My poetry

DragonTrainer

Shiver me timbers!
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    Yea, I have some poetry lol, it's kinda deep, so, here ya go

    Tired of trying
    Yeah I'm smiling
    But inside I'm dying
    Everyone sees who I appear to be
    But only a few know the real me
    You only see what I choose to show
    There's so much behind my smile
    That you don't know
     
    That's really good DT! I didn't know it, but you're a poet!
    I have one pretty good poem I made too.....
    Anyway, I hope I can see more!
     
    Well, here's some more for you:

    I feel like I'm trapped
    With nowhere to go
    Where?I don't know
    I just wish that I could get out of my mind's prison
    And I just think this isn't
    The kind of place for me
    But inside my heart I always know
    There is nowhere else I'd like to go
     
    *Applauds*
    Yay!!!
    .........huh? Was it supposed to be sad? In that case...
    *cries joyfully*
    hehe...sniff

    Nice poems DT! You've got that writer's blood in you afterall! Excellent work!
     
    Yea, thanks man, guess I found a talent, I gotta go write some more poems
     
    Here's another one I have made, it's kinda hard to understand, but....

    And now you leave me
    How could you do such a thing?
    I thought we were meant for each other
    I always thought there wasn't another
    Who could take my place
    But now, at this rapid pace
    That the world moves along
    I can see
    That relationships cannot last long

    What a fool I was
    To believe such a thing
    To think we were going to be together forever
    Our breakup can only bring
    Pain, endless agony
    At least to me

    Now I know
    That you can never let a relationship grow
    Because before you know it
    It all breaks apart
    And the pain to your heart
    Will never leave your soul
     
    Wow! This one's better then your last two combined!
    .....and much longer too!
    Hehe....
    Good job DT! I hope other people will come to read your brilliant masterpieces!
     
    Mmm... Yah, looks like you really put yourself in the dark there. ^^'
     
    Wow DT, these are some great poems, i think my favourite one's got to be the last one ^_^ Hope to see more of them later!
    *Wonders if she should start a thead with some of her own poetry and see what others think....*
     
    Those are really great! All the poetry I write is deep too. Course, mines also long...
    Anywho! Keep it up DT! ^_-
     
    Thanks guys, I'm working on one right now, I have a feeling it'll be great ^^
     
    Well hurry and post it!^___^
    I have a thread for my poems too but I can't ryme for beans-_- I just put a bunch of deep words on paper and call it a poem. You put mine to shame XD
     
    Cool down teara, here it is ^^

    Our Love
    Your love, so pure
    And yet, sometimes I am unsure
    Is your love true and mature?
    Or is it sad and fake?

    Times these days are so tough
    And I just feel like I've had enough
    Of these lies and fake feelings
    Love nowadays is so hard to find
    Most of the time it is completely blind

    I sometimes wonder
    Why are we still together?
    So much trouble from our love, the only offender
    But deep in our hearts for now and forever
    Our love will never be severed
     
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