Hey, I didn't know you were on PC too.
Anyways, it looks like you post more here then on AWF. You've improved a lot in the last time, have to give you that. But, there are still some things that could've been done better, in my opinion. As for your last sprite, It's mout doesn't have the 3dimensional looks. It looks more like the mouth of Kermit the frog and all those other muppets. It doesn't really look like it can actually eat anything right now.
Ya true, but the head din't want to work in my way.. XD
Also, his "legs" (I forgot teh right word for them) are being fold in a weird way. Almost spastic O_O" You should know that his legs should have the same bones in it as we have, so the way he has them, are kinda impossible.
Actually I was looking at the anatomy of the King bulls of One piece.. :P We can fold our forelegs like that too.
Also, the shading isn't correct either. There is light on places where the light can't possibly reach it. And for the spikes on it's back, they look like... plates. They don't have the round shape, like lapras has.
The problem was in the 16-colour pallette. I was trying to keep in the 16 colours pallete and thus didn't make any more shades. ^^; I guess when I **** it's mouth it would probably enough colours to make them look rounder :3
Well, I think I'm critisizing you too much now. But you wanted that we said everything we saw.. But I don't have the time (and patience) to give a whole explanation about how it could be better, so I decided that I only tell you about the bigger things.
I like critics more than I like praising. ^^;