This game is looking pretty good, but I do have a few suggestions to make that could make your game even better!
1. Change the Department store in Goldenrod. It just doesn't look like a department store...
2. In the Game Corner, change the back tiles of the counter to the star.
3. No one will have Radio Tower Chipsets. You'll have to either rip them from G/S/C and use that, or just make your own.
I hope that helps. BTW keep those screenshots coming! Keep up the good work, too.
AbareMax