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  • I wanted to have a group of people, not nessicarily all morally evil, as the longer running protagonists although I wanted to have a Cthulu like force influencing their actions, also I wanted there to be a story for all of the important characters and settings.

    Also I was considering the comet thing, it might seem to extreme for the planet to retain it's inhabibility as the climate would change and it might knock the planet off of it's axis and so on. Also the climate change/planetoid crashing into the planet would be the immediate cause of the collapse although civilazation was already on that route then soon race by location would be hard to determine and certain parts of the planet become overrun by either "wilderness", crystalized areas growing from out the crash site, and also wasteland-like areas between cities
    Also I forgot to mention in the plot, as this idea isn't said in stone, but the cause of the disease is possibly from a foreign, planetoid about a third the size of the moon as it was the immediate cause of the collapse of society
    I had an idea of an non-cliche antagonist as well as a few individual locations but for the current plot, I was going to have individual characters, no one a main protagonist
    This is it...



    The year is 2137, 50 years after all previously established civilizations collapsed. Many people suffer from a disease, Crysol, that causes crystals to form over the afflicted and spread as the virus reaches advanced stages. As the crystals spread, the host's body is rendered significantly useless and immobile. The disease has 4 stages.

    1st stage: It has a 50/50 chance of being benign. The inflicted suffer from dizzy spells or delusions. They are capable of most movement tough the afflicted area is significantly weaker and easily strained. Crystals have begun to form in a concentrated area although contained in one area.

    2nd stage: The infected suffer symtoms of schizophrenia and tend to suffer from "visions" and hearing voices. This stage is the last stage that is possible to entirely treat the disease. Crystals maybe become more concentrated in the infected area or the infection might spread to other limbs.

    3rd stage: Although not entirely immobile, their senses may become morphed and distorted as they begin to suffer from memory loss.

    4th stage: vital organs begin to shut down. Usually 90% of the body has been rendered immobile. This stage is commonly fatal and infected will often die unless put under proper treatment.

    The disease is not contagious by contact, although if a crystal manages to breach a persons body, there is a chance they will catch the disease.

    There are those who survived the first stage of the disease and and also those who gained a immunity to the disease, known as The Outcasts, and respectively outcasts from society due to gaining abnormal abitlities consisting of being physically stronger, durable, and advanced reflexes and some gained unique abilities such as flight, advanced intelligence and various others.

    Maybe people, Outcasts and infected, have attempted to blend into noarmal society. Both have been discriminated by society, Outcasts more than infected. Outcasts became bandits , some bold enough to raid towns. Soon mercenaries to counter bandits arose, although significantly outnumbered by the thieves.
    If I told you my plot (A page or two long alone) and my general setting would you share your thoughts on it?
    I have a plot idea but I find it hard to make characters and specific setting.
    I like the style, I always wanted to draw Manga.. Might check out Hakuouki as is the 2nd time I've seen it this week
    I can only say this next summer will be very stressful indeed, and that's not what summer's supposed to be about. You've still got like, what, six more months to decide? You'll probably think of something by then, but if you don't, well, the best way would be to do just about anything. Throwing yourself into the wind might bring you to many new places, some of them good, some of them not so good. I'm sure it'll be fine.

    Yeah, I play some sports for a hobby, but that's for the enjoyment of doing it rather than thinking 'I am going to be a pro!' So yeah, it makes sense. (I also doodle - I am excellent at stick figures.)

    Now all we need to do is petition to GameFreak to make a totally awesome game that's a real RPG with all the regions in it! Then my life would be complete. Not even the anime makes the Pokemon world as great as it should be.

    Totally cool! Life takes priority after all, and I only go on PC a few times to check VMs/PMs/etc.
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