Alakazam17
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Thanks Knost, I didn't quite know how I'd handle it either until it happened. I started the chapter thinking it would end with my arriving at the gates of Cerulean Gym, but the loss of Drumstix was one of several factors that made me split it up(which similarly happened with the Route 3 and Mt. Moon chapters, which were also originally intended to be one). I'm writing too much! xD
CodeHelmet, math and science were also my favourite subjects in school, and I moved on to Engineering and later Computer Science in university. :P I just happen to love writing too haha.
As for a new role for Ash, a few come to mind. Training to be a gym leader, scouting for new talent, even swapping roles with Serena and trying contests for a change. =O
And with my mention of the Ground-type I was foreshadowing Nidorina's imminent evolution into Nidoqueen. ^_^ We all know it's going to happen, so the biggest questions remaining are when, where, and why. ;)
I returned to the Pok?Centre to heal my remaining partners' wounds. Once that was complete I did some reshuffling of my party for the route ahead. Ivanna, Concord, and Cotton were now my strongest Pok?mon, and they would definitely remain in the party moving forward. The remaining five would be occasionally shuffled in order to spread the experience around.
Back on Route 25 I could see a number of Hikers, all of which were eventually defeated by a combination of Cotton's Confusion and Ivanna's Double Kick. They had Geodude and Onix as expected, but also Machop, a Fighting-type Pok?mon that I was seeing in battle for the first time. I knew Feathers' Peck could handle them, but sadly I never got the chance to try.
The hardest battle by far was against a Youngster who had a single Slowpoke(which I was also seeing for the first time). All it would use was Confusion, and I soon realized that half of my Pok?mon(Ivanna, Damon, and now Toxika) were weak to it. Thus my only option was to send in Cotton and use Sleep Powder. It missed the first time, but on the second try, it hit! She then proceeded to use her own Confusion(which was not very effective, sadly) until the Slowpoke was down. Phew! That was very close.
And finally I faced a Lass who had a number of Grass-types. Feathers handled the bulk of the battle, but near the end I decided to switch to Concord, who easily finished off the last Pok?mon. And afterward I could see the little Pidgey start to glow, and also to grow.
This Pok?mon is full of vitality. It constantly flies around its large territory in search of prey.
Concord the Pidgeotto, Level 18
-Gust
-Sand Attack
Quick Attack
"You're beautiful, Concord," I said, running my hand along the feathers on his back. "I'm so happy for you." I was also grateful for the added strength he'd be bringing to the group, lessening the burden on Ivanna.
By that time it looked like the trainers were all gone, and the road had also abruptly stopped. But there was still a single dwelling hidden in the brush. A cottage, it seemed like. Was that where Bill lived?
Then..."Help! Help! Rrrrrroooooaaar!"
Concord and I both turned to the cottage. Whatever that noise was, it was coming from inside! "Hurry!" I said, looking to my new Pidgeotto as I began running. "Someone's in trouble!"
I quickly opened the door and...and...there was...A MONSTER!!!
"Aaaaahhhhh!" I jumped back at the sight of it. What was it? And who had been calling for help earlier. Did it...eat them? Was I next?
Then..."Hiya, I'm a Pok?mon!" Who said that? Was there someone in the monster's stomach, still alive?! =O
Only one way to find out. "Concord, use Quick Attack! See if you can-."
"No wait!" the Monster shouted. Yes, the monster. I was sure of it now. "Please don't attack me! I'm a human who has been combined with a Pok?mon. I'd change back but I can't work the computer with these tiny little hands. Please help me!"
His story, while insane, seemed believable under the circumstances, so I decided to help him. He entered some sort of capsule in the corner of the room, closing the door behind him. Then it was my turn, going to the nearby computer and entering the codes that I had been instructed to. I heard a few loud beeps and a few puffs of steam, and eventually...
"Thank you, thank you, thank you!" said the 'monster,' now a handsome young man.
"You...you're welcome," was all I could say in response. What else could I say? I tried to regain my composure while thinking of what to do next. "Are you, by chance...Bill?"
He nodded. "Yes. And it appears you have me at a disadvantage, miss."
I stood there for a moment, before realizing he was asking who I was. "I'm Jessica, a Pok?mon trainer from Pallet Town."
"A Pok?mon trainer, you say," he said as he walked over to a desk, ruffling through some papers. "Then I may have the perfect thing to repay you with."
He pulled out a ticket and hands it to me. "This is for a party on the S.S. Anne, a luxury cruise liner currently docked in Vermillion City Harbour. Pok?mon trainers from around the world will be there. I can't stand fancy-do's myself, but maybe you'd enjoy it."
"Th-thank you," I responded, taking the ticket and adding it to my bag.
A few moments later we had said our goodbyes and I was on my way back to Cerulean City. And, at long last, the gym.
So the Cerulean Gym battle has finally come...in Chapter 9. I can hardly believe I originally intended to have it in Chapter 2. xD
CodeHelmet, math and science were also my favourite subjects in school, and I moved on to Engineering and later Computer Science in university. :P I just happen to love writing too haha.
As for a new role for Ash, a few come to mind. Training to be a gym leader, scouting for new talent, even swapping roles with Serena and trying contests for a change. =O
And with my mention of the Ground-type I was foreshadowing Nidorina's imminent evolution into Nidoqueen. ^_^ We all know it's going to happen, so the biggest questions remaining are when, where, and why. ;)
Chapter 8 - Hiya, I'm a Pok?mon!
I returned to the Pok?Centre to heal my remaining partners' wounds. Once that was complete I did some reshuffling of my party for the route ahead. Ivanna, Concord, and Cotton were now my strongest Pok?mon, and they would definitely remain in the party moving forward. The remaining five would be occasionally shuffled in order to spread the experience around.
Back on Route 25 I could see a number of Hikers, all of which were eventually defeated by a combination of Cotton's Confusion and Ivanna's Double Kick. They had Geodude and Onix as expected, but also Machop, a Fighting-type Pok?mon that I was seeing in battle for the first time. I knew Feathers' Peck could handle them, but sadly I never got the chance to try.
The hardest battle by far was against a Youngster who had a single Slowpoke(which I was also seeing for the first time). All it would use was Confusion, and I soon realized that half of my Pok?mon(Ivanna, Damon, and now Toxika) were weak to it. Thus my only option was to send in Cotton and use Sleep Powder. It missed the first time, but on the second try, it hit! She then proceeded to use her own Confusion(which was not very effective, sadly) until the Slowpoke was down. Phew! That was very close.
And finally I faced a Lass who had a number of Grass-types. Feathers handled the bulk of the battle, but near the end I decided to switch to Concord, who easily finished off the last Pok?mon. And afterward I could see the little Pidgey start to glow, and also to grow.
![[PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke [PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke](https://image.ibb.co/bArJ9v/Pidgeotto.png)
This Pok?mon is full of vitality. It constantly flies around its large territory in search of prey.
Concord the Pidgeotto, Level 18
-Gust
-Sand Attack
Quick Attack
"You're beautiful, Concord," I said, running my hand along the feathers on his back. "I'm so happy for you." I was also grateful for the added strength he'd be bringing to the group, lessening the burden on Ivanna.
By that time it looked like the trainers were all gone, and the road had also abruptly stopped. But there was still a single dwelling hidden in the brush. A cottage, it seemed like. Was that where Bill lived?
Then..."Help! Help! Rrrrrroooooaaar!"
Concord and I both turned to the cottage. Whatever that noise was, it was coming from inside! "Hurry!" I said, looking to my new Pidgeotto as I began running. "Someone's in trouble!"
I quickly opened the door and...and...there was...A MONSTER!!!
![[PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke [PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke](https://image.ibb.co/dsGjHF/Monster.jpg)
"Aaaaahhhhh!" I jumped back at the sight of it. What was it? And who had been calling for help earlier. Did it...eat them? Was I next?
Then..."Hiya, I'm a Pok?mon!" Who said that? Was there someone in the monster's stomach, still alive?! =O
Only one way to find out. "Concord, use Quick Attack! See if you can-."
"No wait!" the Monster shouted. Yes, the monster. I was sure of it now. "Please don't attack me! I'm a human who has been combined with a Pok?mon. I'd change back but I can't work the computer with these tiny little hands. Please help me!"
His story, while insane, seemed believable under the circumstances, so I decided to help him. He entered some sort of capsule in the corner of the room, closing the door behind him. Then it was my turn, going to the nearby computer and entering the codes that I had been instructed to. I heard a few loud beeps and a few puffs of steam, and eventually...
![[PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke [PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke](https://image.ibb.co/bzfzXF/Bill.png)
"Thank you, thank you, thank you!" said the 'monster,' now a handsome young man.
"You...you're welcome," was all I could say in response. What else could I say? I tried to regain my composure while thinking of what to do next. "Are you, by chance...Bill?"
He nodded. "Yes. And it appears you have me at a disadvantage, miss."
I stood there for a moment, before realizing he was asking who I was. "I'm Jessica, a Pok?mon trainer from Pallet Town."
"A Pok?mon trainer, you say," he said as he walked over to a desk, ruffling through some papers. "Then I may have the perfect thing to repay you with."
He pulled out a ticket and hands it to me. "This is for a party on the S.S. Anne, a luxury cruise liner currently docked in Vermillion City Harbour. Pok?mon trainers from around the world will be there. I can't stand fancy-do's myself, but maybe you'd enjoy it."
"Th-thank you," I responded, taking the ticket and adding it to my bag.
A few moments later we had said our goodbyes and I was on my way back to Cerulean City. And, at long last, the gym.
Chapter 8 Round-up
Money: 20,065
Time: 6:24
Living: 8
Dead: 1
Soft-Resets: 1
Badge Case
Items
Pok? Ball x 13
Potion x 2
Rare Candy x 2
Moon Stone x 2
Escape Rope x 1
Ether x 1
The Helix Fossil is still there, but it and other Key Items will no longer be included in this tally.
Team
Concord the Pidgeotto, level 18
-Gust
-Sand Attack
-Quick Attack
Ivanna the Nidorina, level 18
-Growl
-Tackle
-Scratch
-Double Kick
Cotton the Butterfree, Level 18
-Sleep Powder
-Confusion
-Poisonpowder
-Stun Spore
Feathers the Spearow, Level 15
-Peck
-Growl
-Leer
-Fury Attack
Damon the Zubat, Level 16
-Leech Life
-Supersonic
-Bite
Toxika the Venonat, level 16
-Tackle
-Disable
-Supersonic
Other Pok?mon
Boxed
Loki the Rattata, Level 16
-Tackle
-Tail Whip
-Quick Attack
-Hyper Fang
Aria the Pidgey, level 15
-Gust
-Sand Attack
-Quick Attack
Dead
Drumstix the Spearow, Level 13
-Peck
-Growl
-Leer
Money: 20,065
Time: 6:24
Living: 8
Dead: 1
Soft-Resets: 1
Badge Case
![[PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke [PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke](https://www.serebii.net/badges/01.gif)
Items
Pok? Ball x 13
Potion x 2
Rare Candy x 2
Moon Stone x 2
Escape Rope x 1
Ether x 1
The Helix Fossil is still there, but it and other Key Items will no longer be included in this tally.
Team
![[PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke [PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke](https://image.ibb.co/bArJ9v/Pidgeotto.png)
Concord the Pidgeotto, level 18
-Gust
-Sand Attack
-Quick Attack
![[PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke [PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke](https://image.ibb.co/k0XGUv/Nidorina.png)
Ivanna the Nidorina, level 18
-Growl
-Tackle
-Scratch
-Double Kick
![[PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke [PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke](https://image.ibb.co/iRVOba/Butterfree.png)
Cotton the Butterfree, Level 18
-Sleep Powder
-Confusion
-Poisonpowder
-Stun Spore
![[PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke [PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke](https://image.ibb.co/hTXuGa/Spearow.png)
Feathers the Spearow, Level 15
-Peck
-Growl
-Leer
-Fury Attack
![[PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke [PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke](https://image.ibb.co/fE75NF/Zubat.png)
Damon the Zubat, Level 16
-Leech Life
-Supersonic
-Bite
![[PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke [PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke](https://image.ibb.co/ffJq6a/Venonat.png)
Toxika the Venonat, level 16
-Tackle
-Disable
-Supersonic
Other Pok?mon
Spoiler:
Boxed
Spoiler:
![[PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke [PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke](https://image.ibb.co/bQaZhF/Rattata.png)
Loki the Rattata, Level 16
-Tackle
-Tail Whip
-Quick Attack
-Hyper Fang
![[PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke [PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke](https://image.ibb.co/deaOba/Pidgey.png)
Aria the Pidgey, level 15
-Gust
-Sand Attack
-Quick Attack
Dead
Spoiler:
![[PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke [PokeCommunity.com] Jessica's Ultimate Nuzlocke](https://image.ibb.co/hTXuGa/Spearow.png)
Drumstix the Spearow, Level 13
-Peck
-Growl
-Leer
So the Cerulean Gym battle has finally come...in Chapter 9. I can hardly believe I originally intended to have it in Chapter 2. xD
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