And What prize Shota and Alain paid ?
Shota just spend some time Off-screen and he suddenly good enough to beat all Ash's pokemon and get a free Keystone
Off Screen is just excuse to give Characters free thing they doesn't deserve! You don't even know what Shota does Off-screen because he does not exist off-screen , He just an Anime character.
Yes, the fact that Shōta's improvement occurs entirely off-screen with the audience rarely getting a chance to
see him training and growing stronger (just the results of it) is a significant flaw with him. I think that has more to do with the fact that the anime introduced Shōta way too late and too infrequently to really do much in that area.
That said, in every battle we've seen Shōta in up to this point he's gotten destroyed by every trainer he's come up against. Citron defeated Kimori in XY064, Satoshi was clearly beating him in their double battle in XY073, Mâche defeated him that same episode, Satoshi crushed him 0-3 in XY075, Satoshi crushed him
again in XY&Z013.
Shōta's paid his dues plenty at this point, and not having him win something would be a massive disservice to the character and the narrative being told with him.
And I just explained what price Alan had to pay in his quest. Because of Alan (or, at least, as he sees it), Manon's Harimaron is unconscious in a hospital bed. The entire point of him "becoming the strongest" was to protect the things he cares about. Alan got stronger over the course of TSME – defeating 10 Mega Evolution trainers, including the Kalos E4's Pachira – but at the cost of his
entire point to doing so. And on top of it all, he doesn't even know that he's actively helping the bad guys and throwing the Kalos region into its greatest crisis.
If you can't see how Alan is paying a price here, then you're not paying attention.
Also you talking about Alain's struggle !
Ash fought and beat Battle Frontier , He also won the Orange league and battled more E4 then Alain did in his entire life.
Yet Ash get his ass kicked by Gary and Shootie .
None of this has anything to do with
XY&Z.
While Alain fight 9 random trainer and now he's in same level as a E4 member.
And His prize is NOTHING .
TSME Act IV disagrees.
Alan isn't interested in the League, so his victory over Pachira doesn't mean anything to him so long as he still can't protect the people he cares about. Thus, the battles were ultimately rendered meaningless when Hari-san got hurt.
And at the end of the day, Alan and Lizardon will probably end up losing to Satoshi and Gekkouga anyway.
Truth is , Alain didn't struggle at all ! He Gets a Keystone for being Lysabdre's Lackey and free upgarde to E4 level because he's current writers creation.
So losing to Fleur-de-lis, losing to Zumi, being outmatched by Daigo, being unable to do anything against the Primal legendaries and having to be saved by Manon doesn't count as a struggle? If anything, Alan has struggled more in the span of four TSME specials than Satoshi has in over a hundred episodes of
XY and
XY&Z.
Good story doesn't mean Protagonist struggle while everyone get everything for free ! Or else One-PunchMan wouldn't be popular today.
I don't give a **** how popular a series is (and I've never read
One-Punch Man, so I can't speak for that), if there's no conflict then it's not a good story. Conflict is central to storytelling.
Nobody that we're talking about here is getting anything for free. Satoshi has to struggle to master the Satoshi-Gekkouga form, Shōta had to take five complete ass-beatings to finally get to a point where he can challenge Satoshi, Alan got "stronger" to absolutely no point when his friend's Pokémon got hurt. And these are the characters who are at least getting something out of the narrative. For all your complaining about what Satoshi has to go through (a whopping... six episodes is what comprises this "trial" of his and Gekkouga's?), he at least gets something and isn't just standing around on the sidelines of the action like Serena and Citron are.
From What we seen , ALAIN DOESN'T DESERVE A KEYSTONE OR MEGA CHARIZARD.
If you learn nothing else from this (you won't), then at least remember this (and you won't):
If it's not your story, then you don't get to decide what a fictional character deserves or doesn't deserve.