A Pokemon Journey!

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(I quote myself Naoko:

Dragon Trainer Dane said:
I don't know exactly how to progress this but...
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Like I said quite clearly, I wasn't sure what to do with it so I just invented something. Next time time please read my whole post else you will miss things I have said. I didn't want to go overboard but Drew left it at dodgy point.

Dragon Trainer Dane said:
there was a sudden blinding flash...
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Could have been any number of things. I left it to you to decide.)

I dashed after Liane and the others. She seemed to be in quite a rush.
"Yeah, where are we going?" I chimed in after Ash.
 
Drew hesitated. "Pewter City I guess..." He walked past the neatly decorate entranceway, just as a black limo sped up near the road. A woman stepped out, presumably Liane's mum.
 
"Ignore her and keep walking! He will be lucky to make it to Viridian Forest by night and Pewter by morning. We dont have the time to stopp and talk with anyone!" Ash said getting annoyed at all the interutions from out journey.
"Come on! Its almost dark and I can see The forest.
 
(Ignore her? We're like, right in front of her Randall!And what do you mean by 'red' Outskate? like, angry red? I'm totally confused right now.)
"Excuse me." My mom said in an angry voice.
"Nice going Ash." I muttered to him "My mom hears everything!"
"Young lady, I'd like to hear that again, but a little louder please." My mom said threateningly.
"Well, we'll just be on our way! Thanks for the provisions!" I said scooting around her.
"Did you find your father's gift?" My mom asked.
"Yeah." I said sweatdropping as I noticed the Delibird that was following me diligently.
"I see. Well I won't keep you, though I'd watch who you keep your company with..." She gave a stern look to each of the boys "I'd rather you be with Winston, but if you insist..."
"I do." I said, motioning them to follow me as I hurried away from my house.
When we were in the safety of the forest, I sighed and flushed "I'm sorry, I didn't know my family would be so stupid. It's probably because they just don't like you guys or something."
 
Randall-Kun said:
Ash, who was watching the whole incident walked toward Liane. "Kinda cocky isn't he? More like a jerk actually!" I rephrased my saying. "Anyway, where are we gonna stay tonight?"
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You switched from 3rd Person to 1st. Stick with one and stay there.

And Naoko, its blushing red. =/

"I guess the idea of a girl travelling with 3 boys is not something a mum would like, especially if she's a rich bit-" Drew paused. "Yea, let's go to Pewter City." Drew walked around Liane's mum, being careful not to get the dirt on his clothes onto her mum's silk suit.
 
"I'll show you the path I took earlier to get close to Team Rockets Balloon" I said to them marching in front.
"It's just by those trees and cuts round by a house to the entrance" I said pointing "It'll save us clambering over the Pokemon infested path to the Forest..."
 
OOC - I'm thinking of making a banner of sorts so can you all just post your teams again? DTD I remembered that you caught a Pok?mon but I can't really remember.

IC - "That would be great Dane." Drew said softly. Drew turned his head around, seeing Liane and Ash still near the doorway.

"You guys coming or not?" Drew asked rudely. Drew was getting impatient, and the anticipation to get his first badge was larger than a Snorlax. Drew was ready.
 
(I thought we were already in the forest....*_*; that's where Liane is... but I guess not)
"Yeah!" I said running up to Drew and Dane.
"So, are we taking a short-cut? But won't that cut our pokemon's experience in half?" I asked "Because since there are so many pokemon in the forest, we'd be able to catch more pokemon, and then we'd have a better advantage against the gym leader right?"

(OHO! I wanna do a trainer card!)
 
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(Outskate - The Pokemon I caught was a Mankey.
Naoko - I thought we were here on the edge of the forest:
[PokeCommunity.com] A Pokemon Journey!

Maybe I got it wrong?

A trainer card probally would be best. I might have a go at making a basic one myself. My current method is nice but takes up too much room.)

I led the others around the stream to the edge of the forest.
"Beyond here lies Pewter City" I said "The forest will be very dangerous - Pokemon pop up from everywhere. Our Pokemon are gonna get a lot of battle experience from this ordeal..."
 
"Well that's good right? We'll need the experience to battle the gym leader." I said, "I think I'll stick with using my squirtle for this one. How about you guys?"
I didn't think my delibird was quite ready for a gym battle just yet.
(check it out! trainer card is in my sig!)
 
FORM!
name: naomi
age:(10 to 15): 10
gender: Female
starter:
[PokeCommunity.com] A Pokemon Journey!

apperance:
[PokeCommunity.com] A Pokemon Journey!

personality: likes to read a lot of books on how to become the greatest gym leader. Like her mother who's a gym leader in a samll town called gretsa, she is shy but smart when in dangerous situations.
 
what's an rp sample?


Ooh and if i can join what city are we in and how can i get the cool gear you guys have (trainer cards with little pictures of pokemon on them). I'm not good at making that stuff, so if someone make it already, i'll be happy. but if that isn't the case, i'll just survive wihtput one and everyone will think i'm spamming the next time i try to create an rpg without a title. Sorry i blabbered.
 
(An rp sample is a sample of your style of RPing. And, please read the rules before you post. No double-posting, and Randall, don't bash. see? THREE posts. So, don't bash today or else we'll have another DTD situation on our hands. As for now Flarizard, knowing Randall, you NEED an RP sample to join, and... a better appearance des. than,
flarizard mew said:
[PokeCommunity.com] A Pokemon Journey!
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. And, you don't need the IMG bracket's around 'charmander', AND this is not the place to ask for trainer cards.)
 
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(Fair enough Naoko but give the poor girl a chance. She's only made 3 posts already.
I can't exactly see where she is insulting Randall, Naoko. Maybe I didn't read her post correctly? :confused:
I didn't think we were allowing anyone else in the RP but maybe if Randall doesn't mind...?)

As we entered the dark gloomy forest I felt a sense of dread wash over me.
"It's nearly nightfall" I said to the others "We will probally only get a little way through the forest before-"
*Whoosh!*
Out of a bush next to me sprang a greenish coloured worm. It gazed at us through it's black eyes, observing our movements. Looking round I could see a few other creatures pop their heads out of the foliage staring at us unblinkingly.
"Err...is this some sort of welcome party?" I said as more bugs appeared.
"It seems more like a town meeting..." I said as I got to my feet.
 
(she;s not insulting Randall, I said 'but knowing randall' because outskate, actually never gave an RP sample, but Randall said he had too, and anyway, I know there's only three posts, I specifically said that in my post. OH! I see, I was talking to Randall when I said 'don't bash randall' because of what he usually does see?)
I clamped a hand over my mouth and clenched my eyes shut.
"Bugs!" I managed to squeak.
"Deli Deli?" Delibird asked, pulling on my skirt.
"You guys, I forgot to tell you that I really don't like bugs!" I said, muffled, hoping that no gross creepy crawly, thing got within a foot away from me.
 
Outskate said:
You switched from 3rd Person to 1st. Stick with one and stay there.
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OCC: Outskate, I am being nice today so dont tell me how to RP. ^^ thanks! And flarizardmew,I am sorry but no you can not join. I am sorry but you NEED a RP sample (which is a sample of your RPing skills) And not to be rude (pointing this out) I dont want someone with three post posting because you already broke the rule of double posting. Now for anyone who knows me, thats the nicest I get. I am in a good mood today and I dont want it ruined so dont ruin it. I am sorry but you should get an RP tutor or read a few other RPs so you can see how to really RP. I know plenty of good RPs you could look at so if you want to just ask. I am sorry like I said but no you are not accepted.

IC: Running to keep up with Liane he tripped and landed on his chest. When he turned around to see what he tripped over, he say an Eevee. Wow, what are the chances I would fund an Eevee here. They are rare to begin with but man. Ash thought to himself. "Hey guys wait a minute, I found something!" I said looking back at the Eevee. Pikachu go. Use your quick attack." Pikachu sprung from my shoulder and lunged at the Eevee hitting to the ground. The Eevee stood up and tackled Pikachu right the ground.
"Ok Pikachu, Thundershock!" I jolt of lighting shot from PIkachu sending thousands of jolts through the Eevee knocking it to the ground. "Ok," Ash said "POKEBALL, GO!" he yelled As a pokeball flew from his hands. It hit the eevee and a red light appeared absorbing the eevee into the pokeball. It shocked back and forth with the light on the front of the ball flashing. It did so for what seemed like an hour for Ash until it stilled the light turned white and it stoped shaking.
Ash ran to the ball lifted it up and yelled, "I caught an Eevee!"
 
OOC: WOAH. You're in a REALLY good mood! ^^;.

IC:"Congratulations," I squeaked "Can we leave now?!"
"Deli Deli..." Delibird shuffled around it's bag and pulled out the brush that I had put in originally.
"Um...Bugs, not brush delibird." I said sweatdropping.
"Deli?" Delibird blinked, probably wondering what the difference was.
I sighed and thought 'Well, now we know Delibird isn't the brightest of all pokemon'
 
(Randall: I don't see why you would say your in a good mood. I could easily say what you said and I wouldn't say that It was in a good mood.
And what's with Eevee? I thought we were catching Pokemon native to the area?

flarizardmew(if your still reading this): An RP sample is just like a short part from another RP, or it can be something from something similar. We need to see you utilise actions, thoughts, and conversations correctly. Grammar and spelling is also important.)

"Charmander go!" I cried "Ember attack!"
My Charmander flicked it's tail sending a spray of tiny flames over a few of the bugs forcing them to receed into the bushes.
"Come on Liane!" I shouted trying to encourage her to join in as another bug poped up in front of me.
I reached into my pocket and whipped out my Pokedex.
"Caterpie are small bugs that shoot strings to bind their attackers. Though generally weak bug Pokemon are fast growers and evolve quickly. Hardly any caution is nessessary to catch bug Pokemon though some trainers can be afraid of bugs" The Pokedex stated.
"So bug Pokemon are weak are they?" I said snapping my Pokedex closed. I layed my eyes upon the Caterpie in front of me.
"Charmander Scratch!" I commanded.
My Charmander struck the Pokemon sending it flying.
"Pee!" it squealed on the floor.
"Sorry little guy..." I said pulling a pokeball out of my pocket.
"Pokeball GO!" I said throwing the ball. It struck the Caterpie directly and sucked it inside. The ball hardly wriggled and I had soon caught yet another Pokemon for my collection.
"But then why do I feel so bad about it?" I thought miserably. My Charmander came up to me, put it's hand on my leg and stared into my eyes smiling.
"This thing adores me..."
Turning round still troubled I was curious to see how the others were doing...
 
OCC: You can catch different pokemon, I just dont want to see you catching a gyrados in Viridain forest. Or a Mr. Mime on Route 6. Get it?

IC: That looked easy! Ash thought to himself. It took one hit to faint. This should be a snap!
"Alright, Lets go!" Ash spoke walking into the forest. Maybe I could find a rare pokemon here? It is said only week pokemon like Caterpie and Weedle live here but Beedrill attack many passing through the forest. Maybe I could find a Beedrill or even better, a Butterfree! With thought his hopes jumped. I can do this!
 
Randall-Kun said:
OCC: You can catch different pokemon, I just dont want to see you catching a gyrados in Viridain forest. Or a Mr. Mime on Route 6. Get it?
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(Yes Randall, and I wouldn't do that.
But my point still stands as to why you would catch Eevee, an urban Pokemon, in a forest. That just doesn't add up.)

"Hey!" I cried as another bug type Pokemon popped it's head out of a bush. This one was brownish coloured and had what looked like stingers on it's head and tail.
"Wow! I wonder what that is..." I said opening my Pokedex.
"Weedle, unlike Caterpie, are slightly more dangerous. The stinger on it's head is used to poison the opponent and it's rear prong shoots string to slow it's foes thusly rendering them unable to battle so it can escape. Caution must be taken so that your Pokemon are not poisoned as it will require an antidote to cure them. Poison lingers and should be taken care of as soon as possible to prevent the Pokemon from fainting"
"Weedle huh?" I said stowing away my pokedex and taking out another Pokeball "Another weak one for the bag!" I shouted throwing the ball. The ball caught the Pokemon but it wriggled about wildly.
"Huh?" I mumbled. The ball burst back open and the freed Pokemon squirmed away.
"Some Pokemon are far more resistant than others. All Pokemon should be weakened first to ensure a more successful capture" my pokedex stated almost mocking me.
"Darn..." I mumbled.
 
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