Lot's WiP comic and general talk

yay :D i'm ready :>

Cool, that's all done now. I'm not in a position to do any shiny hunting at the moment, but I will try to find you that Pawmi eventually, in the meantime though, I'd recommend you put that new Ditto I traded you to work trying to breed yourself that shiny Grass cat!
 
i updated that a bit yesterday :3

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Nice!

also... i made this today :3
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in a 4th timeline, i think :3 but i want to give the maushold friends another chance... so in total, there's five timelines 😯

That's a lot of different timelines, do you know which one you're going to focus on first?
 
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what do you think of them, in the above, i wonder? 😯 the litleo one & the klawf one...

The Litleo one doesn't have very much new about it, so it's just as interesting as it was with your first draft.
The Klawf one has a very neat theme idea where you have 2 sets of species rivals working together as friends. Probably outcasts of their kind for doing that as well. Could make some really good interactions with others of their kind as your story goes on. I do have to say that it might get a bit... Awkward for the Corviknight/Tinkaton friendship on account of the fact that Tink's hammer is literally made out of the body of a Corviknight... Like, just picture one of your best friends walking around smacking people with a weapon made from one of your dead relative's bones and flesh... Yikes.

ummmmm......

i think i might start with the areni the eevee & topaz the pikachu, galar one first in timeline 1 & work my way up :3

Awesome! That's the one I'm most interested in, so seeing where you go with it is going to be great!
 
The Litleo one doesn't have very much new about it, so it's just as interesting as it was with your first draft.

:D

The Klawf one has a very neat theme idea where you have 2 sets of species rivals working together as friends.

Probably outcasts of their kind for doing that as well. Could make some really good interactions with others of their kind as your story goes on.

I do have to say that it might get a bit... Awkward for the Corviknight/Tinkaton friendship on account of the fact that Tink's hammer is literally made out of the body of a Corviknight... Like, just picture one of your best friends walking around smacking people with a weapon made from one of your dead relative's bones and flesh... Yikes.

my god, you're right 😨

.......

...
i'm sure deka, moeka, vipi & Sango make it through 😶😧

*vipi the ekans sized seviper *pronouced 'vee-pi' *
& sango the froakie sized zangoose... named after Sengo, her german name*

Riffex the toxel... he might panic, though...



Awesome! That's the one I'm most interested in, so seeing where you go with it is going to be great!

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by the way.... one more pokemon trade? 😅 i'd love an alolan ninetales, if it's possible :3
 
my god, you're right 😨

XD (what a funny reaction!)

i'm sure deka, moeka, vipi & Sango make it through 😶😧

*vipi the ekans sized seviper *pronouced 'vee-pi' *
& sango the froakie sized zangoose... named after Sengo, her german name*

Riffex the toxel... he might panic, though...

I'm sure they'll be fine! *a piece falls of of her hammer* *she looks at her Corviknight 'friend'* : )...

by the way.... one more pokemon trade? 😅 i'd love an alolan ninetales, if it's possible :3

I wish that I had one to give you... But sadly that is a Pokemon that's not in my collection at the moment... If I'm able to get one though, I'd be happy to breed one for you.
 
XD (what a funny reaction!)

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I'm sure they'll be fine! *a piece falls of of her hammer* *she looks at her Corviknight 'friend'* : )...

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I wish that I had one to give you... But sadly that is a Pokemon that's not in my collection at the moment... If I'm able to get one though, I'd be happy to breed one for you.


if you're able to, i'd love that :3
only got a day left on the free trail,though.... if only i had the paid pokemon home....
i'd love it if you are able to, though :D...


edit: ....
..wait a moment... i can transfer the alolan vulpix that i get in legands arceus when i play again after i download the free pokemon home, Since the free trail would've run out by tomorrow :3

infact... i'm gonna download the free pokemon home now :D
edit: downloading now :D
edit: finished downloading now :D

i finished timeline 5 :D

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& the klawf timeline parents
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like the 2nd timeline, the parents take care of the first half.... so their kids can go to kitakami afterwards


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the parents of the maushold kids & houndour & their helper




also, about my heartgold & alpha sapphire nuzlockes... i think i'm gonna convert them to like areni, topaz & the others.. feu & soru's ones will still go as planned, but not nuzlocke but PMD playthroughs... i think feu & soru are too pure to be in nuzlockes.... so i added them to the first timeline

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if you're able to, i'd love that :3
only got a day left on the free trail,though.... if only i had the paid pokemon home....
i'd love it if you are able to, though :D...

edit: ....
..wait a moment... i can transfer the alolan vulpix that i get in legands arceus when i play again after i download the free pokemon home, Since the free trail would've run out by tomorrow :3

infact... i'm gonna download the free pokemon home now :D
edit: downloading now :D
edit: finished downloading now :D

So you now have the free version! Nice! Also, unless you trade one up for yourself, it'll probably be a while before I'm able to get one for you, so if you want one in a hurry, getting your own or asking for one in the Trade Corner would be much faster than waiting on me.

i finished timeline 5 :D

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& the klawf timeline parents
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like the 2nd timeline, the parents take care of the first half.... so their kids can go to kitakami afterwards

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the parents of the maushold kids & houndour & their helper

It's a neat idea to make the main character the child of the main Houndoom at the start of the game!

also, about my heartgold & alpha sapphire nuzlockes... i think i'm gonna convert them to like areni, topaz & the others.. feu & soru's ones will still go as planned, but not nuzlocke but PMD playthroughs... i think feu & soru are too pure to be in nuzlockes.... so i added them to the first timeline

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That's fine! They didn't seem like the 'Nuzlocke' parts were all that important to the story more than the characters after a while, so it makes sense to drop that aspect now. just as long as you're having fun with it!
 
So you now have the free version! Nice!
Also, unless you trade one up for yourself, it'll probably be a while before I'm able to get one for you, so if you want one in a hurry, getting your own or asking for one in the Trade Corner would be much faster than waiting on me.

😌 🙂 😌🙂 *nodding*

It's a neat idea to make the main character the child of the main Houndoom at the start of the game!

yeah :D

what do you think of those, i wonder? 😯 & the klawf timeline parents timeline & the parents of the maushold kids & houndour of timeline 5... in the above :>

That's fine! They didn't seem like the 'Nuzlocke' parts were all that important to the story more than the characters after a while, so it makes sense to drop that aspect now. just as long as you're having fun with it!

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i guess that maybe it's ok to show the teams for those, then :D

also....

i made one for white 2 for timeline two :D
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yeah :D

what do you think of those, i wonder? 😯 & the klawf timeline parents timeline & the parents of the maushold kids & houndour of timeline 5... in the above :>

The parent ones seem good! Though the team of kids looks like they might have a tough time in Kitakami with just the '4' of them. (yes I know there is 'technically' 6 with the two sets of mice, but as far as Pokemon 'the game' is concerned, they are counted as one 'unit')

i guess that maybe it's ok to show the teams for those, then :D

I would say so!

also....

i made one for white 2 for timeline two :D
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Cool! At this rate you'll have one for every game haha!
 
The parent ones seem good!

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Though the team of kids looks like they might have a tough time in Kitakami with just the '4' of them. (yes I know there is 'technically' 6 with the two sets of mice, but as far as Pokemon 'the game' is concerned, they are counted as one 'unit')

here's the plan: the two tandemaus parents pairs go take down everything in main paldea.... & then after a good long time, while in kitakami, their kids, ikka & fami & the the other pair of tandemaus parents's kids, pami & kane would be born.... *aka in game, evolving four pairs of tandemaus into maushold*

& after a good long, long while, once they're old enough, ikka & pami will want to go exploring in kitakami....
but ikka & pami will have to babysit their respective sister & respective brother, as well, unfortunately....



I would say so!

great :D


heartgold pmd
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alpha sapphire pmd
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Cool! At this rate you'll have one for every game haha!

you might be right 😮

what do you think of that one, i wonder? 😯
 
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here's the plan: the two tandemaus parents pairs go take down everything in main paldea.... & then after a good long time, while in kitakami, their kids, ikka & fami & the the other pair of tandemaus parents's kids, pami & kane would be born.... *aka in game, evolving four pairs of tandemaus into maushold*

& after a good long, long while, once they're old enough, ikka & pami will want to go exploring in kitakami....
but ikka & pami will have to babysit their respective sister & respective brother, as well, unfortunately....

That's a good plan! But they still might have a tough time battling some of the Kitakami Pokemon with just the two Tandemaus pairs, a Houndour and an Alolan Vulpix... Just something to think about.

heartgold pmd
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alpha sapphire pmd
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You've got some nice choices for Pokemon on those teams! I also noticed you have a Trapinch on both teams, is that one of your favorite Pokemon lines?

you might be right 😮

what do you think of that one, i wonder? 😯

I think it would be neat to see a 'from the beginning to the end' of all the games, but I'd recommend working on some of the actual stories of the timelines you already have before branching out that far.
 
That's a good plan! But they still might have a tough time battling some of the Kitakami Pokemon with just the two Tandemaus pairs, a Houndour and an Alolan Vulpix... Just something to think about.

i think they'll be fine, ikka, fami, pami, kane (the ''4'' family of 3 maushold pairs of kids), lǔbǐ *the houndour* & pix :3
they'll be ok, i'm sure 😌🙂
ikka, fami, pami & kane's parents too... they'll be alright :>



You've got some nice choices for Pokemon on those teams!

:D

I also noticed you have a Trapinch on both teams, is that one of your favorite Pokemon lines?

well... yeah, flygon's great :D

i'm hoping to get yori as a shiny
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I think it would be neat to see a 'from the beginning to the end' of all the games, but I'd recommend working on some of the actual stories of the timelines you already have before branching out that far.

timeline one is filled up now, so that's all good :3



i don't think i'd do yellow, red or blue pmd... maybe firered or leafgreen pmd, though...

& i meant the white 2 pmd team i showed :3
what do you think of it, i wonder? 😯
 
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i think they'll be fine, ikka, fami, pami, kane (the ''4'' family of 3 maushold pairs of kids), lǔbǐ *the houndour* & pix :3
they'll be ok, i'm sure 😌🙂
ikka, fami, pami & kane's parents too... they'll be alright :>

Fair enough. 👍

well... yeah, flygon's great :D

i'm hoping to get yori as a shiny
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Indeed it is! I used one on my Shield team! Great Pokemon.

timeline one is filled up now, so that's all good :3

i don't think i'd do yellow, red or blue pmd... maybe firered or leafgreen pmd, though...

& i meant the white 2 pmd team i showed :3
what do you think of it, i wonder? 😯

The team is fine? There really isn't much to comment on besides the choice of Pokemon at the moment.
 
then what do you think of Dynamo's short bio, i wonder 😯? *the name of pikachu*

I think that's a good name for a Pikachu! As for his bio, it looks fine. It's just a short description of the earliest bit of the story plot though, not much there really can be said about it.

also... i did one for black 2 in timeline three :D

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Cool! Interesting team choices, keeps things fresh. 👍
 
I think that's a good name for a Pikachu!


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As for his bio, it looks fine. It's just a short description of the earliest bit of the story plot though, not much there really can be said about it.

in short, he dreams of exploring the unova region & also seeing the underwater ruins... he seems passionate about it 😯



Cool! Interesting team choices, keeps things fresh. 👍

:D


unlike other places where heatmor and durants are predetor & pray,
, like deka the tinkaton & moeka the corviknight & little vipi the seviper & little sango the zangoose in timeline four paldea,

little Kuita the heatmor & little Fermi the durant are friends :D



& what do you think of jon the mienfoo's short bio, i wonder? 😯





also.... i made one for kanto- fire red in the 5th timeline :D
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& one for alola - pokemon moon in the 2nd timeline :D

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in short, he dreams of exploring the unova region & also seeing the underwater ruins... he seems passionate about it 😯

That's a nice dream. Unova is a beautiful region with a lot of nice places to check out.

unlike other places where heatmor and durants are predetor & pray,
, like deka the tinkaton & moeka the corviknight & little vipi the seviper & little sango the zangoose in timeline four paldea,

little Kuita the heatmor & little Fermi the durant are friends :D

That's nice! Sorta like when a trainer uses both of those kinds of Pokemon on their team, they can't exactly fight each other so they might as well be friends.

& what do you think of jon the mienfoo's short bio, i wonder? 😯

It sounds kinda similar to Dynamo's story, you'll need to make sure the story itself doesn't follow the same path as Dynamo's does. They can have similar goals, just try to get them there in different ways.

also.... i made one for kanto- fire red in the 5th timeline :D
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& one for alola - pokemon moon in the 2nd timeline :D

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While I can't really say much about the Fire Red story except 'nice team!', I can say that the one for Moon looks really interesting with the fact that most of the current cast should reasonably hate each other. Makes for some good interactions if you take the time to write them out.
 
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