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Review Challenge! (February '12)

bobandbill

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  • Running this successful challenge again! Everyone likes challenges, right? *proceeds to use previous version of thread for post*


    How does it work?
    Interested in taking part? All you have to do is sign up in this thread using the form posted below. Then, starting on February 1st (your time zone, whatever that may be), you can begin reviewing any story or poem posted here in FF&W. Just be sure to keep the section's rules in mind.

    This means that your reviews need to be constructive. Don't just post "like ur story! it was good!" Point out specifics about the story you're reviewing, mentioning what you liked or didn't like. If your review can be posted to every story in this forum and make sense, it won't count for this challenge.

    Use your post in this thread to keep track of your reviews. Just link to them so we can double-check everything.

    Authors, if you would like a particular reviewer to read your story, check out their profile to find out how to contact them and ask them nicely. If we find out that you're pestering for reviews, it will be noted and no one will review your story for the challenge.

    How Many Reviews?
    You need to post 20 reviews between February 1st and February 29th in order to complete the challenge.

    What do you get?
    Aside from the satisfaction of bringing activity to FF&W and reviews to the authors here, you also get this emblem:

    ReviewersEmblem.jpg


    The Form
    [b]Name:[/b]
    [b]Best Way to Contact:[/b]
    [b]Review Style:[/b]
    [b]Reviews:[/b]

    Reviewers
    bobandbill
    Cutlerine
    DarkIceForever
    psyanic

    Previous Reviewing Challenges
    April 2011
    February 2011
    December 2011
     
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    psyanic

    pop a wheelie on a zeitgeist
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    • USA
    • Seen Apr 10, 2023
    Looks like I'll have time to do this! I finished exams a week ago, so now I finally have the time to start doing random stuff I enjoy doing.

    Name: psyanic
    Best Way to Contact: PM/VM, either way works.
    Review Style: When I first look at a story, I usually check for mechanics and typos or another. After that, I go everywhere. I can dive into looking at plot, characters, or if something even makes sense. So I'd say comprehensive, though inconsistent.
    Reviews:
    1. The Nova Travels - by treecko's awesomeness
    2. Pokemon Johto Adventures 1 - by Volcanix769
    3. Grant - by AtavanHalen343
    4. Freedom Fighters - by DarkIceForever
    5. Pokemon: A Johto Dream - by ROBO-BOY
    6. The Ballad of Greg Thomas - by FourCartridge
    7. Red with Envy - by Editman
    8. Crossing Paths - by AmiEkcona
    9. Aura's Adventures: Book 1, Rise of the Dark Rebellion - by [DoubleUber]
    10. The Luster Chronicles rated T - by Nine-Toes
    11. Project Z - by Venasaur
    12. Chronicles of Innocence (Digimon) - by Legendarian Mistress
    13. The Nova Travels (Chapter 7) - by treecko's awesomeness
    14. Those That Came Before - by PhantomX0990
    15. The Blacklist - by DForte
    16. Love is Blind? - by gwenvar
    17. Hanran Sentai JohtoRanger - by Digimon Kaiser
    18. Arbok, Dawn, and Misty - by Brisingr122194
    19. Bare Bones: A Trainer's Story - by makemymilk45
    20. A Seer's Shadowy Path - by Electricmudkip
     
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    bobandbill

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  • I still have holidays. This can only mean one thing.

    Name: bobandbill I think
    Best Way to Contact: VM, don't mind PMs either.
    Review Style: I'll say what I like and don't like on whatever comes to mind when I read it basically (be it plot, characters, description, events, etc), and mention any instances of misspellings/grammatical errors and how to fix them.
    Reviews:
    1. My first two poems, gwenvar
    2. Heart and Soul: Poems of a Samurai, SamuraiGallade
    3. Diminutive Haiku + Haiku, lachash
    4. Wings of War, AtavanHalen343
    5. Blood and Snow, a Pokemon Zombie Apocalypse Story, PlayingAmongStars
    6. Untitled, SeekerOfDarkness
    7. Dragon Age: Champions, PhantomX0990
    8. Pokemon VDD: Destiny Discovery (preview), Skara
    9. The Ballad of Greg Thomas, FourCartridge
    10. Diabetic Cappuccino, Toujours
    11. Survival Project, diamondpearl876
    12. Without Words, SeekerOfDarkness
    13. A Seer's Shadowy Path, Electricmudkip
    14. Hopping on Cloud Nine, psyanic
    15. The Ballad of Greg Thomas (chapter 3-4), FourCartridge
    16. The Colourless Ribbon, Yuki's Sword
    17. The spiral of war, Maxter_g
    18. Escalation, dash!
    19. Crush Can, Mist_Ketchum
    20. The Village, TheAmazingAipom


    Good luck to all!
     
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    Cutlerine

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  • Oh, this looks fun. It'd be impossible for me to make time for it, of course, but it would be fun. Then again, I have to do my six impossible things before breakfast each day, so...

    Name: Cutlerine
    Best Way to Contact: VM/PM
    Review Style: A little bit of everything, really. Grammar/spelling, logic, narrative flow, plot, characters... Whatever strikes me as necessary to be said. And so on and so forth. (Though I have noticed I have a tendency to get fixated on style.)
    Reviews:
    1. The Villain, by Dawn_Hero
    2. Blood and Snow: A Pokémon Zombie Apocalypse, by PlayingAmongStars
    3. Satirical Persuasive Essay for Honours, by AtavanHalen343
    4. Hopping On Cloud Nine, by psyanic
    5. Colony 9.0, by treecko's awesomeness
    6. Untitled, by SeekerOfDarkness
    7. The Orusa Adventures, by Oz37
    8. The Nova Travels, by treecko's awesomeness
    9. Battlefield, by miltankRancher
    10. The Fall to Redemption, by Cypher DS
    11. Survival Project, by diamondpearl876
    12. Without Words, by SeekerOfDarkness
    13. Blood and Snow: A Pokémon Zombie Apocalypse (Chapter Two), by PlayingAmongStars
    14. TRINITY: A Cyberpunk Pokémon Fanfiction, by Shrike Flamestar
    15. Hopping on Cloud Nine (Chapter One), by psyanic
    16. November Echo Midnight, by teamVASIMR
    17. The spiral of war, by Master_g
    18. Wind and Rain: The Stormy Story of Team Cyclone, by SuperTrainStationH
    19. Bare Bones: A Trainer's Story, by makemymilk45
    20. The Village, by The AmazingAipom
     
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    psyanic

    pop a wheelie on a zeitgeist
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    • Age 27
    • USA
    • Seen Apr 10, 2023
    Looks like I'll have time to do this! I finished exams a week ago, so now I finally have the time to start doing random stuff I enjoy doing.

    Name: psyanic
    Best Way to Contact: PM/VM, either way works.
    Review Style: When I first look at a story, I usually check for mechanics and typos or another. After that, I go everywhere. I can dive into looking at plot, characters, or if something even makes sense. So I'd say comprehensive, though inconsistent.
    Reviews:
    1. The Nova Travels - by treecko's awesomeness
    2. Pokemon Johto Adventures 1 - by Volcanix769
    3. Grant - by AtavanHalen343
    4. Freedom Fighters - by DarkIceForever
    5. Pokemon: A Johto Dream - by ROBO-BOY
    6. The Ballad of Greg Thomas - by FourCartridge
    7. Red with Envy - by Editman
    8. Crossing Paths - by AmiEkcona
    9. Aura's Adventures: Book 1, Rise of the Dark Rebellion - by [DoubleUber]
    10. The Luster Chronicles rated T - by Nine-Toes
    11. Project Z - by Venasaur
    12. Chronicles of Innocence (Digimon) - by Legendarian Mistress
    13. The Nova Travels (Chapter 7) - by treecko's awesomeness
    14. Those That Came Before - by PhantomX0990
    15. The Blacklist - by DForte
    16. Love is Blind? - by gwenvar
    17. Hanran Sentai JohtoRanger - by Digimon Kaiser
    18. Arbok, Dawn, and Misty - by Brisingr122194
    19. Bare Bones: A Trainer's Story - by makemymilk45
    20. A Seer's Shadowy Path - by Electricmudkip

    Woo-hoo! Boom ba-da bing! What a fun challenge. More activity and the forum is getting more active! It's funny looking at how my review "style" had changed so much, especially the reviews from the last challenge. And... that's it. I'm so proud of me.
     
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    Emblem will be on your way, psyanic. As soon as the forums feel like loading everything.

    Congratulations on finishing the challenge!
     

    bobandbill

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  • Woo, I finished too on the last possible day! Very productive month for me.

    I will....give myself emblem later I suppose.
     

    Cutlerine

    Gone. May or may not return.
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  • Oh, this looks fun. It'd be impossible for me to make time for it, of course, but it would be fun. Then again, I have to do my six impossible things before breakfast each day, so...

    Name: Cutlerine
    Best Way to Contact: VM/PM
    Review Style: A little bit of everything, really. Grammar/spelling, logic, narrative flow, plot, characters... Whatever strikes me as necessary to be said. And so on and so forth. (Though I have noticed I have a tendency to get fixated on style.)
    Reviews:
    1. The Villain, by Dawn_Hero
    2. Blood and Snow: A Pokémon Zombie Apocalypse, by PlayingAmongStars
    3. Satirical Persuasive Essay for Honours, by AtavanHalen343
    4. Hopping On Cloud Nine, by psyanic
    5. Colony 9.0, by treecko's awesomeness
    6. Untitled, by SeekerOfDarkness
    7. The Orusa Adventures, by Oz37
    8. The Nova Travels, by treecko's awesomeness
    9. Battlefield, by miltankRancher
    10. The Fall to Redemption, by Cypher DS
    11. Survival Project, by diamondpearl876
    12. Without Words, by SeekerOfDarkness
    13. Blood and Snow: A Pokémon Zombie Apocalypse (Chapter Two), by PlayingAmongStars
    14. TRINITY: A Cyberpunk Pokémon Fanfiction, by Shrike Flamestar
    15. Hopping on Cloud Nine (Chapter One), by psyanic
    16. November Echo Midnight, by teamVASIMR
    17. The spiral of war, by Master_g
    18. Wind and Rain: The Stormy Story of Team Cyclone, by SuperTrainStationH
    19. Bare Bones: A Trainer's Story, by makemymilk45
    20. The Village, by The AmazingAipom

    And... done. I posted my first review before anyone else and my last after everyone else; truly have I lived up to my motto: 'Foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of small minds.*'

    Anyway, I'm glad that's over. I really didn't have the time to do it, and yet - I did. Ah, the mysteries of the universe.

    F.A.B.

    *Misquotation entirely intentional, before someone points it out. I've altered the original meaning... considerably.
     
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