

great 🤗

Topaz looks like someone who wouldn't be prone to fear very easily, maybe she'd be a little taken off guard, but not the type to try running away, at first at least.

yeah, i think that she seems that way, too, i think :3

It also says that they could've been rivals, so take what the Dex says with a grain of salt. (if you're familiar with that saying)

really? ok 😯

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

really? ok 😯

The Dex intry in question: "This Pokémon has slumbered for many years. Some say it's Zamazenta's elder sister—others say the two Pokémon are rivals."

So it's possible for them to be either, I just thought you should know.

 

[popplio25]

The Dex intry in question: "This Pokémon has slumbered for many years. Some say it's Zamazenta's elder sister—others say the two Pokémon are rivals."

So it's possible for them to be either, I just thought you should know.

aaah.... i see 😯
okay, thankyou 🤗

 

[popplio25]

Topaz looks like someone who wouldn't be prone to fear very easily, maybe she'd be a little taken off guard, but not the type to try running away, at first at least.

i drew/made this :D

i think she's worried about facing that titan rock crab known as klawf... since klawf strong against electric types... but she's not got any electric type moves, but if it's going by the straight on route, she'll have trailblaze, a grass type move....


mellow: I... I.. I don't know about this...~ but...~

tubo: let me do this, mellow... i have mach punch/focus blast....


mellow: .......

.......


....

mellow: uhhh... ~ tubo...

tubo: what, mellow?


mellow: well.... ummm... please let me try, at least, tubo... ok?


tubo: really?

mellow: .....

... i want to try....
she walks forward towards klawf


tubo: ok! do your best, mellow

torch: good luck, mellow.... since i'm a fire type, i can't do much against them....


mellow: *smiles*

also..... i wonder how mellow & her friends will feel about ogerpon 🙄 i mean, she's so darn cute....🤗 really need to play dlcs after i get them at christmas
will she join the team? will she not join the team? 😯

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

i drew/made this :D

That's so good! One of the best of her so far!
And your story snippet was really nice as well! Might I make one small wording suggestion though?

also..... i wonder how mellow & her friends will feel about ogerpon 🙄 i mean, she's so darn cute....🤗 really need to play dlcs after i get them at christmas
will she join the team? will she not join the team? 😯

And indeed, Ogerpon is by far my favorite thing to come from the DLC, soooo cute!
I'd say whether or not she joins the team is up to you alone, since you'd have to be the one to draw and write for her.

 

[popplio25]

That's so good! One of the best of her so far!

🤗 i used a base for it... but i drew a little with it :3

And your story snippet was really nice as well!

thanks 🤗

Might I make one small wording suggestion though?

sure? go ahead :3

And indeed, Ogerpon is by far my favorite thing to come from the DLC, soooo cute!

🤗

I'd say whether or not she joins the team is up to you alone, since you'd have to be the one to draw and write for her.

yeah, that's true....
i'll have to see when i get round to it :3 if she does join, then someone'll need to leave/go home....





i wonder how mellow & her friends will feel about ogerpon? having not seen her before....

i wonder if mellow would feel like she wants to protect her after seeing her being bullied? i'll bet you she would...

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

sure? go ahead :3

Just this one thing, I'd say take this ->"mellow: well.... ummm... please let me try, at least, tubo... ok?"
and change it to this ->"mellow: well.... ummm... please let me try, at least... ok tubo?"

Just a small shift in the words helps it flow a little better, at least I think so anyway, that was it.

yeah, that's true....
i'll have to see when i get round to it :3 if she does join, then someone'll need to leave/go home....

Indeed...

i wonder how mellow & her friends will feel about ogerpon? having not seen her before....

i wonder if mellow would feel like she wants to protect her after seeing her being bullied? i'll bet you she would...

They'll probably be a little curious at first, but there really isn't anything threatening about Ogerpon at all, so I can't see any of them being afraid of her.
And yeah, wasn't she bullied for not knowing any Electric Type moves? I can imagine her not being very happy to see someone else getting treated poorly like that at all.

 

[popplio25]

Just this one thing, I'd say take this ->"mellow: well.... ummm... please let me try, at least, tubo... ok?"
and change it to this ->"mellow: well.... ummm... please let me try, at least... ok tubo?"

Just a small shift in the words helps it flow a little better, at least I think so anyway, that was it.

ooh 😯 yeah, that does look/sound better 🤗
thanks :3

Indeed...

😌🙂 😌 🙂 *this is nodding*

They'll probably be a little curious at first, but there really isn't anything threatening about Ogerpon at all, so I can't see any of them being afraid of her.

that's good 🤗

And yeah, wasn't she bullied for not knowing any Electric Type moves?

& for not knowing any ice type moves, either, yeah....😯

I can imagine her not being very happy to see someone else getting treated poorly like that at all.

yeah, i imagine that's right, too, i think :>

 

[popplio25]

Just this one thing, I'd say take this ->"mellow: well.... ummm... please let me try, at least, tubo... ok?"
and change it to this ->"mellow: well.... ummm... please let me try, at least... ok tubo?"

Just a small shift in the words helps it flow a little better, at least I think so anyway, that was it.

oh, god.... i'm forgetting that kana the sprigatito will be there.... 😯 she can possibly help, too....

kana: what am i? chopped ham?*cause i don't think they have liver* i've got the power to go as well!

mellow: ^^ i know, kana... i'm sorry about that.... i want to try for myself, though... ok?


kana: *nods*

good luck, mellow... do your best

mellow: *smiles*

They'll probably be a little curious at first, but there really isn't anything threatening about Ogerpon at all, so I can't see any of them being afraid of her.

i'd probably say that it'd be the same for the violet timeline with pag, sylva & buri & their friends, seeing ogerpon for the first time, too, you think? 🤗

Topaz looks like someone who wouldn't be prone to fear very easily, maybe she'd be a little taken off guard, but not the type to try running away, at first at least.

how about areni? how would she react, seeing zacian for the first time, too, i wonder? she's the digger eevee, if you remember :3



also..... i drew this today :D

mellow and ''pen ''



edit at 8:53 pm: i edited & removed topaz and mellow's neck fluff.... cause i think that'll get a little too difficult to draw... i think i can handle their ear fluff & tail, though :D

Spoiler:

topaz & rilla

mellow

topaz and mellow's family

topaz and mellow as young pichu

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

oh, god.... i'm forgetting that kana the sprigatito will be there.... 😯 she can possibly help, too....

I'd say your little story snippet handled Kana being there just fine. 👍

i'd probably say that it'd be the same for the violet timeline with pag, sylva & buri & their friends, seeing ogerpon for the first time, too, you think? 🤗

I do. Like I said, Ogerpon's just too dang cute to be scary.

how about areni? how would she react, seeing zacian for the first time, too, i wonder? she's the digger eevee, if you remember :3

I do remember. I would say she's probably more intimidated by Zacian than Topaz is, maybe even suggesting a retreat. Though beyond intimidating, I don't think Zacian would be seen as some kind of monster.

also..... i drew this today :D

mellow and ''pen ''

Very cute!

edit at 8:53 pm: i edited & removed topaz and mellow's neck fluff.... cause i think that'll get a little too difficult to draw... i think i can handle their ear fluff & tail, though :D

Spoiler:

topaz & rilla

mellow

topaz and mellow's family

topaz and mellow as young pichu

The fluff is gone? Shame... It made them stand out so well... 😔