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"The the Monster is Loose" - A Golden Sun RP

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Hey, I was gonna say I wouldn't be here on weekdays, but I'm just saying that I recently moved (today!) and I'll probably have access to the comp during afternoons.
 
Name- Saku Flarefang/ Kyo Devilfang(dark side)
Age- 18
Gender- Male
Appearence- Saku has short blazing crimson hair that stands up while his bangs separates from the mid of his head down towards both eyes. His eyes are a clear red color. Around his neck is a large dark blue cape that has an extended neck guard which slightly covers his bottom half of his face below the nose as the rest of the cape falls behind him but most of the time covering his body. On both sides of his waist, near each hands, are one of the twin blades of fire that is tied to his belt. He wears a pair of brown pants with brown boots. On both hands are brown gauntlets infused with fire psynergies as well. His body is covered in a light red hued armor and light clothing. The clothing consists of a loose brown long sleeved-shirt with a loose red shirt over it. (Kyo takes the appearance of Saku but his eyes are a bit more slanted and darker red than Saku's)

Personality- Though tightly shrouded in mysteries, Saku is not what you would think. He is extremely caring and kind. He is always lending a helping hand to others and is easy to make friends with if you talk to him though he usually takes the initiative. Saku does have another side of him but Kyo is always suppressed and usually boasts and critize Saku's decisions. Kyo is harsh and selfish. He cares less about others and only thinks of what will benefit him.

Class- Skilled Swordsman- Twin Blade Wielder-wields two twin blades

Weapons/Gear- Twin Blades infused with Fire psynergies, red colored light armor, battle boots, brown gauntlets
Element- Fire
History- When he was young, Saku was found wandering outside of the village of Vale with no memory of anything accept only his name by the village healer and was taken in. Though his appearance was entirely different from all the others around him, the people of Vale showed him kindness and care of others. As he grew up, he came to love the town he had been accepted to. He trained with many of his age and became an Adept with great potential in using the fire psynergies. As he grew older, he defended the village from threats and contributed greatly to it's advancement in technology.
Other- He likes drinking tea and resting beneath trees...

Will finish this later... XD
 
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i am calm, i was just putting empamize, how do spell it??? (checks harry potter book) (nvm, thatll take to long) well, you know what i mean. anyways, yes i am grounded, but my mom is pretty leiant(ergh another word i cant spell) and i can always post it at school, or in the morning when my parents arent home. lol
 
lol ok, and btw the words are : Emphasize and Lineant. well jot 100% sure on second word.. but i nkow the 1st >.<

Oh and think we shoudl start it now, i mean, we don't need to nkow about his 'Other' and his 'History' to do the first few posts, right? I mean, our OOC Knowledge shouldn't affect the what we think of him.. or at least THAT quickly >.<

EDIT: Also, when we start off, do we start off at where are character lives, adn what we do from there on and stuff??
 
OOC: i guess we can start. and kyle, doent critisize other people(mainly me) about small posts, we're not all as blessed with the creative mind power you are.

IC: I had finally reached my desination after 3 days of travelling, Vale. I had been invited by the mayor of Vale to attend a sort of meeting with other of Weyard's most talented young Adepts. I walked through the gates into Vale, and headed directly to the mayors office in the town hall. "Ah, Mr.Pine, we've been expecting you. Your the first to arrive." the mayor told me. He led me down into the basement of the town hall. "Wait here, we'll start the meeting as soon as the others get here." I sat down and waited.

OOC 2: Im treating Vale as the central town in Weyard, like the capital, and the mayor is like, the president of weyard or something to that affect.
 
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OOC: Me? Creative, umm ok... but remember, the ruels do state that we have to post at least 4 lines. Although that is a small minimum, so it shouldn't be too hard to pull that off ;P

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IC: I yanwed and walked around Contigo, lookign for something to do. I heard about my ancestor, Ivan, but i wish i could meet him ni real life. In the legends, they say he was a great wind mage. I wish i could become as strong as him. I sighed and continued to walk down the streets. Contigo was like how it was way abck then, and i liked that. The ground may have been sandy or dusty, but i just liked the looks of the town. I have never left it, except for the occasional trip to the Jupiter Lighthouse. So far, everytime i have gone there, my powers have been increased. I arrived on the outskirts of the town and started my usual training. I crossed both my arms that held a tense look. I released them and shoved both ym ahdns in front of me, with the palms stright open and arms fully stretched, and a decently sized tornado had formed. The marks it elft on the trees nearby was minimal, i didn't know why, but the tornados i summoned never dealt much damage towards the trees. It usually did towards humans or other living creatures though. After i wasted off all of my psynergy, i walked back to town. On my way to my house, Mr. Itayai ran up to me, and told em that his boss, the elder, wanted to speak to me. I sighed again, as this day wasn't to eventful, adn i didn't want to eb bothered by any elder. When iw alked in, eh told me to leave, but in a sense of adventure. He told me about the Phoenix, but i didn't really care either. The elder said i needed to travel to Vale, which was a bit norht to contigo, although i did need to take a ship ride over the sea to get there. Nowadays, Contigo was next to the lighthouse, adn were on the shore, as well as Vale. Unfortuntely, BVale was completely surrounded by mountains. Landing the ship may have been a problem, but i am a Jupiter adept after all.
 
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OOC: Um, I was jut wondering if I could switch my status to Mage because at the time of signing up, I didn't know what is was. But if not, then its ok. :)


IC: Midnight awoke from her nap at the sound of a terrible scream. She jumped up and ran to help. By the time she arrived, there was no commotion for the exception of a poster hanging on a tree. She picked it up and read it, it was a letter about this giant bird attacking all of man-kind, but she knew esactly what is was. The last of her ancestor, Jenna, told this story and it got passed down from generations to her. Of course she never thought it would come back, but she was wrong. Midnight ran home and packed some personal items into a bag. She then began to get ready. About an hour passed when she finally locked up her cave and began on her journey. As time went by, she began thinking who she might met on such a journey, but nothing came to her. Of course she didn't care anyways, she just thought she would be rejected just as she was her whole life. The sun began to set, and she set up camp a few miles away from her home. There she built a fire, ate her dinner, and set up her bed. She began reading and fell asleep to the dark, clear sky, dreaming she would have a friend.
 
OOC: ok, thank you soo much! :)
 
OOC:You guys started without me, YOUR SO MEAN!

IC:Jason was jumping from tree to tree when he noticed a poster on a tree. He then grabbed one of his arrows that were tied to a rope, aimed at the tree, and let go. He then took out a smaller rope and used it to swing to the tree. Once he got to the tree, he saw that the poster read *Beware, town ahead has been destroyed by Phoenix, go no further encase of the Phoenix's return.* "Perfect, if the Phoenix does come back to this town, then i'll get the chance to defeat it." Jason then read the poster again to see how far away the town was. *two miles* "Wow, thats not too far." Jason then started to head off in the direction that the poster pointed. "Phoenix, here I come." Said Jason. After Jason had walked two miles, he began to see a town that seemed to be burned and destroyed. And as he walked into the town he noticed that the phoenix wasn't a fool. I can't defeat this monster on my own, i'll need some others to help me even though I would love to defeat it myself, I need help. Jason thought. "OK I think that i'll put up a camp right her." Said Jason while pointing at a broken down store. As he set up his things, he started to hear a wineing sound. He got up and looked outside the store with his arrow ready. As he looked outside, he noticed that it was a wolf that was a about ten kilometers away. The wolf seemed to be injured so Jason walked up to it but with caution. "Hey, you OK buddie?" Whispered Jason. He then picked the wolf up and headed back to the store. Once he got there he set the wolf down and began to doctor it. After a good hour the wolf was back to normal. Then as Jason shoved it back to the woods, the wolf kept coming back to him. "Hey, buddie, i'm sorry but you can't come with me." The wolf moaned. Jason knew what he had to do and pulled out his bow and arrow and aimed at the wolf, knowing that it would move away from the shot. Jason let go of the arrow and it shot toward the wolf. The wolf gracefully dodged it in the blink of an eye. "Wow, your pretty good." Jason thought for a minute or two and finally said. "OK, you can come with me...but, if you come with me, you have to do as I tell you, OK?" The wolf seemed to understand and nodded it's head up and down. "Hey, I think you need a name......How about......ok, you have light blue fur, and green eyes......Blizzard. OK, how about Blizzard, is that good with you?" The Wolf seemed to like it alot and nodded it's head once more. "OK Blizzard, lets get some rest." Jason and Blizzard then laid down and began to sleep.
 
((OOC: Aaah! You started without me! O_o))

IC:
"Thanks for helping out, Riyo"
The young boy nodded with a slight smile in his face. That was his way of saying 'you are welcome' or 'no problem'. He had been helping out villagers in Imil, and had just finished carrying a basket of bread around for a young girl, who was covered in thick clothing. Ever since the Phoenix had come, the temperatures had dropped down, and more blizzards had blown over the village. But Riyo did not mind. He actually liked the cold. He carefully dropped the package onto the ground, and walked away without saying a word, towards the frozen waterfall within the village. The young girl smiled, and walked towards a nearby house with the basket in her arms.

Sitting down at the edge of the once flowing water. Riyo began to throw rocks at the water, as if trying to make it skip. The rock just landed on the frozen river, making a slight crack, then sliding across to the other side. A sudden, cold gust of wind blew from behind him, which tossed his braided hair in front of him, and the spiky top of his hair all over his face. The wind was somehow calm, yet held a hint of danger within it. He knew that a blizzard would be coming. He swiftly lifted his lilac scarf, which he had tied around his waist, and wrapped it around his neck. He lifted a small part of the cloth to cover his mouth, then walked to the center of the village, where the elder had placed a large bell to warn everyone of the coming of a blizzard. Once he had arrived, Riyo placed his palms onto the side of the bell, and pushed. The bell creaked. It seemed that the hinge connecting the bell to a wooden frame had been frozen. Riyo stood there, staring at the frozen hinge, as if thinking of a way to defrost it.

The wind started to blow even stronger, and more sharply, as if it was able to cut through flesh. Riyo then quickly, yet calmly, ran to a nearby house. The shocked residents of the building stared at Riyo as he picked up a pot, placed it into the fireplace, over the flame. As soon as the water was boiling, he dashed off outside, towards the bell. Standing in front of the bell, with a steaming, lidless hot pot of water, he closed his eyes, and placed his palm to the side of the pot. The water, as a small stream, circled around Riyo, then poured onto the hinge. The bell creaked again. Steam poured out everywhere. As the vapour disappeared, Riyo looked at the hinge. All that was left was a thin layer of ice. Riyo pushed on the bell once more. The ice cracked off, and the bell rang. Although most 'normal' people would start panicing, everyone stayed calm; the villagers had gotten used to it.

Riyo walked away, back to the waterfall. He stood on the frozen water, staring directly at it. He held out his left hand to the side, palm straight out. A small stream of water, seemingly coming out of nowhere, circled his arm. Slowly, it began to grow in size, becoming thicker and larger. Suddenly, Riyo closed his left hand into a fist and threw it at the wall of ice that was once the waterfall. The strong stream of water followed the movement of his arm. The water broke through the wall of ice, revealing a hiden cave. The water around his arm dispersed into vapour as he crawled into the cave, which was big enough to fit 3 people. Once inside, he closed off the hole with a wave of water, which at his command, turned into ice.
 
I was walking around town, going to my usual candy shop, I had helped the owner a few years back so he didnt count me in the 'no shirt, no shoes' thing, as long as I didnt make a mess. This was because I walked around barefoot, having never worn shoes since I was little. I liked to keep in touch with the ground, it made me feel...safe. "Hey, Haru! glad to see ya! We just got in a shipment of a new candy!" Said Mr. Makeyano, the owner, pulling out a large jar. "I wanted you to have the first piece" He said. "Thanks...." I muttered "What kind of candy is it?" He looked inside, pulling out what appeared to be a spotted red jawbreaker the size of a tennis ball. "They've got spark rocks inside and around the outside, then theyve got bubble gum at the center, and they change your mouth all kinds of colors! why, back in my day, jawbreakers were the size of BOWLING BALLS! but i guess this will do just fine for ya" He said, handing out the candy. "Thanks" I said simply, taking it and putting it in my pocket. Ill have five licorice whips, a bag of rock candy, and a coke" I said, pulling out my wallet and getting out the money, this was my usual order, so I always knew how much i owed him. "Thatll be-" "two dollars even" I said, finishing his sentance and putting the bills on the counter. "Thanks haru, come back next monday, eh? were getting a shipment of candy yo-yo's!" He said, waving goodbye.

((you started without me!!! T-T))
 
Uzumaki_Naruto said:
Name- Saku Flarefang/ Kyo Devilfang(dark side)
Age- 18
Gender- Male
Appearence- Saku has short blazing crimson hair that stands up while his bangs separates from the mid of his head down towards both eyes. His eyes are a clear red color. Around his neck is a large dark blue cape that has an extended neck guard which slightly covers his bottom half of his face below the nose as the rest of the cape falls behind him but most of the time covering his body. On both sides of his waist, near each hands, are one of the twin blades of fire that is tied to his belt. He wears a pair of brown pants with brown boots. On both hands are brown gauntlets infused with fire psynergies as well. His body is covered in a light red hued armor and light clothing. The clothing consists of a loose brown long sleeved-shirt with a loose red shirt over it. (Kyo takes the appearance of Saku but his eyes are a bit more slanted and darker red than Saku's)

Personality- Though tightly shrouded in mysteries, Saku is not what you would think. He is extremely caring and kind. He is always lending a helping hand to others and is easy to make friends with if you talk to him though he usually takes the initiative. Saku does have another side of him but Kyo is always suppressed and usually boasts and critize Saku's decisions. Kyo is harsh and selfish. He cares less about others and only thinks of what will benefit him.

Class- Skilled Swordsman- Twin Blade Wielder-wields two twin blades

Weapons/Gear- Twin Blades infused with Fire psynergies, red colored light armor, battle boots, brown gauntlets
Element- Fire
History- When he was young, Saku was found wandering outside of the village of Vale with no memory of anything accept only his name by the village healer and was taken in. Though his appearance was entirely different from all the others around him, the people of Vale showed him kindness and care of others. As he grew up, he came to love the town he had been accepted to. He trained with many of his age and became an Adept with great potential in using the fire psynergies. As he grew older, he defended the village from threats and contributed greatly to it's advancement in technology.
Other- He likes drinking tea and resting beneath trees...

Will finish this later... XD
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Sorry Sorry. My net connection is down and I am doing this from my school... Anyway... I am now finished with my sign-up. *points above* I'll post ASAP... you guys can continue but just don't span like... 3 pages yet... ><
 
OOC: Aight

IC: I continued my long journey to Vale. (( I think we should make a map, so everyone knows where places are n' stuff >.>)) I stepped aboard the small sail boat adn ehaded off towards Vale. As i remembered that there were still monsters at sea, i saw a couple of Sea Urchins pop up and attack me. "Stupid weak guys.." I muttered under my breath. I didn't even bother taking out my staff. I stuck both ym palsm out towards the Urchins and casted a tornado. As always, it seemed to have a "Bio" part to it, as it never did damage to things that weren't alive, unelss i really tried to; but it would normally do damage to things that were alive. The three Urchins flew into the sea. The boat continued one sice no one was injured. The journey across the Strait ((Kinda like a river, but basically it is ALOT larger, and just separates 2 pieces of land, for an example look at the Bearing Stait or w/e its called :P)) was taking way too long, so i bent down to the backside of the ship and created an underwater gust, which pushed the boat along the water much afster than ow it was before. Not much longer, we reached the rocky 'Shore' oh Angara and i ahd to climb up the mountains to get to the town. I jumped up and created a gust comign from my ahnds to push me upwards and i reached higher up noto the mountain. At a certin point, the air started to thin out, and it was egttign way too hard to breathe. I had to take the chance that no one else was enarby, and i gathered all the air around me and made sure it stayed around me and my head so i could breathe normally. I reached the peak, and the air supply was runnign low, luckily, there is always lots of air around, so i just gathered more. I slid down the jagged pass down the mountain. I gained a few cuts and bruises, but it wasn't anything bad. It was nightfall by the time i was half way down the mountain. I setup camp and fell asleep.
 
OOC:Killer-swift, can you not post with gray, it is kinda hard to read. Or at lest make it bold.
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IC:As Jason woke up from his sleep he began to make some food with the supplies that he brought. "I wonder if we will find the phoenix. Or maby even find some other people to help us." Jason said. Then, Jason heard a noise that seemed to be a screaming noice from a bird. Jason looked toward the sky and after a minute or two he saw something flash toward the north. "Hey Blizzard, come on, we have to hurry and go!" Blizzard jumped to it's feet and began to run along side Jason. As Jason and Blizzard ran northward, Jason began to see a small town that wasn't hit by the phoenix. "Hey, this must be were the phoenix might strike next." As Jason walked into the town, he saw very nice people walking and saw some kids playing. "What a nice town." Said Jason. Then, suddenly there was a scream that this time came from a lady and Jason headed toward the noise with his bows and arrows ready.
 
Midnight rolled over and peeked her eyes open, jumping at a cute puppy looking straight at her right in front of her face. She wasn't afraid of it, it kind of just surprised her. It was a golden retriever with beautiful golden hair. It shined as the sun hit it as it was rising. The puppy was just sitting there wagging its tail, so Midnight thought it wasn't harmful. (lol) She picked it up and explored it. It was a girl, and it began licking her. Midnight thought that this was her very first friend and that she would take great care of her and never lose her. She began thinking of a name for her, but thought that if she ate breakfast first, it would give her some energy. So Midnight ate a peice of bread that she brought along and gave a peice to her new puppy. And as she was eating, she thought of a name. "How would you like to be called Hensley my adorable little friend!?," she asked the puppy, and she wagged her tail, looking like she agreed. "Great.." Midnight said scratching Hensley's tummy. "We are going to be going on a great adventure and I'm so glad you can come along with me! We are going to have a great time!" She said as she began to pack up camp. Midnight began walking on the road, and noticed that Hensley was tired. So she picked her up and began singing a tune that she once learned from her mother singing to her, when she was first born. Midnight remembered the whole song cause she never wanted to forget it. As a few hours went by, she finally saw a town ahead. She sighed in relief that maybe she could find some friends, or find someone to come along the journey with her.

But as she began to become calm, she heard a scream. Midnight began running and came upon just some children playing and many people going about their business. But she stumbled about this one particular boy, that she seemed was very adorable. He looked to about 12 or 13, and he was very short. He had short, brownish-black hair, dark brown eyes, and a light brown skin tone to him. Midnight seemed to question his appearance, but to her, he looked like he knew where he stood. She wanted him to see her, so possibly they could be friends. But as she looked a little closer, she noticed some bow & arrows. Now she hasn't seen many people just walking around with these type of things, so she thought that he was maybe questing for the same thing she was. Just as Midnight was, Hensley was very curious about this animal that appeared to be a wolf. Hensley jumped out of Midnights hands and ran over to him, and started sniffing. "No Hensley! Come back!" She yelled to Hensley, but she didn't listen. So Midnight ran over to her, and picked her up, and turned to the boy she was curious about. "...Uh, I-I'm soo sorry about that..." Midnight said with a smile.
 
The blizzard became stronger, as Riyo heard the strong wind lashing against the trees outside, and piles of snow pouring onto the ice wall that sealed the cave away from the 'outside world'. Riyo sighed, and sat down, cross legged, next to a pile of wood which lay in the middle of the cave. Although he did like the cold, he never liked blizzards. He used this cave as his 'blizzard retreat', as he calls it. He turned himself to face the pile of wooden sticks, and stuck his had inside it. After shuffling his hand around, he clenched his hand around a stone, and pulled his arm out. He looked at the rock carefully. It was like a shiny black ball, which was squished at two opposite sides. He placed it to the side, and reached for the handle of his blade, which was slung over his shoulder, with his left hand. He grasped it tightly, and unsheathed the blade swiftly, yet delicately. Then, he scratched the side of the rock with his blade, making small sparks spray over the wood. Eventually, the wood was on fire, and Riyo sheathed his blade, and hid the stone, buried it under snow, somewhere away from the flame.

Hours later, the blizzard still had not stopped. The wood and the flame inside had disappeared, and all that was a pile of white ash, that sat in the center of the cave. Riyo sat at the end of the cave, opposite the ice-covered opening. He sat there, staring through the translucent wall, waiting for the blizzard to vanish.
 
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