Pokemon Mystery Dungeon

Chapter 41+The End/Epilouge

This chapter becomes really sad. There's gonna be a *, and when that happens, I recommend playing the song below next to that.

41
Saying Goodbye

Peace was finally going to come. After all the challenges that Pikachu, Charmander, and Bulbasaur had faced, facing tough Pokémon, traveling as fugitives, and nearly being killed, everything now was going to be repaid. Now, the Mystery Dungeon Realm was safe at last. The good Pokemon of the Mystery Dungeon Realm could now live in peace.

"Yippee! This is the greatest!" Snubbull cheered. "This calls for a celebration!" Charizard declared. "Let me shoot my Hydro Pump to kick it off!" Blastoise boomed. "Whoa! Hold on there!" Lombre said. "Don't you point those things at me! Face the other way! The other way!!" "No, no!" laughed Shiftry. "Let it loose! Hahaha!"

Everyone laughed. Lombre didn't want to be part of trouble. "Y-you've gotta be kidding me!" he squeaked. He started to back away, but his back met the sticky tentacles of Octillery. "Don't worry," she said, "I'll secure him so he can't get away."

Everyone crowded around Lombre. "What? You're serious?! Nooooo! Don't! "Hahahahaha!" Everyone laughed at Lombre's extreme anxiety.

Pikachu decided to join the fun when he heard, "Pikachu…" He turned and saw something. The spirit of Gardevoir began to appear. "Gardevoir…" Pikachu said. "What are you doing here?"

*(At this moment, start playing The Time Has Come [Pikachu's Goodbye])

"We owe everything to you, Pikachu, and your friends," said Gardevoir. "Peace has returned to our world. Thank you for everything. And now, Pikachu…your role here has ended. In a few minutes, you must return to your human world. It is time to bid farewell."

Pikachu gasped. He had forgotten about that. "Gardevoir, wait!" he cried. "Why do I have to leave now? Just when everything just got better?" "I'm sorry, Pikachu," sighed Gardevoir. "But the spirits don't want you to stay here." Tears began to well up in Pikachu's eyes. "Please, Gardevoir…" he sobbed. "Charmander and Bulbasaur are my best friends…they're the only friends I've ever had…or I'll ever have. Please, Gardevoir. Can I stay a little longer?"

Gardevoir gave Pikachu a small hug. "I know how hard this is for you, Pikachu," she said. "But you'll never forget your friends. They'll always be in your heart. Now, do this for me, and try to be strong. Goodbye, Pikachu."

Pikachu noticed small yellow bubbles rising from his feet. Caterpie was the first to notice this. "Pikachu? What's going on?" Charmander and Bulbasaur noticed this too. "Pikachu!" cried Charmander. "Your body! What's happening to you?"

Pikachu stifled his tears as much as he could. "Charmander, Bulbasaur…" he sobbed emotionally. "And everyone…I'm s-sorry, b-but….I have to leave." "What?!" cried Snubbull. "W-What are you saying?!" Bellsprout gasped.

"Everyone," sobbed Pikachu, "Thank you for everything all this time. Especially you, Charmander and Bulbasaur." "I don't get it…" Bulbasaur said. "What do you mean you have to leave?" "My role as Pikachu is over," said Pikachu, as he let two tears fall from his face. "I have to return to the human world." "Unbelievable!" Alakazam exclaimed. "Go back…to the human world?!" Tyranitar said with disbelief.

"Huh?! Why?" asked Charmander. "We don't understand?! Why do you have to leave?!" His voice became stifled with emotion as well. "Didn't we do well together?" he asked. "Aren't we three friends?"

Pikachu nodded, and his lip quivered. "Y-yes. You will…always be my best friend, Charmander. You too, Bulbasaur. I'll miss you just the same. I will never forget what you two taught me about friendship, bravery, and heroism. Most of all, I will never forget you."

"Don't go, Pikachu…" begged Bulbasaur, with tears in his eyes as well.. "What'll we do after you're gone?" "I'm blessed to have met two Pokémon as wonderful as you," Pikachu sobbed. Then he said, "I'm sorry I can't stay. Good bye, my friends."

Then the bubbles began to increase, and Pikachu started to disappear. "Pikachu!" "Pikachu!" "Pikachu, don't go!" Finally, Pikachu's bubbles enveloped him in a giant golden bubble.

The bubble began to rise into the air. Small sparkles came from it, and the bubble rose into the sky. "Pikachu! Nooooo!" sobbed Charmander and Bulbasaur. But it was too late. Pikachu was gone.

Several hours later, the others were still heartbroken of the sudden and tragic departure of Pikachu. "Snivel…Pikachu," sobbed Caterpie. "Why…I don't understand…" "Why was it necessary to leave us?" sobbed Blastoise.

Shiftry was sad, too. "Pikachu saved my life. But I hadn't done anything to show my thanks. He left…before I could say thank you…" "You're right," Lombre sniveled. "Just up and went like that. Why now? When the world's just been saved? Just when things were going to get better…Sob!"

Xatu turned to explain to the grieved Pokémon. "This was coming," he said. "Our world, it was saved by Pikachu. I look back now. When Pikachu was heading for the sky, he seemed sort of resigned. As if resigned to accept what was to come."

Charmander spoke up. "I think I know," he said. Everyone turned to him. "Pikachu must have," he began, "Become himself to save us. And when the time came, Pikachu knew that would be the time to leave."

Bulbasaur then tensed up. "Why didn't Pikachu tell us earlier?!" he sobbed. "If this was coming, why didn't he tell us?!"

Alakazam was at grief too, but he stifled his tears to say, "Those words couldn't be spoken. As much as you two are heartbroken now, Pikachu must have felt more pain of leaving. Try to understand, young ones."

They really tried. But they couldn't get over the loss of their friend.

(Sob) Such a sad chapter. And now...


42
A Last Message
Pikachu floated upward towards the sky in his yellow bubble. His grief over losing Charmander and Bulbasaur still tore him inside. "I'm rising into the sky," he said. "Is this my spirit...I wonder where I'm going?"

Just as he finished asking himself that, he heard a voice. Perhaps it was someone he met. But he couldn't be sure. These are the words that were spoken.

"Your friends are heartbroken…"

"True friends, friends for life…"

"You truly realize this…"

"And you are heartbroken as well…"

"But all is not lost…"

"If you wish…and wish very strongly…"

"Perhaps…"

"Someday you will meet again."


THE END

WAAAAAAIIIIT! That's how it ends?! I'm feeling so emotional right now....

But wait!

It didn't say End of Part 3! And the story's not over until all parts are closed. Then does that mean....Yes! It does! Presenting....

THE EPILOUGE!!


Epilogue

As Pikachu rose into the night sky, he felt weird. He touched his forehead and felt hair. His long black ears were disappearing. He was turning back into a human, the same human boy who had lived in Viridian City long ago…

Then he realized something. He didn't remember how he had started his rescue team with Charmander and Bulbasaur. He was losing his memory! And now he was regaining his memories as a human. Was it worth losing all those precious memories? No, it wasn't. Not to him.

"Stop! No, wait!" he cried. "Please! Don't take away my memories! Please!" For a moment he thought he heard a stirring. Then he continued. "I don't want to leave my friends!" he sobbed. "I don't want to forget them! I want to go back! I want to stay with my invaluable…irreplaceable friends. I want to be Pikachu!"

Just as the last of his memories in the Mystery Dungeon Realm were about to leave him, there was a sudden bright flash…

At Team PokéPals' team base, all the Pokémon were still there. Charizard tried to console his heartbroken son. Lombre coaxed Bulbasaur. It seemed that all that was left of Pikachu was now gone, never to return.

But that was wrong. Just at that moment, the crowd noticed a series of yellow bubbles near the base forming. When they had all dissolved, they saw the body of Pikachu standing there. When he saw where he was, his face lit up like a Christmas tree.

Charizard and Lombre nudged Charmander and Bulbasaur. They miserably turned, and were surprised. Pikachu's eyes were so happy. As his happiness grew, so did Charmander and Bulbasaur's.

They came closer to each other. Then, they rushed forward and embraced each other in happiness as the crowd of Pokémon gathered around them, smiling at them.

Pikachu was happy. He had friends, a home, a life of virtue to call his own, and a feeling of gratefulness that only he could understand. It didn't matter to him that he wouldn't be human again. He had everything he ever wanted right before him. He was happy. He was whole.

But most of all, he was home.

End of Part 3

*Sigh* What a beautiful ending. I enjoyed writing every bit of it. Team PokePals can continue their rescuing duties. But I feel I must narrate what happens in the future.

Team PokePals continued their rescue work and recruited many kinds of Pokemon to join their rescue team. But eventually, the age of rescue teams was coming to somewhat of a close. New dungeons appeared, and the town of Pokemon Square evolved drastically. Pikachu and his friends evolved into powerful Pokemon and were their town's official heroes.

Peace had been restored. The story of Pikachu is a unique one. And yet...all kinds of Pokemon wondered....would there be another to enter the Realm? What adventures would he have? What would his destiny be?

Eventually, it happened again. Another human entered the Realm many years later, and with him, he brought a new destiny for this world.

But that's another story.
 
You should do a sequel . I really liked it.
 
I will. Here's The Title:

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Book II
The Time & Darkness Chronicles
The Tale of Team Triostar!

You can basically guess when this takes place.
 
Of course I can . The second Mystery Dungeon Game.
 
Correcto, Ardhamon! That is exactly where the second book takes place.

So...do you guys want to keep commenting on this story, or should this thread be closed now that the stroy is finished?
 
I think it should it should be left open for more comments .
 
So it shall be. Anybody who wants to comment on the story can do it anytime they want.
 
Yeah, this is a great fic. But I was going to use a name like Team Pokepals. Sigh... I can't steal your work, so I'll have to think of a new name.

P.S: Despite all that, keep up the very good work.
 
Sorry about that, Mako. But if you need help with a name, I could suggest something.
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So...anything you guys liked about the story? Any specific parts that made you emotional? For me, there were many. I know some of you might have constructive criticism for plot shove-ins, like the Charmander/Charizard father thing. So say whatever you like. I'm open to your suggestions.
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Sorry for a triple post, but are people done posting here?
 
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I'm sorry, CWTA,Pichu. I didn't mean to cause any worry. I just want people to keep posting here so this story isn't forgotten just as soon as I finished it. By the way, do you like the story?
 
If you didn't want the story to be forgotten, why don't you just put a link to it in your signature? =/

In any case, review may come later. I admit I've only glanced over your story so far.
 
I edited my sig. Now it has the link. So whoever wants to read my fanfic can click on my siggy link! Anyways, I want to thank all of you for reading this story. I'm working really hard to come up with a great idea for PMD2!
 
Why don't you just wait for the sequel to come out and use the storyline for that too?
 
hey first of all thanks for permitting me in my thread and don't worry about my fic it''ll be different than yours

what should i say about this fic...











****Mind Blowing
i want to scream and i wished i could jump of my seat and hug you right now as i right this i mean every single damn word and letter to remember each and every thing about the game...
the action/drama and emotion oh this is great!!!
now i have proof to show ma friends that PMD is Gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That's My Fav Game And For Me You Have Made Me Very Happy
sob[:(]

and about the sequel you'll have to wait till the next year september maybe so why not continue the stories after beating raquaza
latios..regi's...,three dogs..,and all after the game get's over which you can present it in the fic..,
if you have not completed the game i can P.M you A Debug Cheat So that you can replay events or play any events..,just P.M me And Ask..,once again gr8 job!!!!
 
hey first of all thanks for permitting me in my thread and don't worry about my fic it''ll be different than yours

what should i say about this fic...











****Mind Blowing
i want to scream and i wished i could jump of my seat and hug you right now as i right this i mean every single damn word and letter to remember each and every thing about the game...
the action/drama and emotion oh this is great!!!
now i have proof to show ma friends that PMD is Gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That's My Fav Game And For Me You Have Made Me Very Happy
sob[:(]

and about the sequel you'll have to wait till the next year september maybe so why not continue the stories after beating raquaza
latios..regi's...,three dogs..,and all after the game get's over which you can present it in the fic..,
if you have not completed the game i can P.M you A Debug Cheat So that you can replay events or play any events..,just P.M me And Ask..,once again gr8 job!!!!

I'm glad you enjoy it. I made it for the fans.:) Anyways, I was thinking about doing a fic what happens right after the star explodes, but then I thought that the second half was more about missions then actual plot and emotion. After all, that's the heart of PMD. And just like this fic, PMD2 will be based on the main storyline.
 
...*sob*... This story always gets me so emotional, and I don't easily express my feelings of sadness. Especially the fugitive part and the ending. That gets to me the most. I love it! ^-^

By the way, are you going to do the part with Wally's story? I think you wrote somewhere that you might.
 
I did. It's called Gengar's Aftermath. The link is on my siggy.
 
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