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CUPCAKES :3
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Hello noxious. We'll i'm back now, my assignment might be up on Saturday or Sunday due to school stuff etc.. Thanks ^^
Ok this is an amazing tag. First of all, love the simplicty, love the depth and I love the tag. :) Good use of a C4D or multiple, I can't really tell, but by blurring parts and sharpening others, that is really what I was looking for you guys to achieve in this assignment. The text it great although in my opinion just a tad too large. When I focus on the C4D, the text pulls me away from it. You could make it smaller or somehow put it closer to the focal, but it isn't too bad how it is...
Ok it was a good attempt, but there is a key feature missing that will alter you entire tag. That is depth. Simply sharpen the parts you want to be the closest to us and blur getting progressively more blurry as they go furthur back. Right now it does look like a C4D pasted on a black background... :x That also applies for the text. From it looks like, you tried to make it appear to be disappearing back into that spiral yes? Well it needs some blurring as it gets furthur away. Also I don't know if I am reading it wrong, but corrosion is spelt with an 's', not a 't'. :)