Lot's WiP comic and general talk

[popplio25]

Sounds good.

:3

 

[popplio25]

Sounds good.

random question here:

what psychic move would you say that references my hands going numb or to sleep or getting a headache .... psywave - https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Psywave_(move)#Generation_VIII_onwards , psychic - https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Psychic_(move)#Pok.C3.A9mon_Legends:_Arceus, psyshock - https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Psyshock_(move)#Description, or some other psychic type move....

cause i'm A mew... and the moves that i know are: rest, reversal, dig and now with endure, replaced with bubblebeam.... and that i don't know any psychic moves... well, i have rest which is a psychic type move, but.... 🙄


if i'm honest, i'm not so much of a fighter.... 😔so i probably don't need reversal anymore... i just don't like being picked on.. sooo.... maybe hyper voice, instead of rest... since i naturally sleep, anyway....


so, if so, my moveset would be dig, bubblebeam, hyper voice and one of the psychic type moves...

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

random question here:

what psychic move would you say that references my hands going numb or to sleep or getting a headache .... psywave - https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Psywave_(move)#Generation_VIII_onwards , psychic - https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Psychic_(move)#Pok.C3.A9mon_Legends:_Arceus, psyshock - https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Psyshock_(move)#Description, or some other psychic type move....

cause i'm A mew... and the moves that i know are: rest, reversal, dig and now with endure, replaced with bubblebeam.... and that i don't know any psychic moves... well, i have rest which is a psychic type move, but.... 🙄


if i'm honest, i'm not so much of a fighter.... 😔so i probably don't need reversal anymore... i just don't like being picked on.. sooo.... maybe hyper voice, instead of rest... since i naturally sleep, anyway....


so, if so, my moveset would be dig, bubblebeam, hyper voice and one of the psychic type moves...

I didn't know you were planning on fighting in battle at all, but if you do, I'd say either Psyshock, or Psychic, Psywave just strikes me as too unpredictable.
If your goal is to give someone a headache, I'd say Psychic. If you just want to bonk someone on the head with a rock, choose Psyshock.

 

[popplio25]

I didn't know you were planning on fighting in battle at all, but if you do, I'd say either Psyshock, or Psychic, Psywave just strikes me as too unpredictable.
If your goal is to give someone a headache, I'd say Psychic. If you just want to bonk someone on the head with a rock, choose Psyshock.

no, that's not what i meant... :> *maybe in my PMD comic, i'll sometimes fight... but not here... well, maybe i might, a little, in comic ^^' *



i meant as a referance to me, when ''my hands go stiff and when ''I '' get a headache... i thought a psychic move of my own could referance that....

but i'm starting to think ''psychic'' fits both of those :3 *i think my hands going stiff is kinda like a psychic force,maybe......*



so, my full moveset now is: dig, bubblebeam, hyper voice and psychic







edit: i just finished this :3 -

*i can't draw hyper voice that well ^^' *








edit: i did some more today :D

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

no, that's not what i meant... :> *maybe in my PMD comic, i'll sometimes fight... but not here... well, maybe i might, a little, in comic ^^' *

i meant as a referance to me, when ''my hands go stiff and when ''I '' get a headache... i thought a psychic move of my own could referance that....

but i'm starting to think ''psychic'' fits both of those :3 *i think my hands going stiff is kinda like a psychic force,maybe......*

so, my full moveset now is: dig, bubblebeam, hyper voice and psychic

Cool. Psychic's a powerful move, so it should help if you ever do find yourself in battle. Good Type spread of moves as well.

edit: i just finished this :3 -

Spoiler:

*i can't draw hyper voice that well ^^' *

Those are awesome! Hyper Voice looks really hard to draw due to the whole backround color shift, but you captured the look of those colors really well!

edit: i did some more today :D

Spoiler:

Awesome! You're getting loads done in the planning stage! One small thing I gotta mention though, a red (shiny) Gyarados is a plot point in the game, it might be better to save that as the only one in your comic to highlight its plot importance.

 

[popplio25]

Cool. Psychic's a powerful move, so it should help if you ever do find yourself in battle.

:D

Good Type spread of moves as well.

thanks :D

Those are awesome! Hyper Voice looks really hard to draw due to the whole backround color shift, but you captured the look of those colors really well!

thankyou :3

Awesome! You're getting loads done in the planning stage!

yeah :D

One small thing I gotta mention though, a red (shiny) Gyarados is a plot point in the game, it might be better to save that as the only one in your comic to highlight its plot importance.

oh! you're right, there... good point 😅 i'll edit that out sometime :>

 

[popplio25]

Those are awesome! Hyper Voice looks really hard to draw due to the whole backround color shift, but you captured the look of those colors really well!

:D

i made this yesterday, too :3 -

My Previous Moves before yesterday (8-5-23) and today (9-5-23)

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

:D

i made this yesterday, too :3 -

Spoiler:

My Previous Moves before yesterday (8-5-23) and today (9-5-23)

Neat!

 

[popplio25]

Neat!

🤗

*please feel free to ask any more questions in my ''ask lot'' :D *

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

🤗

*please feel free to ask any more questions in my ''ask lot'' :D *

I'll be sure to do that if I think of any questions! :)

 

[popplio25]

I'll be sure to do that if I think of any questions! :)

great :D

 

[popplio25]

Awesome! You're getting loads done in the planning stage! One small thing I gotta mention though, a red (shiny) Gyarados is a plot point in the game, it might be better to save that as the only one in your comic to highlight its plot importance.

hmm... i wonder if the seals would be relevent in comic... since no regular pokeballs... 🙄


and how would ''mew mum'' buy the items that she buys in game, in comic, i wonder? hmmm... 🙄 - https://www.serebii.net/heartgoldsoulsilver/savings.shtml

Also, I have to wonder, if your Mum is a Mew, shouldn't she be called Mewm? (that was a bad joke lol, I'm sorry XD)

my Mew mum has these moves: * https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/My-Mew-Mum-Carrie-954578220 *

Struggle Bug *cause she can't walk /fly very well with her bad back*

Scald *cause she gets mad sometimes*

Round *she likes a certain singer* *i won't say who though... i'm not interested in him*

Amnesia *she forgets stuff sometimes*

You're doing a really good job on your script so far, but if you decide you'd rather work on nuzlocke comics instead for now, you have my support.

i thought up more lines of script for my previous/first, main one, my PMD comic, today...

(playing pokemon moon, in which i was in the middle of a battle (i think) )
?: *after winning said battle* yeah!!! :D yesss!!
....
?: *hears a feint voice *
?: wait... what's that?

?: yeah, yeah, yeah!!!

*poof*
?: YEAH!!!
?: wha! who are.... wait! i know you!... you're.... kiri the Mew, who used to be a pikachu named kiria : O
kiri: you know me? i kinda know you too... you're ''lot'' aren't you?
?: well.... yes.. of course, i do
and yeah, i am but my actual name is ''charlotte'' but i go by 'Lot ' when i'm in my mew form
kiri: I knew it!! ^^

Lot: what are you doing here?

kiri: to do this.... *pokes me*

Lot: whaaa!? what?

*in the middle of poofing out*
Lot: are you asking for me to come with you?!

kiri: i am! ....
*I save game*

Lot: wait! wait! i don't....
*kiri poofs me out, anyway*

Lot: whaaa!
....

i don't really know how it came about... it just... poofed up into my head : O
comes after the ''(15th of march 2023)
in the human world where i'm from, it was a cloudy day and I was on this thing called a computer while playing a video game on this thing called a 2DS'' part of the script

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

hmm... i wonder if the seals would be relevent in comic... since no regular pokeballs... 🙄

I don't recall what the seals you mentioned even are, but if they have to do with basic Pokeballs, I'd guess probably not?

and how would ''mew mum'' buy the items that she buys in game, in comic, i wonder? hmmm... 🙄 - https://www.serebii.net/heartgoldsoulsilver/savings.shtml

I never use that mechanic when I play, but I can't think of any good reason why it wouldn't work exactly like it would in game, but in your comic.
Like, maybe after every Gym you win, your Mum'll send you a *random* item like a berry or something in the mail.

my Mew mum has these moves: * https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/My-Mew-Mum-Carrie-954578220 *

Struggle Bug *cause she can't walk /fly very well with her bad back*

Scald *cause she gets mad sometimes*

Round *she likes a certain singer* *i won't say who though... i'm not interested in him*

Amnesia *she forgets stuff sometimes*

Good reasons for the move choices. 👍

i thought up more lines of script for my previous/first, main one, my PMD comic, today...

Awesome! Just make sure you have all of the bits you've written about it saved somewhere together so you don't forget any of it.

i don't really know how it came about... it just... poofed up into my head : O

Isn't that how it usually happens? At least that's how I get work done on my own stories anyway, it just pops in there lol.

comes after the ''(15th of march 2023)
in the human world where i'm from, it was a cloudy day and I was on this thing called a computer while playing a video game on this thing called a 2DS'' part of the script

Cool.

 

[popplio25]

I don't recall what the seals you mentioned even are, but if they have to do with basic Pokeballs, I'd guess probably not?

yeah, the seals are to do with the contests in sinnoh...

up to eight Seals can be attached at a time to any Ball Capsule. Ball Capsules can be decorated with Seals using the player's own PC, with twelve Ball Capsules available to be used. The location of the Seal on the Ball Capsule affects where the Seal's effect is displayed when the Pokémon is sent out. In HeartGold and SoulSilver, three Seals can be acquired each day from a girl in Olivine City. Once a Seal is acquired, it cannot be sold or thrown away legitimately. The Seal Case can store a maximum of 99 of each Seal, including those Seals that are applied to a Ball Capsule.

so yeah, the seals probably won't be in the comic :>

I never use that mechanic when I play, but I can't think of any good reason why it wouldn't work exactly like it would in game, but in your comic.
Like, maybe after every Gym you win, your Mum'll send you a *random* item like a berry or something in the mail.

yeah, that sounds good :D it'd be ''strength trail'' in comic 🤗
and i know that they have poke money in PMD :3

Good reasons for the move choices. 👍

thanks :D

Awesome! Just make sure you have all of the bits you've written about it saved somewhere together so you don't forget any of it.

i do... i have it typed up in a microsoft wordpad page :3

Isn't that how it usually happens? At least that's how I get work done on my own stories anyway, it just pops in there lol.

yeah, i guess so 😅

Cool.

thanks ^^

and for my PMD comic, i coloured the del cafe interier walls and floor yesterday :D i think i just need to put some stuff on the walls a bit to make it less dark...

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

yeah, the seals are to do with the contests in sinnoh...

That would explain why I don't remember them lol.

so yeah, the seals probably won't be in the comic :>

Makes sense to me. 👍

yeah, that sounds good :D it'd be ''strength trail'' in comic 🤗
and i know that they have poke money in PMD :3

Gotta pay that crazy Kecleon with something am I right? 😏

i do... i have it typed up in a microsoft wordpad page :3

Fantastic. 👍

and for my PMD comic, i coloured the del cafe interier walls and floor yesterday :D i think i just need to put some stuff on the walls a bit to make it less dark...

Spoiler:

It looks really good!

 

[popplio25]

That would explain why I don't remember them lol.

:>

Makes sense to me. 👍

🤗

Gotta pay that crazy Kecleon with something am I right? 😏

yep! apparently, he's lv 90, or so... that's why he's so strong : o

Fantastic. 👍

thanks :3

It looks really good!

thankyou 🤗

*it's probably slightly a spoiler, but... i finished this just now...
Lot's origin flashback sneakpeak

for my ''future'' PMD comic ... there's no name yet, though....

i tried with the background.... ^^' and the mew's just mirrored and recoloured, the brown one, i mean *mirage*.... again, i tried... ^^'

https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Lot-s-origin-flashback-sneakpeak-962051289

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

yep! apparently, he's lv 90, or so... that's why he's so strong : o

0.0 Wow... Yeah, that's pretty strong!

Spoiler:

*it's probably slightly a spoiler, but... i finished this just now...
Lot's origin flashback sneakpeak


https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Lot-s-origin-flashback-sneakpeak-962051289

That's really good! Love the inverted color Mew design!

 

[popplio25]

0.0 Wow... Yeah, that's pretty strong!

yeah! :3

That's really good! Love the inverted color Mew design!

thankyou :3
i'm no good with backgrounds and trees, though.... it almost always comes out so childish, somehow >.<

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

thankyou :3
i'm no good with backgrounds and trees, though.... it almost always comes out so childish, somehow >.<

Nothing wrong with that, heck, sometimes having an art style that has a more whimsical look can be a big benefit. I mean, you're not trying to write a graphic mature rated comic are you? Because if that isn't your goal, then having a more childish art style can appeal to those looking for something a little more light hearted ya know?

 

[popplio25]

Nothing wrong with that, heck, sometimes having an art style that has a more whimsical look can be a big benefit. I mean, you're not trying to write a graphic mature rated comic are you?
Because if that isn't your goal, then having a more childish art style can appeal to those looking for something a little more light hearted ya know?

yeah, that's true ^^' *who knows which direction it'll decide to go, in the end, though*