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@ Mika: Well, since you asked: you misspelled 'minute'. xD Oh, but that's not in the plot so it doesn't count. Also, the 'less' in the goddess' statement should be 'lest'. But really, that's splitting commas.

I agree with Origin, certain people seem to be largely undervaluing the plot. Anyway, I see you've put a lot of effort into it, the plot is awesome (Hm...were you keeping that secret the last time to avoid spoilering us Showgan folks? Just curious. :3) and the sign-up form is very detailed. o.o *Applause* You've really made it practically impossible to waffle away any of the fields without providing the needed material and the sheer amount of them will probably scare away the lazy slackers. It's good for experienced people too since it keeps you from forgetting to mention things. Awesome. ^^ Oh, and now that there are such strict quotas on the number of every character type, do we rejoining types get a say in what role we get, sort of a reserving thing? Or will there be flexibility with the divisions as long as all necessary kinds are present? 'Cause...you know, if I'm playing spy as agreed and Clow is using his old char then that's the spies filled up already and that's not very fair for the others. :O But yeah, this stuff is more for the PMs. Just gimme' a heads up for when the new and improved Drache will appear, m'kay? Don't want to have all the good positions swiped from beneath my nose. xP

Oh yeah, where do we declare the character type (you know, spy, executive, or lab offspring)? There isn't a field for that one. Also, I take it that a former's child isn't an option this time? Or is that part of the executive thing? :3
 
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@ Alter, I found everything but the minute mispelling. Quote for mwe please?

And I think I fixed the second generation thing. o.o -points at TR Executive thingy- Does it pass your approval?
 
@ Alter, I found everything but the minute mispelling. Quote for mwe please?

And I think I fixed the second generation thing. o.o -points at TR Executive thingy- Does it pass your approval?

Heh, it's in your request to point out "any flaws (Minuet or big)". Like I said, it's not in the plot so it doesn't count. I just found it amusing. *Shot* That aside, yeah, I think any potential flaws or lackings have been liquidated. Nyu, now I've just got a huge profile to type up. ^-^
 
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*Blinks* I love it Mika-Chan, especially the sigh-up, it's original and it works ^_^. And remember Alter, I'm "Tweaking" him quite a bit, same name, same personality (With a few minor Tweaks) and a few different pokemon (The Gardevoir, and Absol should be staying though, decently the Absol, I just spontaneously feel in love with that pokemon… I don't know why XP) But yah, I'll be there, the second I re joined that RP, after that long absence I apologized for many times, I said I would be dedicated to this baby, and I meant it.

Also, while I'm here, I thought I should just say, that I'm sorry if my RPing is a tad wonky in Gailardia Academy I'm a bit of a self-conscious RPer, I get a bit nervous RPing with good RPers, that I don't RP with often, I don't know why… Anyway, yah I agree with Origin, Mika is a great RPer, as is Alter, there two of the4 best I know, and I'm quite happy to RP along side them, and will most likely do it more often in the future.
 
Anyway, yah I agree with Origin, Mika is a great RPer, as is Alter, there two of the4 best I know, and I'm quite happy to RP along side them, and will most likely do it more often in the future.

-flails- >w<;;;; I could never compare to Alter! -kicks Clow into clown-filled mirror mansion-

okie dokies. I'll most likely post it either this Saturday or the tuesday I get back from our Band Trip. Depends on how exausted I think I might be and or how much of an itch I get to do this.
 
Well I think you can xp, and I happen to think quite highly of my fictional bro. Anyways, do I hate clowns? *scratches head* do I like them? Would anyone care if they were gone???... *Pulls out trade mark scythe, and smiles a very manic smile* *Walks out five minutes later covered with blood* What? Even I have my moments of insanity X3. Anyhow whenever your ready, I'll start on a sign-up XP.
 
Sign up ready when you are, Mika! ^^ Can't wait for this thing to start.

-nod-
 
I'm bringing someting back that I bet no one remembers. At all. THE TEXT WALL. Mwahaha. Maybe someone will actually say, "Yeah, I'd join," this time. *sigh* It never hurt to be persistent, hm?

There is a legend in the world of Aedrys, speaking of a great war between the East and West over three mystic blades created by the God and Goddesses of this world. These three swords were the Blade of the Sun, the blade a blazing red-orange, was able to harness the Sun's great fury and call forth blazing rain, or create a blinding beam of light, and said to be forged by the Sun Goddess, Solarrin. There was the Blade of the Moon, a dazzling blue, forged by the Moon Goddess, Lunaria, said to be able to warp its wielder between any place instantaneously, as well as the wielder being able to warp the blade anywhere they wish. The last blade was The Blade of the Void, the blade a wicked black, created by the Shadow God, Kageriin, and was able to control shadows like puppets, as well as topple entire buildings with a single slash. If these three swords were ever brought together, an even greater power would be brought into the world, under the blades' wielder's control, but this power was described simply 'Only one pure of soul shall not bring ruin to the world. Twisted of heart, or selfish of intention shall ruin the world and destroy themselves. To right this wrong, the pure must gather the blades of legend'. The three blades had been hidden by their forgers, never to be found, unless the time truly came when the whole of Aedrys was threatened. However, the greed of men did not heed these warnings, and sought the blades' great power.

This war raged for many years, until the West finally had all three blades in their possession. The West's king, a cruel Muro with a twisted heart had killed countless people, both innocent and warring. He craved only power, and didn't care what he had to do to get it. Once the three legendary blades were place together, they had vanished, and in their place was a great monster, a reflection of the king's lust for power. The beast, black as the king's heart, swallowed him up in dark tendrils sprouting from its body. The survivors of this incident named the beast, Exittaddo, 'Bringer of Destruction.' This monster then destroyed the West's capital, Doran, and the only thing that had stopped it was the Goddesses and God descending to Aedrys and destroying the wicked beast, but destroying their physical forms in the process. Their spirits took refuge in the blades they had forged, sealing the monster in a blade of its own, called the Arcumbre. This blade was made sure to be hidden well, as the Goddesses and God didn't have power to stop the beast again. The only way to access this blade was to bring together the three original blades at the Arcumbre's temple. To help guard the four blades, they 'touched' three people of Aedrys, of three different races, giving each and their bloodline a special ability, but this power has since faded from the bloodlines.

The people of Aedrys had then agreed to peace, not wanting a repeat incident. They rebuilt Doran, now a technological metropolis, and the three 'descendants' had guarded the blades, until, after a while, the people had forgotten the war and simply marked it down as a myth. The descendants, too, had forgotten where the swords rested, so the God and Goddesses used a bit more of their remaining powers to create special creatures, bound to the blades, and they were meant to keep all but the blades' respective descendants from ever entering the resting places.

One thousand years after the war was forgotten, the bloodlines no longer clearly identifiable, and the resting places left to ruin, the bloodline possessing Kageriin's power unknowingly found the Blade of the Void and took it from its shrine. Seeing the blade's great power, she began to feel the same lust for power as the ancient Muro king. The blade's guardian sensed this, but was powerless against the Blade of the Void. She had remembered the old legend, and craved the other blades' powers. This girl, a Kuria name Kurozyn, only 17, began to destroy other villages and towns, searching for the other descendants. Kageriin's spirit watched in horror as his power was being used to destroy the world he had helped create. He attempted to warn the Goddesses, and told them to somehow have their descendants claim the blades and defeat Kurozyn, whose fighting class has seemed to go out of normal people's abilities. She has the ability to call down ferocious beasts, as well as cast all elemental magic. Her skills with the sword are better than that of a well-trained swordmaster. After hearing of the descendants claiming the other two blades, Kurozyn had fled deep in the Demon's Maw Mountains. Using water and wind magic, she can view the descendants and attempt to kill them by controlling monsters she had created. But, unfortunately for the descendants, they have no knowledge of Kurozyn's location or abilities.

You play as either the Sun or Moon descendants, (if those spots are left) or one of their teammates. You will all travel as a Slayer group, people who kill monsters and protect travelers from attacks. This way, you will gain experience and knowledge from battles, to prepare you for the showdown with Kurozyn.

Name-Character's name
Gender-Dude or Dude-ett?
Race-Options in a min.
Personality-Err, you should know this.
Description-Make it race specific, but you can add your chara's personal touches.
Class-Just wait a sec, 'kay?
RP Sample-Just as long as you make decent posts and can spell...
Bloodline-I just need someone to take the place of the Sun descendant, which is a Veinn.

Races~

Humua-Human. That's about it.
Kuria-Full blood elf. They're tall, slender, and not harsh on the eyes.
KuKuria-Humua with longer, pointy ears, so half-elf, basically.
Lieroso-Animal people, y'know, human with animal attributes?
Veinn-Dragon-Humans. Because I love dragons. And veinn cannot fly. They can hover and glide, but cannot freely fly. Their faces are more human than dragon, and their skin can be whatever color you want. Their wings are generally small, and they have tails. Their ears are...like a two feathered wing...like...ear.If you want a Veinn chara, please follow the description.
Muro-Demonic people, with horns, fangs, a slender tail, claws, ect. And they don't wear shoes. Their claws on their feet would just rip 'em.
Dragon-I only added this race because I have many a dragon character, so I thought that it would feel odd to me with no dragons. But please, I don't want 7 people wanting to be dragons. Anyways, dragons in Aedrys can wear clothes if they want to, although they usually don't. They're not very bulky, and stand on two feet. Their 'ears' can rage from two horns to cat-like ears, to nothing at all. Dragons also can have some sort of 'hairdo' such as Taiik. Don't mind the little wings. I just doodled that. And didn't bother with the wings too much. Then there's Guardian, who wears a shirt (and pants, you just can't see that.) has no fuzz, and has two horns for 'ears'. So there ya go.

So, if you want the most freedom with your chara, choose Humua, or KuKuria.

NOW, classes.

Warrior
Physical combat specialist. High power and defense. Can use heavier armor, and can use just about any type of weapon.

Chaos Mage
Black magic specialist. Able to cast impairing and destructive magic. Can't use strong armor, but can use a dagger, as well as a stave or wand.

Healing Mage
White magic specialist. Able to cast healing and repairing magic. Can't use strong armor or weapons.

Spell Blade
Varied specializations. Able to cast weak white and black magic, and also able to use stronger weapons and armors, such as chain mail (no plate armor, etc), one-handed axes, and one-handed swords.

Ninja
A very agile class, allowing use of some black magic and daggers.

Assassin
Agile, like the Ninja class, but uses hand-to-hand, throwing daggers, and poisons in battle.

Musician {This class isn't a rip off of 'Soul Purpose.' I had this written down before it was ever posted.}
Odd specialization. Controls magic by playing certain types of music. Depending on what mood and beat the song has, different magic is used. Plus, you won't get very bored.

Tamer
Tamers specialize in bows, and crossbows. They have no magic access, but have the ability to tame a wild creature to do their bidding. There may sound like no need for this class, with the use of Cyrun Gems, but Tamers can tame monster, creature, or animal.

Summoner
Summoners call forth both creatures from Cyrun Gems and can tap into the elemental streams to create powerful monsters of their own creation. Summoners can also wield both white and black magic, but their spells are weaker than a Chaos Mage's or a Healing Mage's.

Engineer

This class specializes in creating machines and AI robots to do their bidding. Engineers can create anything from a simple sword to a giant mechanical dragon. They can also make convenient gadgets, such as a "magic" map, that shows the owner's location, along with anyone in that person's group.

Thief
An offshoot of the Ninja and Assassin classes. Thieves are very agile, and can use daggers in both combat and as a long range weapon. They can't use poisons, but have skills that allow them to steal items and money from monsters.


TOWN DESCRIPTON~And I will scan the map I drew, just as soon as I get to a scanner. And this is all that was left after Kurozyn's little killing spree.

Eeshi
Small port town on the West coast.

Zeinfel
Medium resort town on Teiyaros Island. Teiyaros is a relatively small island, north of Eeshi.

Doran
Large industrial city.

Sheiru
Small village in the middle of the Great Plains.

Reito
Small village on the edge of Reitio Forest and near Umisa Ocean.

Veirus
Medium town at the foot of the Demon's Maw mountains.

Ryoset
Large town in the Demon's Maw. Haven for Veinn and dragons.

Tsehi
Medium desert oasis town located in the Kinursi Desert.

Beirus
Small village on the Southern Plains.

Leis
Large, beautiful town located near Kyose Woods, Maris Lake, and Oakarza Mountains.

Kuro Outpost
Small outpost north of the Oakarzas.

Froswind
Medium town that has snowfall year round.

Revaldor
Large, grand city that is the Capital of Aedrys. In the middle of the city is the castle that houses King Veirallius and his son, Kazeryu.

The map is here.

ELEMENTS~

Fire
A very destructive element, possessing no healing or defensive abilities. Based on magical offense.
Subcategories of Fire are heat and explosion.
Opposite of Ice.
Ice
A defensive element, using barriers to deflect attacks and reflect magic. Based on magical defense.
Subcategories are snow, hail and cold.
Opposite of Fire.
Water
A balanced element, possessing healing, defensive and offensive maneuvers. Water is Multiuse.
Subcategories are mist, steam, and acid.
Opposite of Lightning.
Lightning
A very destructive element, having no healing and weak defensive abilities. Based on magical speed.
Subcategories are cloud and sound.
Opposite of Water.
Earth
A 'tank' element, having no healing abilities (unless using the 'Nature' subcategory), but strong defense, stamina, and strength. Based on physical defense.
Subcategories are nature and stone.
Opposite of Wind.
Wind
An elusive element, based on a 'hit and run' strategy, which is effective, as wind-based things are generally frail. Based on physical speed.
Subcategories are time and blades.
Opposite of Earth.
Light
The 'healer' element, having very weak offensive abilities, but strong healing, stamina, and defense. Also allows removal of negative effects, such as Slow, Poison, or Blind. Based on healing.
Subcategories are ray (an offensive version) and shield (an even more defensive version). Even damaging magics are classified as White Magic.
Opposite of Dark.
Dark
An offensive element, although it has weak physical traits and direct damage magic. It focuses on dealing damage through using enfeebling magic. Based on magical offense.
Subcategories are shade (a defensive version) and malice (+direct damage, -enfeebling.) Classified as Black Magic.
Opposite of Light.


MAINLY FOR THE SUMMONER CLASS, BUT YOU OTHERS SHOULD STILL READ IT.
Cyrun Gems are physical manifestations of elemental energy, formed the same way that monsters are, although gems take much more energy to form, making them a rare find. Gems have the ability to amplify magic of their element and capture monsters of their element, too. Each Cyrun Gem can hold up to 3 monsters. However, the only people who can call monsters out of the Gems are Summoners. Each different element of a Gem can only be found in a certain area, too.

MONSTERS~

Monsters are living, physical forms of the elements, created like Cyrun Gems, but they need much less energy to be created, making them much more common. Monsters are generally found in the same place that Cyrun Gems of their element are, but sometimes a Fire monster could be in a Light area. Monsters also can have two different elements, making them more versatile, but easier to find the right Cyrun Gem to catch them with.

Here's where monsters of certain elements are generally found.

Fire~Tsehi
Ice~Froswind
Water~Eeshi
Lightning~Leis (Oakarzas)
Earth~Reito (Reitio Forest)
Wind~Beirus
Dark~Demon's Maw Mountains
Light~Leis (Kyose Woods)

I will also make a bestiary soon, and any contributions will be appreciated.
 
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I just fell in love with this roleplay. I'm so in... I mean, freedom of race, class, etc, gives me the freedom to do basically whatever I need to, within certain guidelines. So yeah, if you were to create it, I'm in. That was a really well-thought out plot, btw. How long did it take you to come up with this?

Yesh, that was for MD. Everbody else, now:

Clow: Hmm... maybe we should Keyblade all the clowns to death. (Yes, ACC has finally got around to buying and playing KHII. I still can't beat Xemnas's final form though, dangit. I either run out of HP when he shoots at me, or Riku dies. Gah!) Seriously, not many people do compare to Alter. However...

Mika: You compare to Alter, at least occasionally. That much is kind of obvious. Get over it, and stop being so freakin' self-conscious. XD Seriously, your rp owns my soul, and if I don't join it, well, it's only because I'm too nervous to sign up.

Grim: Moderately good? Yeah, says the guy whose roleplay isn't gonna have me as a member without some major improvement. It looks like a modified Neopets RP plot. (No, I don't mean a plot where you roleplay as a Neopet, I meant a plot that you could find on the rp section of the boards: Short and doomed to peter out before its conclusion.)

ACC: Hold on, why am I talking to myself?
 
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I just fell in love with this roleplay. I'm so in... I mean, freedom of race, class, etc, gives me the freedom to do basically whatever I need to, within certain guidelines. So yeah, if you were to create it, I'm in. That was a really well-thought out plot, btw. How long did it take you to come up with this?

Yesh, that was for MD. Everbody else, now:

Clow: Hmm... maybe we should Keyblade all the clowns to death. (Yes, ACC has finally got around to buying and playing KHII. I still can't beat Xemnas's final form though, dangit. I either run out of HP when he shoots at me, or Riku dies. Gah!) Seriously, not many people do compare to Alter. However...

Mika: You compare to Alter, at least occasionally. That much is kind of obvious. Get over it, and stop being so freakin' self-conscious. XD Seriously, your rp owns my soul, and if I don't join it, well, it's only because I'm too nervous to sign up.

Grim: Moderately good? Yeah, says the guy whose roleplay isn't gonna have me as a member without some major improvement. It looks like a modified Neopets RP plot. (No, I don't mean a plot where you roleplay as a Neopet, I meant a plot that you could find on the rp section of the boards: Short and doomed to peter out before its conclusion.)

ACC: Hold on, why am I talking to myself?

Thank you~! And it took me a few hours to type it. I'd been brainstorming the plot for awhile at school that day, and tweaked it while typing. And it's very texty, so that's why people probably didn't want to join... And if I can get about two more people to join, I'd post it.
 
Clow: I just now noticed that you murdered the clowns. Couldn't you at least have left one for me to bonk with my patented ACC bone of justice?

AJ: What is this "Trigun" you speak of? XD

MD: You've got two people now. XD
 
@Mika: Heh, what's with the 'I can't compare' nonsense? Just take your bow for a plot well done and stop being modest. That plot is certainly up to my standards - heck, it's in much better shape than this mess of a new plot I currently have typed up - regardless of what you might think of your writing overall. ^-^

@Midnight_Dragon249: Actually, I do remember that plot and I was kind of wondering where it poofed off to. Anyway, a part here stuck out (And I think I mentioned this the first time around too):

Midnight_Dragon249 said:
She has the ability to call down ferocious beasts, as well as cast all elemental magic. Her skills with the sword are better than that of a well-trained swordmaster.

What's this chunk of present-tense doing in the middle of a past-tense narrative? o.O Stick to your tense, please, even if the character mentioned is still around. The last sentence is also kind of...meh, there's just not enough content there, really, try merging it with the previous one.

That aside, I like the elemental system you have, although some elements seem too narrowly defined to me (E.g. Air could certainly have defensive abilities in deflecting missile weapons and the like) but the class selection thing is a bit of a turn-off for me. Now that would be fine and dandy if this were an RPG the way I use the word (I.e. a computer game) but in the written RPs I prefer a bit more freedom with characters (At least what kind of weapons and equipment they use as mine tend to be...rather unorthodox.) and the last details (about towns and classes) are meager one-liners which seem awfully slapdash in comparison to your well-written plot. So meh, it's a good plot but the specifics of playing the RP kind of rub me the wrong way. Sorry. :3
 
Here it is. Part two of New Generation

The New Generation: Angels and Demons

Rated PG 14

PLOT
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A few years after the defeat of Team Rocket and Team Aqua/Magma. They have decided to delve deeper. Team Rocket, Aqua and Magma have joined forces with a few other gangs and have merged into one ultimate pokemon laundering organization. Team Omni. They are recognized with White Magma uniforms.

After the domination of pokemon Gold/Silver and Crystal Team Omni had 1 powerfull leader. Giovanni who was studying pokemon for 3 years found out something. A mysterious plant found in Ilex Forest had a strange ability. Once ingested the plant would be able to change DNA. Which once ingested any DNA that would be admisitered to the patient would hybrid with the DNA and eventualy become it. Meaning if the plant was ingested into one patient and Charmander DNA would be administered to the patient the patient would warp into a Charmander.

So Giovanni decided to administer this treatment to highly advanced trainers that would be able to use this pokemon ability. One by one Team Omni has plundered trainers and their pokemon. They have kidnapped them and sent them to the Generation Labs. These have long been abandoned and have recently been opened again. It is located underground a few miles east of Vermilian. The trainers pokemon are in holding cells to the north of the complex and the trainers are in the medical labs to the south.

From Part 1:

As the trainers went into the recreational center. One by one they were taken away from the recreational center and ingected with pokemon serium. The pokemon serum worked with the food they ate. Then Giovanni made an appearence via widescreen. He told them about what they had been ingected with. Shortly after the Omni's gave the trainers a special kind of pill. When they took it they immediatly fell asleep. However some of them were already awake and they noticed that there was no longer any time limit for transformation. They mutated in front of their eyes. Then the hybrids broke out of the labs. Once they did so however the labs initiated a lockdown and traps with turrets formed.

The Hybrids managed to make it out after fighting their way. Most of them met a special mutant hybrid who was Blaziken, Scizor and had psy powers as well. It is unknown what his intentions were. He apparently was one of the first generation of pokemon hybrids. When Giovanni was still testing his formula. He disapeared however by teleporting away.

Soon the Hybrids went to the lobby of the Generation labs. But Giovanni was there waiting for them. After saying that the hybrids were to dangourous he detonated charges around the first floor. Then the floor beneath the lobby crumbled as the hybrids fell down it. But then they noticed they were now in a sewer pipe apparently forgoten when the building was built.
This is where they hybrids start. The sewer pipe.

However Omni's who survived the explosion are all around the lower floors of the Generation labs that werent destroyed. They are searching for a way out and to eliminate any hybrids they find.

But around Vermilan city trainers have noticed a large explosion coming out of the experimental labs. A few trainers flock towards the labs and try to find out what is going on.
YOUR ROLE
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Unlike the first part. You do not need to play as a hybrid. There are three templates

Hybrid

Omni

Trainer

Trainers do not meet up with hybrids or Omni's till later in the story.

Trainers are random trainers in Vermilian city, they could be starter trainers or pokemon masters.

Omni's are random team members who are still in the remaining part of the labs. They are searching for any trace of survivors of the blast


Final Notes
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Trainers will meet up with the Hybrids when they escape the complex via the old sewer tunnel. Omnis will escape the ruined complex eventualy and will still try to chase the hybrids even though their leader tried to kill them to take out the hybrids.


Only 10 other hybrids survived the blast Giovanni made.

Rules
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1. All PC rules apply

2. Spelling and grammer is not very crucial but recommended.

3. Please stick to this roleplay like glue. I need dedicated roleplayers

4. You can have legendarys. Actualy it is recomended. You have up to 4 people being legendary

5. Trainers can be beginning trainers to being pokemon masters. Plus they can have a random assorment of weapons if they wish

6. Omni's carry pokemon and weapons. Mostly non-leathal weapons but they may carry a small weapon if they wish

7. One of the biggest rules is NO POWERPLAYING OR BUNNYING

8. If you are a legendary then you will not be able to go through the full potential of it. You will barely be able to skim its powers. Legendary roleplaying is used for people who will not powerplay with it.

9. You cannot have 2 of the same legendary's in the roleplay. You can have 2 or more of the same regular pokemon but not legendarys

10. Last but not least please have fun






Sign-up Sheets
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Hybrid

Name: (self explanitory)

Age: (Please above 10)

Gender: (self explanitory)

Pokémon to hybrid with: (This is where it gets tricky. Only 4 people in the roleplay can hybrid with legendarys. But I implore you to choose your favorite.)

Description: (what your character looks like remember they look like pokemon now)

Personality: (What your character acts like)

History: (What happened that was so big that made you one of Omni's favorites? What happened in the labs? This is a crucal part to the roleplay)

Other: (anything else to add)

RP Sample: (Another important step. This is where you must show me what your writing style is so I can judge you.)

Omni

Hybrid

Name: (self explanitory)

Age: (Please above 15)

Gender: (self explanitory)

Pokémon: (if any. Please also post what their level is and anything else)

Description: (what your character looks like. Remember Omni's wear standard issue uniform. Which is a magma garb that is pure white with the Omni logo replacing the Magma one)

Personality: (What your character acts like)

Weapons: (if any. Omni's hold non leathal guns)

History: (How did you become an Omni? This is a crucial part of the roleplay)

Other: (anything else to add)

RP Sample: (Another important step. This is where you must show me what your writing style is so I can judge you.)

Trainer

Name: (self explanitory)

Age: (Please above 10)

Gender: (self explanitory)

Pokémon: (if any. Please also post what their level is and anything else)

Description: (what your character looks like. No restrictions)

Personality: (What your character acts like)

History: (How did you become a trainer? This is a crucial part of the roleplay)

Other: (anything else to add)

RP Sample: (Another important step. This is where you must show me what your writing style is so I can judge you.)

SLOTS
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1. Grim, Mewtwo, Mewtwo (Legendary)
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.

Here it is
 
@Mika: Heh, what's with the 'I can't compare' nonsense? Just take your bow for a plot well done and stop being modest. That plot is certainly up to my standards - heck, it's in much better shape than this mess of a new plot I currently have typed up - regardless of what you might think of your writing overall. ^-^

@Midnight_Dragon249: Actually, I do remember that plot and I was kind of wondering where it poofed off to. Anyway, a part here stuck out (And I think I mentioned this the first time around too):



What's this chunk of present-tense doing in the middle of a past-tense narrative? o.O Stick to your tense, please, even if the character mentioned is still around. The last sentence is also kind of...meh, there's just not enough content there, really, try merging it with the previous one.

That aside, I like the elemental system you have, although some elements seem too narrowly defined to me (E.g. Air could certainly have defensive abilities in deflecting missile weapons and the like) but the class selection thing is a bit of a turn-off for me. Now that would be fine and dandy if this were an RPG the way I use the word (I.e. a computer game) but in the written RPs I prefer a bit more freedom with characters (At least what kind of weapons and equipment they use as mine tend to be...rather unorthodox.) and the last details (about towns and classes) are meager one-liners which seem awfully slapdash in comparison to your well-written plot. So meh, it's a good plot but the specifics of playing the RP kind of rub me the wrong way. Sorry. :3

Can and will do... Later. I was planning on revising it anyways, if enough people decided to join. And it seems that enough people said they might join, so I'll start the revision asap. I could also give the classes and elements a wider range. I'll give the towns a better decription, too.
 
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Part One: Rebirth

Every one-million years, when every planet's core starts to act up and large amounts of calamities begin, a meteor comes and revolves around that planet, giving random people special abilities. This meteor is as large as a human space ship. After revolving the planet for ten days, the meteor will land on the planet, waiting for five of the people that gained abilities to board it.

It will then take those five people to a planet far out in space called "Life". This planet holds a competition every one-million years. The leader of this planet gives the other dieing planets a chance of gaining back their life by having the inhabitants fight.

But what no one knows is that the leader of this planet is planning something that will decide the fate of every planet in the solar system. By giving each winning planet a rebirth stone, the leader has also given them something that is inside the stone. This devise is like a radar. Once the stone is in the planet's core, the leader of Life will then have complete control of it.

After he gains control of all the planets still alive, he will force them to give him their planet's life energy. After he has as many planets from one solar system, he will create multiple black wholes in that solar system and will move on to another solar system. He will continue this over and over until he has enough life energy to control another planet, a special planet so far in space that it would take one-million years to get there.

This planet controls time and whom so-ever takes control of this planet will be able to do as they please. The leader of Life wants to control this planet which is called Tock. After he controls Tock, he will travel back in time and will steal even more planet's life energies and will soon become the ultimate force in the universe.

But, a group of people stand in his way. They are the guardians of Tock called "The Saviors Of Time". They protect Tock with their lives. They have special abilities that would make the sun seem small. Even if the leader gets to Tock, he won't be able to defeat the saviors of time without an army of super human.

The winning planet of the competition will gain a stone that will keep their planet's core safe for another one-million years. The second place planet will gain a stone that only lasts for five hundred-thousand years. And the third winner will gain a stone that only lasts for three hundred-thousand years. But it really depends on the core's reaction.

Once these five people land on this unknown planet, they will take place in this competition. This competition only allows five people and will decide the fate of their world. If these five people win, they will be given a stone called "The Rebirth Stone".

Only three planets will get a stone. This stone, once placed in the core of a planet will calm the core and will stop the calamities. But only for a certain amount of years, months or days depending on the core's reaction.

It has been one-million years. The planets have gotten hot do to the core's soon to come destruction. Calamities have also begun on all of the planets. Just like the other millions of years, a meteor has come out of the blue and has started to revolve each planet.

After a few days, people have been reporting that they have strange abilities. Most are scared of themselves and some have killed themselves. It has now been ten days and the meteor has landed. On earth, it has landed in the middle of the Atlantic ocean. After five people boarded the meteor, it shot out into space and headed toward Life.

Your Role
You are one of the five people who have gotten a strange ability. You have just arrived on Life and you must take place in the competition, win and gain earth it's Rebirth stone, place it in the earth's core and save earth.

Sign Up
Name:
Age: (14- 20)
Gender:
Personality: (At lest five lines)
Description: (Same as above)
Previous occupation: (What did you do for a living before gaining an ability)
Ability: (What ability has the meteor given you)
Other: (Any extra info that you would like to tell about your character)​

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Part One: Rebirth
Part Two: Race To Death
Part Three: The War
Part Four: The Trick and the allience
Part Five: Tock And The Saviors Of Time
Part Six: Things Change
 
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Not really sure what the level of interest in the Sonic series is here, but ah well. I just threw it together on a whim anyways, so its not as long as it should be. XD;

Sonic Thunder

The events in this RP take place after the events of Sonic Rivals during the Adventure timeline (Adventure -> Adventure 2 -> Heroes -> Shadow -> Sonic the Hedgehog (360) -> Sonic Rivals). However, everyone's memories of the events of Sonic the Hedgehog were erased at the games end, so we'll consider that non-existent.

Plot
It has been but a year since the events of Rivals, when the evil Eggman Nega, Dr. Eggmans descendent from 200 years in the future, came back in time from the future and attempted to take control of the world. His attempt was thwarted by Sonic, Knuckles, Shadow and Silver, and Silver sealed Nega in a card and returned him to the future. Six months after Silver's return to the future, Eggman Nega broke free of his prison, and escaped into the past once more.

Feeling responsible for allowing Nega to escape, Silver left his world and Blaze once more in pursuit of the past. Upon arriving in the past, however, he could not find Eggman Nega anywhere. Nega, however, was hiding aboard Space Colony ARK, a location that Silver was not aware of due to his lack of knowledge of the time. During the six months that followed, Silver continued to search for Eggman Nega with no results, while the evil being from the future began making modifications to the weaponry aboard ARK; particularly the Eclipse Cannon. In reality, Nega was converting the Eclipse Cannon into a weapon capable of creating much chaos throughout the planet without directly harming the planet itself. Using forbidden technology from the future, Eggman Nega transformed the Eclipse Cannon into a weapon capable of transforming human lifeforms into anthropomorphic animals, much like Sonic, Silver, and the majority of the cast.

The day of reckoning finally arrived as the end of the six months came to a close. Despite all of Nega's planning and genius, he made one brutal miscalculation. Without the use of the Chaos Emeralds, the Eclipse Cannon was unable to reach maximum output, and thus was only capable of affecting a single city instead of the entire planet. Unfortunately, that single city was Station Square, and all of the cities inhabitants became anthropomorphic animals. The city plunged into chaos, and was eventually sealed off by G.U.N, the higher ups not wanting a worldwide panic.

One benefit of the incident, however, was that the issue was brought to the attention of those willing to step in and help. Sonic, who had been in Station Square at the time of the assault; Shadow, who had become an agent of the government after putting his past behind him; Silver, who had also been present in Station Square that day. Along with their allies, and most importantly, you, a human who had become caught up in the life changing blast from the Eclipse Cannon, this group of heroes must put a stop to the plans of Eggman Nega, gathering the Chaos Emeralds so that he is incapable of fulfilling his evil goals.

Overview
You are one of the many caught in the blast from the modified Eclipse Cannon, and have become an anthropomorphic creature as a result. Just to clarify, characters like Sonic, Shadow, Silver, Amy, Tails, Knuckles, etc are all examples of anthropomorphic creatures. Somehow, you have found yourself involved with the hero group. It soon becomes your responsibility to help see the groups efforts go through. Your journey will take you all over the world and beyond in search of the Chaos Emeralds, and you will face many dangers.

Character Profiles


Adding to final version; will go into detail on the main characters.

Form Can be an original or existing character. Maximum of two per person.

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Animal: (What anthropomorphic animal are you?)
Appearance:
Personality:
Abilities: (For example, Sonic has super speed, Tails can fly, Knuckles has his strength. Something along those lines.)
History:
Other:
 
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