[PKMN FULL] Cornered On The Market! [T](OOC)

Orx of Twinleaf said:

Oh, r-right, I knew that!
Uh ...
Holy Blarzigord, whose tentacles are many and spaghetti, mayst thou blesseth us with the saucy touch of your helical meatballs and protecteth us from the domed Eeveelution of fire. We thank you, Blarzigord of Blargle most holy, for having sent your incarnate form Bird Jesus to guard us from the ravenous personal computer! Uh, please grace this RP with your unadulterated and probing tentacles, and we thank you for all you do for us through the forum. Thanks for spaghetti, and Omastar, and Mr. Jauntier, and pizza, and my Space Dandy action figure, and my sodium intake, and above all my grim awareness of futility in all things. At Mr. Foxrally's behest we pander, amen.

... Am I doing it right?

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Perfect

Foxrally said:

The concept of having RP 'samples' in the PC Daily is actually pretty awesome! Should give me even more of a reason to read it now :D

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Adventure said:

click clack moo adventures that type

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yeah that's great sample

Orx of Twinleaf said:

Holy Blarzigord, whose tentacles are many and spaghetti, mayst thou blesseth us with the saucy touch of your helical meatballs and protecteth us from the domed Eeveelution of fire. We thank you, Blarzigord of Blargle most holy, for having sent your incarnate form Bird Jesus to guard us from the ravenous personal computer! Uh, please grace this RP with your unadulterated and probing tentacles, and we thank you for all you do for us through the forum. Thanks for spaghetti, and Omastar, and Mr. Jauntier, and pizza, and my Space Dandy action figure, and my sodium intake, and above all my grim awareness of futility in all things. At Mr. Foxrally's behest we pander, amen.

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are you guys praizing Blarzigord in this OOC thread? Best RP ever. Definitely gonna feature you in Daily, yup. if Jauntier says yay still

I kinda like how everyone reacts to Spora like she shouldn't be there, but she's the only actual Grass type working in the flower store.

Adventure said:

Hello! I want to start an article series on PokéCommunity Daily where we feature teasers of roleplays and fiction from time to time. I thought I'd start with Cornered, as it seems very vivid and fun c: How do you guys feel about that?

Below is what I was planning on putting in the article. Think of it as a chapter of a short novel that sometimes you can find in magazines. I have edited minor parts, those are red marked until you say that the edits are either fine or should be reverted. I have also skipped some characters and parts of posts to make the story less repetitive and more coherent for a reader. Mostly this is written by Jauntier and Greiger (and a tiny part by Fennekin), and you will of course be clearly credited (if you want to be!). What do you think, are you okay with this?

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Oh, we are all flattered to have been chosen, truly. I am certainly fine with us being featured, though some of the edits were quite minor while other sections ought to have been corrected but were overlooked, but I'm sure that wasn't the final draft by far, anyway.

Are you considering when you showcase role-plays to start from the beginning? Otherwise, I think I may prefer a later excerpt presented. I could go out of my way to piece together something for you as well, out of three or four various posts, one of them definitely including my first post's introductory paragraphs to set the scene. What do you think? What word count are you aiming for, if anything?

And do you plan in the future to offer a little blurb of critique of these role-plays? You know, like, "If you want to read an exciting adventure of intrigue with a film noir twist, look no further than the Roleplay Theater's very own THE MYSTERY OF BLARZIGORD, Game Mastered by Fauxreally." I think it would be appreciated and enticing enough.

Brendan14 said:

Your use of bold is offensive. I'll post tomorrow.

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As Game Master, I demand you to shut up and post, little boy.

Fennekin210 said:

I am so sorry about this inconvenience. I'll be sure to get a post up tonight to further things along. I had to react to Varien? Could someone fill me in here about what I should react about?

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You have to respond to quite nearly everyone, lol. Read back and see. I think you know by now, mate.

Xtrashy said:

I kinda like how everyone reacts to Spora like she shouldn't be there, but she's the only actual Grass type working in the flower store.

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It's probably innate bigotry against Parasect. Her people should file a class-action lawsuit, but leave Amaryllis out of it. Yohohoho.

Well I was gonna post anyway and I posted. The restraining order I have means you can't quote my posts either. This is all evidence in my court case against you, btw.

Samuel is practically injured while Goro is there holding Amaryllis accountable, Gabriel tricked Cicaro with homoerotic undertones and learned some info about Forget-Me-Not before dipping, but greatest of these thus far is Varien "Base 40 Speed" the Kecleon, making a furious and colorful dash out the store, undoubtedly to be seen by Castiel, and anticipating the chase of his life!

Oh man, oh man, this is getting mad intense, people! Going into 6 AM and we've got so much hype out on the streets it is killing me!

Jauntier said:

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So I came back at the right time

I'm just riding the line until I'm kicked, right? I'll figure out something later for Rina.

Disclosed said:

So I came back at the right time

I'm just riding the line until I'm kicked, right? I'll figure out something later for Rina.

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I set up a contained situation for Rina where all you have to do is respond. How you embellish it is all up to you, whether or not you comply (but really, you should have her comply lol). Basically, Amaryllis is asking Rina to go and apologize to Goro for being hasty, since that made him suspicious of her.

Originally I was going to have Amaryllis join her in talking to Goro, but just recently, Spora and an injured Samuel have approached Amaryllis, and Amaryllis can't have Goro see that an employee of hers has been injured under her watch and on her premises, so I'll have her respond to that.

For your sake, I will give you the ability to control Amaryllis' departure and to approach Goro all in one kind of faux joint-post with my characters. We can discuss further details in private.

Jauntier said:

IT'S GETTING REAL, FOLKS​

Samuel is practically injured while Goro is there holding Amaryllis accountable, Gabriel tricked Cicaro with homoerotic undertones and learned some info about Forget-Me-Not before dipping, but greatest of these thus far is Varien "Base 40 Speed" the Kecleon, making a furious and colorful dash out the store, undoubtedly to be seen by Castiel, and anticipating the chase of his life!

Oh man, oh man, this is getting mad intense, people! Going into 6 AM and we've got so much hype out on the streets it is killing me!

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You should draw all these things
Especially Varien using all his might to move super fast and Castiel just being there like "what the fuck" while literally everyone else in the shop moves faster

Poor Rina. Taking everything personally, and it's only been an hour, ROFL

You're right, Brendan. I should draw that. Once I actually sit down and finish the FMN comic, I'll probably switch over to another mode of coloring, because color is the thing that's taking me the most time to finish junk.

I will be posting later tonight, everyone. Once I come home from work and have my proper nap.

Been having assignments and stuff all week, I'll be posting on thursday though!

Thank you T-Bone88 for voting in the poll, lol.

Who says you have to be in the role-play to participate OOC?

Foxrally said:

Been having assignments and stuff all week, I'll be posting on thursday though!

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Thank you for the notice in advance.

Disclosed said:

Idk if it would be more efficient to take a different route with my post or not, but what I really wanted to allow for was Amaryllis' reaction to Spora and Samuel.

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Your post is fine. Thank you. I'll get to posting late tonight or early tomorrow if I can.

Ayyy, we did it! We got through an hour! Yeaaaah, yes, woohaaa! Good job us. Now I have to update the Story Thus Far section in COTM: Essentials to retell what happened in the 5 AM hour. A lot happened, folks. Time to recount.

Also, Greiger, I want to propose something to you, but we'll discuss it in the Spirited Away pad.

Alright, I saw the pad and added my thoughts to it.

Oh gee, my due's up, innit? I'll see about putting something in tonight, or else tomorrow. Looks like I've bent myself into a near-immediate reply on Mr Jauntier's heels. I'm sure I can keep up with it, though.

Orx of Twinleaf said:

Oh gee, my due's up, innit? I'll see about putting something in tonight, or else tomorrow. Looks like I've bent myself into a near-immediate reply on Mr Jauntier's heels. I'm sure I can keep up with it, though.

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My apologies, but you can surely make it work.

NOTICE FOR PLAYERS: Top priority for 6 AM is to get the project done. No more meandering. You lot have to buckle down and work together to get this up and over with, particularly Spirited Away.