Screenshot/Music Showcase

[mercurysky]

Here's some screenshots from Citrine Version. I hope you like them!

Spoiler:

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Some maps are quite empty, try to work on them ^^

 

[The Dewitty]

What do you think of Refresco Town, town of refreshement and Combee Forest; beware angry Vespiquen?

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Refresco Town at the Refresco Pond

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Combee Forest (completely with ambient sounds at the water)

 

[|Maximus|]

What do you think of Refresco Town, town of refreshement and Combee Forest; beware angry Vespiquen?

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Refresco Town at the Refresco Pond

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Combee Forest (completely with ambient sounds at the water)

Maybe you would like to add the edges of the trees on an extra layer. They look great but the trees are cut off on the sides.

 

[The Dewitty]

Woops! Forgot them! Thanx for telling me ;)
Btw, what do you think about my newest City, a small piece of Mount Altitue?
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[Peeky Chew]

The steps at the top don't really fit the rest and it is a bit unoriginall to use those two houses in my opinion, even using two other house from d/p/p would be better than those I think. Your person sprite is good and so are the weather effects. I don't like how purple it is at all though, all of the above is my opinion if it wasn't that, as, in my opinion, it ruins it.

Here's the title screen for my new Pokemon game I'm making:

Comments?

 

[The Dewitty]

Thanks for the advice Peeky Chew.
The purple was only because this picture was made in the evening.
The stairs... hm... good point. I'll edit 'em.

And... would you think custom houses would fit better?
Now, about your logo.

I think it's great, but if I were you I would move the letters 'Xenotime' a bit more up and make the animation that shows the black shadow around it also back to normal. Do you understand? (Sorry for bad English, coudn't find any other words to subscribe this.)

Thanks for your advice though.

 

[Peeky Chew]

Thanks for the advice Peeky Chew.
The purple was only because this picture was made in the evening.
The stairs... hm... good point. I'll edit 'em.

And... would you think custom houses would fit better?
Now, about your logo.

I think it's great, but if I were you I would move the letters 'Xenotime' a bit more up and make the animation that shows the black shadow around it also back to normal. Do you understand? (Sorry for bad English, coudn't find any other words to subscribe this.)

Thanks for your advice though.

Custom houses would probably fit a bit better, as those two houses are over used and the other d/p house are designed for that weird 2d/3d in D/P and don't fit as well in 2d. Maybe you should try to make the evening look a little more natural, like real life. After all, the evening isn't usually purple in real life xD

And do you mean just completely remove the anmation?

 

[Wind Gale]

Custom houses would probably fit a bit better, as those two houses are over used and the other d/p house are designed for that weird 2d/3d in D/P and don't fit as well in 2d. Maybe you should try to make the evening look a little more natural, like real life. After all, the evening isn't usually purple in real life xD

And do you mean just completely remove the anmation?

No, I think he means move the animated word, Xenotime up closer to the word Pokemon.

 

[The Smell]

No. The outline only fades in, he is suggesting that it fades out again also. :)

 

[The Dewitty]

The Smell, that's exactly what I was meaning.
Thanks ;)

 

[Beam Me Up Furry Bandit!]

Heres My Map

Name: Unamed

Please tell me what you think!

 

[The Dewitty]

If you ask me, it's way too grey. But.. you pixeled that house yourself? Cuz that part might be pretty good ;)

 

[Neo-Dragon]

A little too grey?
It's completely grey.
Why did ya tint it? Is it a flashback scene map or something?

 

[Ravecat]

I would play a game that was completely like that if the atmosphere was good enough.

 

[Neo-Dragon]

What would make it even neater is to take a page from Sin City (no pun intended) - but like grey with then maybe a strong red or other color for effect.
Now that's a fan game I would play.
(Check out madworld for the wii to see the effect I'm talking about used in a game).

 

[Yuoaman]

What would make it even neater is to take a page from Sin City (no pun intended) - but like grey with then maybe a strong red or other color for effect.
Now that's a fan game I would play.
(Check out madworld for the wii to see the effect I'm talking about used in a game).

That would be an interesting parallel to draw for a Pokemon fan game, Neo. lol

On the mapping itself, I think it's a little too uniform for a rural area, but since it is an inhabited place you don't have to be too random.

 

[Peeky Chew]

Oh, I see what Dew means now, The Smell, thanks :)

I haven't had time to move the 'XENOTIME' bit up yet but I will.

 

[Wichu]

Try changing the background colour; it's hard to make out the text against a similarly-coloured background.

 

[tImE]

I know this isn't exactly a screenshot, but meh :P

My version of an anime-based Pallet Town:

Tell me what you think :D

Also no stealing. :(
If you do, I will hunt you down and do things to you, so horrible, not even devil
could've come up with it >:D

 

[The Smell]

That's impressive! I really like the tiles, but all together the mapping looks great, and reminds me of the good old anime days. The Oak's Lab looks real too. :)

Great job!