Water Pokemon Trainer
Starting A New Leaf
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- Seen Oct 29, 2011
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request for a friend in RL
C@C will be appreciated
Those are really good, although the first one's mouth looks funny to me.
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My first scratch ever. Rate please!
ok so heres an update to my blue/green/what ever you wanna call her
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i need to decide which color looks best for her, take note that the first is the original
Needs to not be saved in .jpg![]()
request for a friend in RL
C@C will be appreciated
You should really be more specific with your comments in this section.not bad the hand looks weird
all this plus to reduce the jagged look, you should utilise anti-aliasing on the body as you did on the legs and stinger.It's very.. jagged? The body is supposed to be round, I'm assuming, but if you look closely, the circle is made oddly, almost like those weird ones the circle tool makes in MS Paint :\
Also, the tail/stinger has an odd point where the outline goes sideways for a pixel, which really throws it off, in my opinion.
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See what I mean? the ones on the left are yours, and the ones on the right are examples of how I would change it. I know they aren't perfect, but you get the idea. XD
Also, the outline is very dark, and has little shading. I just see black and that really really dark yellow/brown on the legs. The outline on the body is just solid black.
@Professuonal Breeder: Don't save as jpeg. We can't tell the features clearly enough to give good criticism.
Looks good, but the shading is off on the wings. you took the first wing, and then flipped it, but you forgot to change the shading so that both wings have the same light source. fix that, and you will have a nice sprite. Shading is vital.I dunno how often I will post here because I dont do Pixel Art often, but here is something I made recently, so... Enjoy ^^;
You need at least 4 sprites to have your own thread. Also, it'd be best that in the future you show your sprites alone and don't put a watermark over them.
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