Sabrina Fanclub

[Alakazam17]

*cracks up with laughter* Thank God you do not know what "Willies" means here in Germany...ahem....*gggg...*
Yeah, why is it called Sabrina's story again if there's like a dozens other characters? The only ones that are needed are Sabrina and Will.
Why get cracking? o,o *does not get*

Well I told you what Willies meant, so "to get cracking" means "to get started." :D

And I called it Sabrina's Story because it wasn't supposed to be a Crossover when I started it, XD. That just happened in the 2nd chapter, when I realized that the crossover story I had wanted to work on for so long would work much better with Sabrina as a main character. See, it was originally going to start with Naruto, XDD.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

And I told you what Willis mean in German...don't you think you should edit your post now? XD It creates thoughts in my mind I so want to banish....
...now I know why it's called 'crack'...
*ggg* If it hadn't turned into a Crossover fic, then what? Just Will and Sabrina fighting again and again? (not as if I would have minded that so much...0=) )
And while we're on the topic of fanfics...on the bright side, I'll post chapter 3c after I finish this post. On the negative side, I think the sequel will be delayed. >> I still have no plot bunny for a sequel, even though I'm desperately hunting one. In contrast to that, I got attacked by one on the train, which might end up by me starting a new fic that has almost nothing to do with Sabrina *gasp, surprise, shock*, though I'm not sure right now if I will do that in the end or not. XD

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

And I called it Sabrina's Story because it wasn't supposed to be a Crossover when I started it, XD. That just happened in the 2nd chapter, when I realized that the crossover story I had wanted to work on for so long would work much better with Sabrina as a main character.

Ha ha, I thought the same thing, why is it called Sabrina's Story? I guess it makes better sense with its new name, although I wonder how many people (outside our little group here) would pick Sabrina as the main character of a multi-universe story.

Which reminds me, I better go back and continue on my story. It's probably going to end up like my 2nd story with about 20 chapters or so... I'm my own harshest critic, so I already hate this story (usually it takes a little while for me to hate my own story, there are maybe only three of my FF.net stories I don't hate!).

(Edit: "Leader" is a swear word. Seriously, try putting it in your user title. It got ******-ed out.)

 

[Psychic*Absol]

It got a new name? Man, I'm behing schedule...reminds me that I wanted to give my fic a different name, too. >>
Hm....hm...I think I did read a crossover fic- no wait, three!!! with her. Only one with her as the main character, though. (Crossovers were with Ranma 1/2, Dragonball and Harry Potter, iirc)
You should. >>;;; I've been waiting for it. *pokes*
Only 20 chapters is okay, I mean, I can't even write ten chapters...
XD Try loving your storis, that's the only way you can improve! *nods*
It is? o,o Hm, ruins my plan to make myself the Sabrina club leader. XD!
BTW, I can't see the pic in your sig. ;.; But I want to know what the hint is about, plz!

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

P*A, I just updated my sig, and my story, like within seconds of you posting. Chapter 9 is up!

And Sabrina's reaction to Will is so much different than you'd expect.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Thanks! ^.^ Now I'll think over the possible hint and its consequences and everything else...and....UPDATE?!?!?!? YAY!!!!!!!! ^______________^
Different? Oh, must read! XD I guess she doesn't rip off his head, eh? XD

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Yeah, I decided to go in a different direction with Sabrina's response. Meanwhile, with this potential plot point, there are so many ways it could go, but one thing's for sure: Erika is now important, in some way.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

>>;;; Fanfiction. net is quite slow. It only showed your update now...
The title already tells me alot. ^^
...hm, the little mind blocking thing seems to be a common problem in psychic/psychic relationsships. XD
omg....I find it so amusing that all it takes Cynthia to lose control is a kiss....better not go any further, Lucian....
*g* Omg, Liza....that's so typical of you....violant little spy...
Sabrina ending up ripping his head off= normal --> Sabrina not doing anything= not normal Conclusion: Will&Liza should be seriously worried.
Ouch. Yes, Will should better think before speaking.
I think I know who said person is. 0=)
Erika being in charge of the gym leaders is a manga plot, iirc.

the one, Erika felt, could probably get everyone out of this mess.

Or not.

"Sabrina, life isn't all about gaining as much power as possible.

I doubt she grasps that...she is Sabrina, after all.

That person may not have their powers fully developed now, but in time they will develop them and be able to use them to defeat her."

Sounds like Giselle to me. Next paragraphs seem to prove me right. XD
No, no, no monarchy, plz. >>
*wants to slap Will* Oh, dear....sometimes, he's just dumb. Or insensitive.
Angry Sabrina= back to normal. XD
o,o Plan B?...
Yeah, took me quite some time to review...0=)

 

[Alakazam17]

"Leader" is banned because in the past people have used it to pretend they were mods. I found this out when I wanted to use it, heh. Likewise, you can't use "Moderator" or "Administrator." >_<

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

So even Sabrina needs a little bit of counseling from time to time, which is what this chapter was about. Whether she gives up on trying to stop Cynthia, and what Erika has to do with the whole situation, are other matters altogether. It's always fun for Sabrina to be upset at Will when he screws up, which she was, but I thought that it was worth showing a different side to Sabrina, one where she felt a little down because of not having all the power.

I figured that was the reason for "leader" not being allowed, though it seems to me that it's easy enough to tell who the moderators really are anyway.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

While I agree that Sabrina can't always solve the problems alone, I'm not sure if I can like this new side of her. For me, it's really a new side, as I rarely see a 'weak' Sabrina and tend not to write about one, either. (If she's weak in my fanfics, it's because of being mentally unstable, not actually psychically weak. XD)
I suppose she'll fight Cynthia in a more passive way, like guarding Giselle, who (not to my pleasure) has a bigger chance of defeating the other champion. And what Erika has to do with that...no idea. XD I'll see what happens and judge later. XD

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

But if Sabrina was all-powerful and had no weaknesses, I don't think she'd be someone to cheer for. She'd be more like Cynthia, someone to cheer against. Remember my first story where Sabrina cried after losing, and it turned into one of the most romantic Will-Sabrina moments? It's definitely possible for Sabrina to show a different side and still be likable.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

^^;;; I guess so...I guess the romanticness of the moment overshadowed Sabrina's loss so much I didn't care for it much. (It was a great romantic moment, I might add. I miss these...okay, we just had another great moment when Sabrina was telling Will to take care of the gym...argh, I'm a helpless romantic when it comes to these two. >>;;; [And other, special pairings.])
Or I might have been influenced a bit too much by 'Grapsing the Moon'...>>;;;
BTW, final chapter will be up tomorrow. ^.~ Special date, ya know?

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

^^;;; I guess so...I guess the romanticness of the moment overshadowed Sabrina's loss so much I didn't care for it much.

You didn't care for it much? ... So you didn't like it?

I miss these...okay, we just had another great moment when Sabrina was telling Will to take care of the gym...argh, I'm a helpless romantic when it comes to these two. >>;;;

Actually I originally planned for Sabrina to be captured in that case for a longer period of time which would have made Will actually have to take over the gym for a while, but I completely junked that chapter.

[And other, special pairings.])

Which ones?

BTW, final chapter will be up tomorrow. ^.~ Special date, ya know?

Special date? What possibly could be special about it? Give me 19 guesses...

 

[xMeowthz]

I like Sabrina; She's my fav. gym leader of all time

*joins the group*

 

[Alakazam17]

Hehe, I wholeheartedly agree with that statement. :D

Welcome to the club, From The Depths Of Dreams.

And Happy Birthday, P*A! :P

 

[Psychic*Absol]

You didn't care for it much? ... So you didn't like it?

I meant 'not care' like 'not being too depressed about it, not crying over it, etc.'. I loved it, but I didn't end up frustrated and thinking of different endings *cough like with Grasping the Moon cough*.

Actually I originally planned for Sabrina to be captured in that case for a longer period of time which would have made Will actually have to take over the gym for a while, but I completely junked that chapter.

Whoa. o,o I don't think that would have been a bad idea, no, not at all. Rather great plot idea! ^^

Which ones?

Too...many...Cynthia x Sabrina, Sabrina x ocs, Cynthia x ocs, a bit Abilityshipping...

Special date? What possibly could be special about it? Give me 19 guesses...

lol Zammy already spoiled it.

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

I meant 'not care' like 'not being too depressed about it, not crying over it, etc.'. I loved it, but I didn't end up frustrated and thinking of different endings *cough like with Grasping the Moon cough*.

Oh, okay. That's what I thought you mean, actually. It was one of my favorite moments that I've written, right alongside Will's proposal.

Whoa. o,o I don't think that would have been a bad idea, no, not at all. Rather great plot idea! ^^

Yes, but I think I was a little too cruel to Sabrina in the junked chapter, and made Cynthia a little too powerful, so I changed it to be nicer to Sabrina.

lol Zammy already spoiled it.

I knew it, too... why else would I ask for 19 guesses?

 

[Kay Ryu]

woooo Sabrina~ Count me in

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Welcome, Kay Ryu!

By the way, Alakazam, I always knew you were a Psychicshipper... and I'm saving your story just so you can never say you weren't one. That was awesome. Somehow though I think Sabrina's one of those girls who wouldn't wear a bikini, I'd think of her as more modest... though she does wear those knee-high boots, so maybe not.