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The Graphics Rating Thread [READ THE FIRST POST. D:<]

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Before I begin...

Motsuko: AUGH! *stabbed to death* LIVONSE! ;;; DON'T WORRY, YOU'RE STILL SEXY LIVONSE. *shot'd*

Ah, where is the justice in the world? |D By the sheer fact that Livonse is in it, of course it is 10/10. *SHOTSHOT'D* ;

WHAT THE HELL DOES *shot'd* MEAN? omg I want to use this so much but I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IT MEANS! ;)

Ok, finally, I get to rate something by the Lokiey again!

@ Loki: Yes! That is what I'm talking about, Loki! ILOVETHISBANNA,BABY!!11!!!1 Maybe not your best, but I still love it. I don't like the renders so much, so I'll ignore the "look" of the renders, but I'll pay close attention to the placing, styles, etc.

Where to begin... *uses ultra-powered vision to scan image*

Ah, the background ^^;
This green/yellow/brownish lines...I love 'em. They fill in the space between Link and Young Link. Withough them, it would seem a little bit empty.

Next? Those things "on top" of the renders, in the lower left and right corners. They look almost like vector brushes (maybe they are?);
These look good, but I don't like how the left one cuts apart of Young Links armpit and lower torso out. Maybe you should lower the opacity, so Young Link can be seen underneath it a little. The right one seems fine, to me. Nice addition, Loki.

And finally, render placement, etc, etc;
Oh, I hate doing this part, 'cause I never know what to say! I'll start with regular Link. He looks fantastic! (as in his placement, etc; Like I said, I do not like these renders). The lighting is amazing (not sure if that was on the original render or not). The only problem is he sticks out a little too much. I honestly have no idea how you'd fix that though, so I'll keep my mouth shut. Pretend I never said anything about it. ^^

As for Young Link, he's alot better. All the good qualities of reg. Link, plus better blendning. Maybe you should move him over to the left a little, though?

Anyways, these are just suggestions. I like this banner, Loki, but I like the things you do with actual anime characters better. Still, this is good. I'm going to rate is a 8.8/10.

(no complaining this time, either) :>

Motsuko
 
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Reply to Motsuko!:

1. Hell isn't censored, so you don't have to try and censor it. xD; It just kind of makes me think, "CENSOR BAIPASS?!?! MUST DU MOD ACKSHUN- oh wait." Yeah. xD Censor bypass isn't okay, so you don't even have to try. xD;

2. I can't never really explain it, but to me, it comes after I'd said something stupid. *shot'd* (<-- LOL.)

3. Well. I'm so very glad you like the placement. :D But actually, those two were already together, Young Link is getting piggy-backed by Link, you just can't tell. xD It's good that it worked out though~

The render itself, I don't particularly mind that you don't like. xD; not really into the whole Zelda series (This was a request, so rly. xD)

The red lighting on their faces was added by yours truly. :3 And the 'vector' brushes at the bottom are actually _____________ <--- SECRET! :x it's not hard to figure out what it is if you look at some other banners, but eh.

If I could, I would totally get rid of the lump on the very left of the 'vector brushes' at the bottom, but alas, I don't have the .psd, and I can't. xD; But I'll make sure not to go overboard again. *shot'd*
 
Another complex rating by Motsuko. =P
Maybe my latest banner can get such a long rating as well... *puppy eyes*

*pant, pant* Ok, *pant* last one (for tonight) XD;

@ Pefectionist: So-so on this one. It's a nice background, etc, just not so sure I like the choice of render. Also, her right toe is cut off. O.o I'm not sure if you noticed that while making it. Also, one last negative point, the brushes are a little close together. Those two tree vectors are nice, but should maybe be moved to the right a little bit, to help fill out the background.

Ok, that was the bad news...Now, let's hear some good news ^^;

Love, love, love, love the top and bottom border type thingy. I know that wasn't the actual size of the brush, and you had to resize it (seeing as it's a bit blurry) but it's still nice. Also, the color go really well together. The scanlines are nice, too.

All in all, I'd rate this a 7.0/10. I've alread seen someone with an extremely good, almost 10/10 sig using this same render, so maybe I'm just judging yours compared to this one. I hope not, though =]

Anyways, there's your rating ^^,

Hope ya like it;

Motsuko TRYING TO GET RID OF THAT D*MN "LIVE"!

Reply to Loki's "Reply to Motsuko!:":

Reply to Motsuko!:

1. Hell isn't censored, so you don't have to try and censor it. xD; It just kind of makes me think, "CENSOR BAIPASS?!?! MUST DU MOD ACKSHUN- oh wait." Yeah. xD Censor bypass isn't okay, so you don't even have to try. xD;

Ok, I'm sorry. I have no idea what censor bypass is, but I think I have an idea xD
I didn't mean to 'cause any stress, I just don't like to say it. But I'll just say it from now on. ^^;

Reply to Motsuko!:

2. I can't never really explain it, but to me, it comes after I'd said something stupid. *shot'd* (<-- LOL.)

Ok, I kinda get it. Lemme try;

"BLAH BLAH, STOOPID TEXT HEER! AAARGHH PREETEND I M SAYEENG SUMTHEENG REELEEY DUM... *shot'd*"

Does that work!?! ^^; *shot'd*

lolololol

Motsuko TRYING TO GET RID OF THAT DAMN "LIVE"!
 
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Rate. Two versions.

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Please and thank you.
 
@michii - those things in the right corner arent really atractive use a clipping mask to make it look better. scanlines are too noticable tone them down alot so that they are noticable. i dont know but maybe a border migh go with this.
 
They are both great.
The first one seems a little dull to me. But it is still great.
The second one is perfect!!!
so I give a 7//10 and a 9.5//10

So... Same for me.
And what color border should I use?
[PokeCommunity.com] The Graphics Rating Thread [READ THE FIRST POST. D:<]


[PokeCommunity.com] The Graphics Rating Thread [READ THE FIRST POST. D:<]
 
YunaDances: Mind you I like the first one better because it ain't so blurry >> Ahem, they are both great, I like the brushes in the background. You could tru some lighting effects or color changes, but that's just me. The border color... oh, let's say Dark Brown? XDD;
 
id like to introduce my latest work:

[PokeCommunity.com] The Graphics Rating Thread [READ THE FIRST POST. D:<]
 
Loki: You make putting two focals together look easy o.o I'm jealous D: -shot'd- Effect-wise, it looks great. The glowing red-ish orbs definitely draw my attention towards the two Links. The 'vector-like' brushing at the bottom of the banner are nice, as well, and the green-to-orange lines behind them stop the background from looking too empty. Though the green orb next to the text is just a bit distracting, considering it's the most prominent glowy orb thing there that I can see. Ooh, and there's an outer shadow on the render? That's why I felt this sense of depth when I was looking at it o3o.

Colour-wise... I'm not a fan o.o The dual-tone of orange and green go nicely with the render, but it seems sort of boring. Well, it doesn't look too bad as it is, but if there were no glowy orbs, then yes, it would definitely look bland o__o But you made it work, so, er, good for you xD -shot'd-

I don't like how the text is spaced out like that, but it does help take up a bit more sense. It might look better with some longer text, but I know it's a request, so... xP

The rendering is a bit rough, though. I still see some white lines outside the renders. Oh, and you missed a section just above the big-Link's ear, between his hair. Oh, actually, there's a whole bunch of other areas as well...

Perfectionist: To make up for my crappy comment last time, I'll try to make this one a bit more detailed ^^;; I think that it looks perfectly fine without a border, seeing as the film-strip things at the top and bottom already look like borders. I feel the floooow~ No, really. The flower/vine brushes add a nice flow, following the way the character is leaning back. However, the way that the flower/vine brushes are set up make it look like the brushing is a focal as well o.o I mean, it's not too distracting, but the fact that it's separated from the render makes it look like a separate focal, rather than bringing the attention to the character/person/girl o.o Perhaps try moving it behind the person~

The render itself is very rough around the edges, especially in areas between strands of hair, where black bits are visible. And it needs a little bit of blending work, so the render doesn't stick out.

The colours look absolutely fine. The reds and pinks go together with the render nicely. The effects are looking good, but spread the love a bit~ The effects seem to be mainly focused on the right side. Add a little bit of those dark red vector brushing to the left side. Though the fact that the girl is there sort of balances it out. But oui, c'est a good banner. -shot'd- o.o

Michii: The more contrasted version (number 2) looks better, but the higher contrast means that the scanlines are more visible, and it looks far too distracting. I'm loving the colours on the second one, though. It's bright and lively. I'm unsure about the green thing in the background, though. Maybe add different tones of green, just so it doesn't look too plain. I'm liking the depth, though, with the bottom bud being blurred out, and the green thing in the back as well.

I love the arrangement of the text and the little duplicates. It looks like a film strip, and it isn't too distracting. But maybe just sharpen up the main focal, just so it stands out a bit more in comparison to everything else. And the text on the second version looks a bit over sharpened o.o Oh, and nice use of soft brushing. I love the glowy-ness xD

And about that starry stock (the white dots... at least I think it's a star stock. or spatters. or something), it looks sort of like snow falling from the top of the banner, which is a pretty cool effect, and I like it. But maybe blur it out in small areas, so it adds more depth (as if it was snow in the background) xP

YunaDances: The first version is better, in my opinion. In the second one, the character looks way too... glowy xD It looks alright without a border. What's with all this fussing about borders? xD Though if you want to put one on, a black or dark brown border might look good.

It's a simple, yet effective banner. The brushing in the background looks alright, and the text is definitely good, as it stops the banner from looking too empty. Nice font choice, as well. Everything seems to blend together really well. I even thought that the text was part of the brushing >.> Though I just think that it's because I'm going blind...

Anyway, with all those banners with scan lines, I think it'd actually look good here, at really low opacity, and erased with a soft brush in some areas. Or maybe a different texture. Because there are some areas which look slightly empty (I'm talking about the top and bottom left corners). But whatever, it still looks good as it is at the moment.

evilcheese: lawls. Floooooow~ Yeah, it has good flow. Interesting C4D effects, as well. It's sort of like, there's glass shattering in front of him, or something like that. Though I don't like the effect C4Ds behind his head, since it just looks messy. And I think that it needs some more colours~ Black, white, and dull purple look somewhat boring. If you're going to have the purple there, stick a lighter purple effect C4D somewhere in there, just to add a bit of colour. Otherwise, it might as well be black and white o.o

And maybe add a 100px soft brush in white in the lighting source, just to emphasize it a bit. And the text definitely needs some work. It's sort of just hidden there in the side >.>

C4Ds aren't needed in every banner o.o Try working on some other types of effects. C4Ds are just one type, there's plenty of other stuff you could do to add effects~


... phew. I'm TIRED D: -shot'd-

EDIT: Might as well post a banner xD

[PokeCommunity.com] The Graphics Rating Thread [READ THE FIRST POST. D:<]

repost: It's a WIP. I need help in finishing it off, though :\
 
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Shiranui: Yeah, I noticed the rendering when I was making the avatar and I was like, "... AKGJWEFZL;EWER!!?!??" xD;; And neglected to fix it because I lacked a .psd file. *lament* I think I could've chosen a different font, one that was a little wider horizontally. That way it wouldn't look so awkward, spaced out like that? xD; And there's a drop shadow on the renders, but the guess was close enough. xD

Color in Zelda banners are my absolute worst. When I see Link, I immediately go, "GREEN?!" And that just kills it. xD;

Glowy orbs kind of half-save-the-day? :K

Anyway, thank you very much for the comments. :D


As for your banner, which I totally didn't see earlier:

I think the lines around the colors are a little heavy, and it makes it look... I dunno, kind of awkward I guess. xD; I like the way the line sort of trails off, and maybe you could add some cool black pentooling extending from the red center to fill in the upper left hand corner? I dunno, that'd be my best suggestion, but otherwise I think it looks great. The shading makes it nice and 3d and... yeah. xD I like it so far.

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Alright guys. I PROMISE. Dx

Tomorrow. -unless my parents drag me somewhere- I will go on a rating spree to make up for the fact that I haven't rated anything in the past few days. *embarrassed embarrassed*


But in the meantime, here, a Badou banner. I tried to make it sort of the same style as my Benedictus banner (the super painfully colorful one) but I ended up doing something pretty different. xD; Vectors/pen-tool lookin' things were not made by me, so yeah. xD

[PokeCommunity.com] The Graphics Rating Thread [READ THE FIRST POST. D:<]

I'm having issues getting the focal point back up to Badou's... um... half-face. xD; And I'm not sure about the text either. I'm considering getting rid of it altogether. *shot'd* What do you guys think? D:

I just realized that badou looks like Lavi from D.Gray-man in this banner..
 
Omigawsh; 5:41 am, got about 4 or 5 hours sleep last night. Sorry if these ratings aren't as detailed. I'm only going to rate a few of them...


@ Michii: So ya finally make an appearance, do ya? How do you think I'm suppose to go on living without hearing from my role model? ;)
Anyways, I'm happy I finally get to rate ya =]

This isn't a great peice from you, Michii...good, but it doesn't really stand out.
So, quickly looking at both the banners, I can tell right way no. 1 is better. The scanlines in no. 2 seem a little bit darker than in the first one. Also, the second image seems to have a bit too much contrast. It seems sharp and rough, while the other one seems soft and gentle. Did you sharpen the second image?

I'm also seeing (and loving) those four thumbnails of flowers on the left side. As much as I like them, I think the sigs could hve gone without; Even so, it helps to "fill it out". But, if you don't mind me saying, you might want to try to move it to the left just a little bit. And when I say little bit, I'm talking about 2 or 3 px. Anyways, that's just what I think.

I like those white speckles you scattered around your images, too. I think you should soften them up a bit though.

And my last point; A border. I believe I'm looking at a white, 1 px border... possibly not? I can't really tell, but either way, I think you should add a 1 px border around your image. What color? I'm thing pinkish-red, to mtch the flower heads. But it might not look good. It's ulimately up to you, anyways!

So, in conclusion, I think no. 1 is the best of the two. It's not one of your bests. And I know I say that to everyone, but I'm being truthful everytime I say it. But just because it's not your best doesn't mean it's not good. It's just lacking the qualities of a great banner. I'm going to rate this a 7.2/10. (Don't worry, Michii; You're still my favorite role model!) ^^,


@ YunaDances: Really like it, Yuna. It's vector, but not extremely vector. I'm actually going to disagree with Hazuki, and say I like the second one better. Why? No idea XD. It just seem more "magical" that the first one. (Omigawsh, as if I just said magical... *shot'd*).

The outer glow is around your render is awesome, but maybe a bit too noticable? I really like the text though. Very skillful.

This is a huge improvement from your last banner. I absolutely, positively LOVE when I critisise an artist's work, then they come back with an amazing banner, and slap me in the face with itXD; You've just proven yourself, YunaDances. (to me, anyways) Good job!

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YunaDances wants to learn the move "Grunge Banners", but Yuna aready knows four moves. Delete an older move to make room for "Grunge Banners"?

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jkbutya.. you should try some grunge style banners. I'm interested to see what you'd do with them. For this banner, I'm going to rate it 8.4/10.


@ evilcheese: Well, first of all, it's a My Chemical Romance banner, so it's obviously a 10/10 already ^^; jk... but I still love the fact you used Gerard Way.
Anyways, time for some rating;

This is good. Not great, not horrible, but good. As Shiranui said, it definitely has flow, though the scanlines in the back seem to take away from the flow a little bit. But still.. It's nice.

I like the lighting behind him. I almost gives the effect that he's in water, and the sun is beaming through the waves upon his cheek.

Interesting choice of C4D in this banner. But good use of it! Blends perfectly. The text is almost 10/10, but just nudge it over to the right a tiny, little bit.

Nice work, evilcheese. I used to not like your art, but after the last couple of banners, I'm starting to come around =] 8.0/10.


@ Shiranui: *gasp* such a long rate! + rep for you, my friend.

Anyways, your...WIP. What is a WIP? Not exactly sure. I'll rate yours as soon as I find out what a WIP is, 'cause if this is suppose to be a regular signture, (no offence) but I'd rate it a 0.2/10. It's so plain.

BUT! That's why I'm asking what a WIP is, so you atleast have a channce to prove that this has all the qualities a WIP needs.

Anyways, get back to me soon. I want to rate it. XD


@ Loki: Oh no! Don't go on rating spree! Mine and Shiranui's rates look like SPAM compared to these massive "sprees" you get going every now and then. XD;;
Anyway, on to the rating of your banner. ^^;

Loki. I don't know what to say. I love your banners. I love this banner. I love your sig banner. I love my sig banner (which you made, of course). This is not your best, but I think it's up there. I love how you didn't focus on the face of Badou. It looks so much cooler that way.

The focal might not be on his half face, but I think it's better this way. It's not too far from his "half face", anyways. And the color fills of the render behind Badou really help to bring him out. I think I'm going to try that in my next vector sig.

The text. Don't get rid of it! I like it. It goes really well. Actually, it goes so well that I didn't even notice it t first. I was all like "...Get rid of the text? What text re you talking about, Loki... Ohh!". But seriously... keep it. It looks good.

Maybe you should add a border to this banner? I think that would look nice, but possibly not.

So, Loki. I'm going to rate this banner 9.4/10. Like I said, not your best work, but still amazing. (I always use the "not your best work" line, don't I? ) XD;


Hm. Another long post. Tell me if these are getting annoying.

Motsuko TRYING TO GET RID OF THAT DAMN "LIVE"!
 
Loki: I think the focal point was in the right place, cause I looked to his head, but I think its 50 - 50 between his face and chest. I dont know where else you could of put the text, because every other place would make it look crowded. But I like that banner.

I used Shiranui Roxas Smudge Tutorial for this. Though I dont think it looks like it.
[PokeCommunity.com] The Graphics Rating Thread [READ THE FIRST POST. D:<]
 
@ Shiranui: *gasp* such a long rate! + rep for you, my friend.

Anyways, your...WIP. What is a WIP? Not exactly sure. I'll rate yours as soon as I find out what a WIP is, 'cause if this is suppose to be a regular signture, (no offence) but I'd rate it a 0.2/10. It's so plain.

BUT! That's why I'm asking what a WIP is, so you atleast have a channce to prove that this has all the qualities a WIP needs.

Anyways, get back to me soon. I want to rate it. XD
Eheh, I like to rate stuff >.>

Anyway, WIP stands for work-in-progress. That banner is faaaar from done xD I also doubt that I'd ever get to finish it. But, whatever. I can keep dreaming -shot'd-

@ Loki: Oh no! Don't go on rating spree! Mine and Shiranui's rates look like SPAM compared to these massive "sprees" you get going every now and then. XD;;
You have no idea how much this made me laugh xD

And I totally agree -shot'd-
 
Ok, like I said, once I figured out what a WIP was, I'd rate Shiranui's banner. So... it turns out a WIP is a Work In Progress. T_T I'm an idiot.
Haha, anyways;

@ Shiranui: Ok, now that I see that it's a work in progress, I can rate it without being to harsh ^^;

I like how the background isn't white. It's a light color, but not white. I also think you should move the flower (?) down a little bit more, seeing as there's a random dot of something you can't see. It's kind of distracting. Here's a screenshot (sorry, best I could do ising MS Paint) XD;

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Anyways, other than that, it looks good so far. It;s very plain, so I can't rate it much yet, but I'm interested to see how this turns out. For what it is now, I'll rate it a 7.0/10. (sorry, but there's not much to rate).


@ Cheesepeow: This is a pretty nice banner! I like the colors, and the focal point is obvious. Actually, on closer inspection of the text, this is an amazing banner! It's good that you mde the text not too, too distracting for the viewer, but still able to spark some curiousity into what it says. By the way, isn't this the same render as the one used in the tutorial? Or maybe not. Think I'm getting the tutorials mixed up XD;;
Anyways, keep it up! 7.9/10.
 
Oh. lawls. I was wondering whether anyone would see the dot xD Yeah, the canvas size was originally a bit bigger. But I decided to shrink it (since I got too lazy to fill up the rest of the space), and poof, the dot appeared. I'll probably forget to get rid of it right until the end. And I doubt that anyone would ever get to see the finished product >.>

Thanks for the re-rate, though ^^

And I might as well rate, since I'm here.

CheesePeow: It's a smudge banner. No two smudge banners are ever meant to look alike. Unless, of course, you use one of them as a displacement filter for the other, but that doesn't count >.> Anyway, it's definitely an interesting outcome, seeing as the render you used feels nothing like the stock I used o.o I thought that with a render like that there would only be minimal smudging space, and smudging wouldn't be the best option, but I was sort of wrong o.o I see some slight hints of an effect C4D; in the area around his arm, there is this 'shattered glass' thing I can see, which looks pretty cool.

It might've looked better if the whole arm was completely smudged, instead of the half-smudgy, foggy feel it has at the moment. Anywho, the focal seems to be clearly defined, and the text is alright. Though it does take away some of the focus from Edward's face. The edges of the render seems to be too sharp towards the right side (in his hair), and it feels rough. And the whole banner is a bit glowy o.o -totally has nothing againts glowy banners-
 
I took advice. Lucky me xP

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@reply to shirauni - but i like c4ds XD. ive been so addicted to them lately. this banner did start as a smudge banner but then there was no depth in the smudging so i fire c4ds at it.

@michii - i like the colors better than the last time. but its too blurry and you didnt take my advice about those white blocks in the left.

ok i fixed this up a little.

[PokeCommunity.com] The Graphics Rating Thread [READ THE FIRST POST. D:<]


[PokeCommunity.com] The Graphics Rating Thread [READ THE FIRST POST. D:<]


i used there logo for text if you dont like it ill give up on text.
 
K guys. Five pages worth on word. xD

Aaaaaalright, here we go! |D

I'm going to start on the last page, with YunaDances' first post.

Vaan Banner: The first think that stuck out to me on this banner was the difference in depth. See, the problem is that Vaan is drawn in a 3D style, while your background is very, very 2D. With a render like Vaan in tow, you'll want something with a little more depth than splatter brushes, that way it won't look so… awkward, I suppose. xD The blue in the back is too blue compared to the majority shade of blue on Vaan, I think if you wanted to use blue in the background, you should've picked a more cyan-like color. In this banner, it would've been better to go with a more…. c4d oriented style. It's pretty hard to pull off this particular Vaan render without lots and lots of practice, IMO, which is the very reason why I have never tried anything more than a stock manipulation with it. xD; The border is completely unsuited, it just seems to… come out of nowhere. Maybe this banner would've just looked better without a border in general. xD;

Balthier Banner: First one > Second one. Actually, I think somewhere in the middle would be better. The second one is over contrasted, while the first one doesn't have any contrast at all, which isn't horrible, but the banner could definitely use some. I do like this banner, even though I absolutely despise vertical canvas', the brushes, text, and colors are all really well executed, and everything looks good. I would not suggest a border for this banner. xD; I think it looks better without. Again, like with Perfectionist's Assassin X banner, his skin is really yellow in the second one, and that really bothers me, thus why I chose the first one. ^^; I mean, yeah, obviously their skin is going to be yellow since it's pretty much that color to begin with, but you want to pay attention to not going past the limit where it looks like they got the yellow version of gangrene. xD; So yeah, there's really not much more to say other than it's way better than the Vaan tag, and as Motsuko said, you've gained a level~! I actually think you could add some light textures at the bottom if you really wanted- to give it that extra bang.

Cheesepeow: I won't be rating your Illya Diversity banner for reasons you already know.

FMA: Yellow skin. D: The problem is bigger here, because his hair is also yellow, so it looks like you slapped a yellow color overlay on it: Blargh. xD; And then there are those soft pinkish colors on the left, and I really think that throws the flow of the banner off. The text is good, you're good at adding text and placement, and it's not a bad banner overall, but some of the color effects really need some help; And I'm not noticing any obviously smudging, honestly. xD; I think this banner might need a little more burning on the edges to bring the focal back to Ed's face, because my eyes are wandering. Oh, and the text could go down in opacity a bit as well. Just a bit, so it's not quite so obvious in the darker parts of the banner.

Perfectionist:

Assassin Cross Banner: Well… The style and colors make me sad. xD; Assassin Cross being my specialty class in Ragnarok Online, the first thing I realize is how the colors chosen totally do not suit the render. xD; It's too bright, and doesn't really reflect- Okay well that's just because I know about the render in depth, so I'll kill that part. That's just me being nitpicky, so onto the important part.

Smudge? I'm neglecting to see smudge. Did you just smudge the background or something? Because if you'd smudge the assassin's scarf then it would've been much much better in terms of blending. Next. C4D? I'm neglecting to see a c4d. ….Like, anywhere. xD; I mean, the composition of the banner is good, and the effects are as well, it's just not put together in a way that it flows and looks natural. btw, the renders skin is like, really yellow. That's never ever a good thing. xD; Might want to keep an eye out for that in the future. Honestly, I completely disagree with Motsuko in this case, as contrast would merely make the render's skin even yellow-er, and sharpening it would make the scarf look ever more pasted on. I suggest using some selective coloring to get rid of the yellow on his face, and lowering the brightness, maybe burning the edges to give it the proper Assassin look that would actually match the render.

Pink Banner: Would you be offended if I told you: Yes, it's obvious you made it in five minutes? Well, that's kind of an overstatement, it just doesn't look like you spent much time on it. The colors are very two-tone monotonous, and the brush work looks really fast and sloppy. Like Motsuki said, you should probably sharpen the film strip brushes. They were otherwise pulled off really well- I'm jealous, because film strip borders absolutely hate me. xD;; Your render is what bothers me the most about this banner though. The toe, like Motsuko said, is cut off, and not only that, but her arm just looks really weird. :/ Kind of like someone cut it off and re-pasted it on without realizing what shading is. It's the angle, I know, but in the banner, it's just really, "wtf." xD; Also, something is wrong with her hair. The black pixelly stuff and rough cut = not okay. Pretty much, if you hadn't used that render, the banner would look awesome, but since you did, it just doesn't. ^^;;; Also, if you add filmstrip brushes, I implore you not to add another border, because that's kind of like overkill. xD;

DarkChild:

Sakuya Banner: Sometimes I wonder if it's a bad thing that I know the names of practically ever render. xD;; *SHOT'd* Anyway. Again, I don't agree with someone else's rating, and in this case, Latios is our excellent winner. I think the background is excellent in terms of matching with the render, even though it's not quite complimenting the irritating bubbly attitude that Sakuya has, it's quite fitting with your other effects. The blending… is okay. The different qualities of the render are somewhat weird, what with her pigtails being all blurred and her face oversharpened. The opacity on the text needs to go down swingin' *SHOT'D* So yeah. It's just too 'BANG-IN-YOUR-FACE' right now. The border is okay, though probably not the best. I do agree with Latios that the text could move more into the empty space though.

Latios:

Anya Banner lol: Well, the first thing that stood out to me in this banner was- OMG WHAT HAPPENED TO HER FACE? D: Yes, splatters on her face = not okay. I like the effects you used, but the gradient overlay needs to go down in opacity, because the purple-blue on the right just doesn't look right at all. Your focal is good, though the white orb-y thing on her shoulder is a bit distracting, and she kind of fades into the background with your gradient overlay. The lack of border is good. I approve. The circle-y things are good too. I approve. The number one thing that makes me hate this banner though are those splatters on her face. I suggest never ever put anything on your focal other than color adjustments, unless you really know what you're doing, and that wisdom of making an altered focal doesn't really strike me in this banner.

Poke'd: Okay um. I'll just rate three, if you don't mind. xD; I don't want to spend all day on this. *shot'd*

Bugs Life: No good. D: The colors don't work out, and I've always hated the green/purple combo. In vector banners, you really gotta know how to work your opacity levels, and you didn't do that in this banner, which is… no good. D: The text looks left aligned, even though it's on the right side of the banner. That's not good either. xD You'll want to have it more centered, maybe pick a different font for 'life' and space it out so it's more balanced. You'll also want some of the colors in your render in your banner, that's pretty important in vector banners, but you definitely don't want to end up using just colors from your render, otherwise, it becomes a 'Find waldo Render' game. Just pick one color, in this case, purple most likely, and compliment it with a color that's more neutral. Like, not green. xD; The vector brush on the upper left is bugging me.  Pun not intended. X_x It's covering her eye, and it's very…. 'wtf'. xD; I'd suggest moving it under the render, that'd probably help your focal.

Ichigo Banner: Hmm… first thing I see isn't how empty it is, it's those weird random… orange blobs on his sword. The orange at the bottom would've been enough, considering he's already blended elsewhere. Right now, it just looks like you accidentally erased part of his sword and arm and was like, "Oops. Oh well." *shot'd* I think you could've added some c4d's to add to the 3d-ish look of his sword, and also to just fill up that huge empty… space on the lower left. D: The Ichigo text either needs to go, or get a new font with lowered opacity. xD; It doesn't look good at all the way it is now. And you should try a different smudge setting, because the smudge you used on his hair and shoulder are… kind of messy. xD; More color effects as well, my friend. Color adjustment layers are your friend, and I'm not seeing much use of them. xD;

Hazuki:

Suzaku&Lelouch: Lighting? Check. Effects? Check. Text? Kind of check. Blending? No need. Color Effects? Check. Brightness? Not check. xD The banner is wayyy too bright, and I understand that it gives it that sort of shiny-shoujo type feel, but it's like, "WOAH PEOPLE!" Because their clothes and colors are so much darker than the background. Mind you, this doesn't mean that you need to brighten the renders. They're already blinding. xD You need to darken the background. The text, eh. It's hard to find, but once you find waldo, it looks alright. The patterns in the back are cute, and the colors you chose are good too. I especially like those shiny things that look like light textures. It's certainly not my favorite, because I just… don't like the sort of white-overlay quality the brightness of the banner gives it. xD;

Evilcheese:

Augh, I know this. His name is.. it's… bug guy… SHINO ABURAME!

Shino Banner: I'll tell you now.

This is my number one favorite banner from you. Minus the text placement. <_< still workin' on that text there evilcheese. ;< I absolutely love the sort of under-watery look to it, the smudging or whatever it is on his jacket, and the bubbly things on the left. It's a bit dark and empty on the right, and I suggest adding some of your beloved c4d's there, but not a render c4d, more like… just an effect one. The text is okay, but you should put it closer to the actual render. Right now it just seems kind of… floating in the middle of nowhere. The colors are great, and though the render seems a tad over sharpened, the lighting is great, and you've alleviated a lot of the problems you usually have in this banner. I would totally use this myself, if I was still a Naruto fan. ;D because the shino-kiba-hinata team rocked my socks.

MCR: Color > B&W. I don't know, it's pretty empty on the right, and the black goes vertically like | rather than the direction of the light, which is /. The text is good, but if you're going to have it, I suggest moving it closer to the render, and pulling up the opacity so that it doesn't turn into a Find Waldo game. Otherwise, this banner isn't too bad either, but I suggest trying a few new styles. You're style is getting very repetitive and monotonous, and I've never seen a brighter banner from you. xD; Lack of border is good in this tag, as is the lighting. It's good overall, but I just don't really like the effects or the render, in terms of personal opinion.

Clade.:

That-elf-banner: It looks good, but it's very… empty. The colors are monotonous to me, and I don't really like how she fades out on the left. It looks more like a stock manipulation to me, than an actual banner. xD; Not a fan of the text angle or deco's either, it's rather awkward. I like the font you used for 'WINGS', I hate the font you used for "Beautiful', so that kind of evens out a bit, but if you're going to set the two words with the same decorations, you might want to have them closer so the decorations don't seem so forced, as though it's trying to tie the words together. xD; I don't like that border at all, and really that's all I can really say, since it's pretty bland. :/

Kagami: HARUHI?!- AUGH!!! *stabbed*
*death*
*can't rate your banner- SHOT'd*

Disregarding Haruhi for the time being, embossed text isn't really the best. I used to love it, and now I realized why people always told me to get rid of it. xD It doesn't look all that great. The orange and blue thing in the back is cool, but the second guitar is majorly out of place, and I would highly suggest removing it. The background is a big monotonous in color, and the bright parts are really distracting. The canvas is way way way too big for the render, so I'd suggest maybe… cutting it in half in terms of height, and cutting off a third of it in terms of width. X_x; yeah, that's how big it is. Not sure I'm a big fan of those filters you used on the left either, or that weird emboss/stroke on Haruhi herself. It's just… overly filtered. xD The border is good though. Definitely not something I like all too much though.

Michii:

Comparing the two versions, the original and edits, I'll list some pro's and cons.

Original:
+ Colors, sharpness, and brightness. The red lighting on the main flower is awesome. Out of all four versions, I like the very very first one the best.
- In-Your-Face Scanlines, white blocks that need to go down in opacity. I wouldn't suggest a clipping mask like evilcheese, because that defeats the purpose of adding those blocks in the first place.

Edited Version:
+ Scanlines, thank god they're down. xD I like the second version though because they're sharper, and it's not as blurry as before. The lighting is still rockin' my socks.
- Major major minus here: Color. I terribly hate the white parts that suddenly turned yellow. xD; I mean, it looks good on the blocks, but definitely not on the text or flowers. Blurriness. Argh, that sudden blurry quality really bothers me. xD;; It's like it went from High Quality scan to Low Quailty scan, and High Quality is always better.

Borderless > Bordered

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If I missed you, please tell me. |D

And I'm here to re-pump my Badou banner, because I'd love to know anything you have to say. I'm going to keep working on it until I decide I've used my sexy Livonse banner for a good amount of time. xD *SHOT'd*

Motsuko: Yeah, I'm planning on adding a border once I finish the contents. xD I always add the border last. "I'm going to do a border kind of like the one on my Livonse banner, but I'm going to put an orange -> blue gradient overlay on it"- is what I'm planning.

Motsuko & Shiranui: Dot? o_o I see no dot? D: *SHOT'd* That would probably be the reason why I didn't notice it. :B


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edit: SHOOT! I gotta take my own advice. I just realized how ugly-yellow Badou's hand is. xD;;
 
@loki - wow the day i make a post like that is the day i use proper grammer XD. your banner has pretty colos <3. the effects are a little overboard espescially on a small canvas. the splatter texture is kinda weird as well.
 
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