Lot's WiP comic and general talk

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

well... for tyranroar's plush inspo plush & Dilophorus's plush inspo plush, it said on tofucute that it's Unlikely to be restocked... so that's a no, unfortunetly... same with fedart's one on ebay, currently out of stock...
i'm not really sure about ranfrog's one... i looked on google but i couldn't find it....

Oh... Well maybe they will someday...

hmmm.... i'll see :3

edit at 4:33 pm: that does look good on them, actually :3
shiny ranfrog View attachment 154736 shiny fedart View attachment 154737



thanks :D

You're welcome! And yeah, they look really nice! ^^

 

[popplio25]

Oh... Well maybe they will someday...

yeah, who knows :>
i don't really mind, either way

You're welcome! And yeah, they look really nice! ^^

 

[popplio25]

You're welcome! And yeah, they look really nice! ^^

have you seen my other region... the xesse region, at all?

i can't recall if i showed it before
https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan...kemon-tranquillity-and-havoc-the-xesse-region

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

have you seen my other region... the xesse region, at all?

i can't recall if i showed it before
https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan...kemon-tranquillity-and-havoc-the-xesse-region

Yeah, you have. ^^ I can remember looking at some of the Xesse region's Pokemon from the link you posted.

 

[popplio25]

Yeah, you have. ^^ I can remember looking at some of the Xesse region's Pokemon from the link you posted.

ahh, ok :3
that's great! :D

which starter did you say that you'd choose, again? if you ever said.. i'm forgetting


also... i made this yesterday :D
https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/my-plush-pokemon-that-also-live-in-china-1016595984
i guess i'll be updating it whenever i make a new potle pokemon :3

& yeah, i changed it from continental europe to china... either anhui https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anhui....

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anhui#/media/File:Anhui_in_China_(+all_claims_hatched).svg

which has the huangshan mountains - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Huangshan , which is also in stitch and Ai which is a chinese spin off of lilo and stitch :3 - https://disney.fandom.com/wiki/Stitch_&_Ai if you've seen it i like that spinoff :D
& that's so pretty

either that or i could use zhejiang - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zhejiang
... which also looks so pretty

or even https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xinjiang which looks almost the biggest of china... or maybe north china is the biggest - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/North_China

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

which starter did you say that you'd choose, again? if you ever said.. i'm forgetting

The Fox one, although I've forgotten its name.

also... i made this yesterday :D
https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/my-plush-pokemon-that-also-live-in-china-1016595984
i guess i'll be updating it whenever i make a new potle pokemon :3

That's quite a chunk of work you did on that list! Well done!

& yeah, i changed it from continental europe to china... either anhui https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anhui....

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anhui#/media/File:Anhui_in_China_(+all_claims_hatched).svg

which has the huangshan mountains - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Huangshan , which is also in stitch and Ai which is a chinese spin off of lilo and stitch :3 - https://disney.fandom.com/wiki/Stitch_&_Ai if you've seen it i like that spinoff :D

I loved the Lilo & Stitch TV show and movies, but I've never seen the spin off.

& that's so pretty

either that or i could use zhejiang - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zhejiang
... which also looks so pretty
or even https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xinjiang which looks almost the biggest of china... or maybe north china is the biggest - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/North_China

I know next to nothing about China, so as far as regional help is concerned, I got nothin'. But a Pokemon region based on China seems like it would look really nice! So I hope you are able to make it work! ^^

 

[popplio25]

The Fox one, although I've forgotten its name.

the fire starter, the ulpcub line *ulpcub, Pesesce & Ferulpe* :3

https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Ulpcub-922262825

https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Pesesce-922167375

https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Ferulpe-922303668

ulpcub's so cute & ferulpe is so pretty & Pesesce is adorable too if i do say so myself ^^

That's quite a chunk of work you did on that list! Well done!

thanks :D

I loved the Lilo & Stitch TV show and movies, but I've never seen the spin off.

it's really good :3

I know next to nothing about China, so as far as regional help is concerned, I got nothin'.

ok :>





also... i just drew a new mythical for potle :D

https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Fairy-flying-Alicorn-Mythical-Pokemon-Elarali-1016953510

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

the fire starter, the ulpcub line *ulpcub, Pesesce & Ferulpe* :3

https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Ulpcub-922262825

https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Pesesce-922167375

https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Ferulpe-922303668

ulpcub's so cute & ferulpe is so pretty & Pesesce is adorable too if i do say so myself ^^

Indeed! And yeah, that's the starter I'd pick, I LOVE Foxes. ^^

also... i just drew a new mythical for potle :D
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https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Fairy-flying-Alicorn-Mythical-Pokemon-Elarali-1016953510

Does Elarali have a unicorn horn? Because it's a little hard to see when its mane is the same color. I'd suggest maybe darkening the horn or mane to help with visibility. Otherwise it's a very cool Mythical!

 

[popplio25]

Indeed! And yeah, that's the starter I'd pick, I LOVE Foxes. ^^

:3

Does Elarali have a unicorn horn? Because it's a little hard to see when its mane is the same color. I'd suggest maybe darkening the horn or mane to help with visibility. Otherwise it's a very cool Mythical!

yeah, it does & i did darken the horn a little bit :o i can darken it a little bit more, though :>

& thanks! :D

edit at 7:06 pm: i edited the horn a bit :>

But a Pokemon region based on China seems like it would look really nice! So I hope you are able to make it work! ^^

:3
i hope so, too :>

i wonder if i can still use the tcg cards for locations for it like i am, too :o probably not? hmmm....




also.... i made the shiny for rakkawa & kutuso :3

 

[popplio25]

Does Elarali have a unicorn horn? Because it's a little hard to see when its mane is the same color. I'd suggest maybe darkening the horn or mane to help with visibility. Otherwise it's a very cool Mythical!

also... i drew another new potle pokemon :D

miltele
normal type
https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Normal-Type-Dog-Plush-Miltele-1017009834


also i made the shiny for it :>

trust me... the colour's definately different :3

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

yeah, it does & i did darken the horn a little bit :o i can darken it a little bit more, though :>

& thanks! :D

edit at 7:06 pm: i edited the horn a bit :>

Great! It looks a lot better with just the small edit. It's clearly got a horn now! ^^

:3
i hope so, too :>

i wonder if i can still use the tcg cards for locations for it like i am, too :o probably not? hmmm....

I honestly have no idea, I'm not into the TCG at all. Sorry I'm not more helpful on that front...

also.... i made the shiny for rakkawa & kutuso :3

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Oh I love Rakkawa's shiny's pink feet and tail! Super cute! And the white fur on Kutuso looks really nice!

also... i drew another new potle pokemon :D

miltele
normal type
https://www.deviantart.com/akarifan25/art/Normal-Type-Dog-Plush-Miltele-1017009834

It looks like one of the pups from the old Disney animated movies! ^^

also i made the shiny for it :>

trust me... the colour's definately different :3

It looks perhaps a bit whiter that the original? I know the eyes are different though.

 

[popplio25]

Great! It looks a lot better with just the small edit. It's clearly got a horn now! ^^

I honestly have no idea, I'm not into the TCG at all. Sorry I'm not more helpful on that front...

that's alright :3

Oh I love Rakkawa's shiny's pink feet and tail! Super cute! And the white fur on Kutuso looks really nice!

thanks :D

It looks like one of the pups from the old Disney animated movies! ^^

:>

It looks perhaps a bit whiter that the original? I know the eyes are different though.

yeah :3

do you like?


also... i made the shiny of jenkita :3

 

[popplio25]

If that's how you want to do it, then Leaf Green it is. And Reese is a good name. ^^

i redesigned topaz & mellow a bit :3

Spoiler: redesign of mellow & topaz

& info on the inspo of their redesign :D

other then the info, i think they got their colouring from their shiny alolan raichu dad :3
& pen







topaz & emica the eevee


topaz and rilla


as pichu/SPOILER]

i think the redesigns made mellow cuter :o
they're still the same loveble topaz and mellow that they were before ^^

& yeah, i replaced areni the rockruff-eevee for emica...? cause she wants it :>

 

[popplio25]

Well your first page was really nice, so I'm sure you can come up with something!
That does make me think though... You know about short comics, right? Like the ones that are in the newspaper? Just a few panels. you could practice Buttermilk's comics with short little single stories until you feel comfortable writing out a full on comic. Just a thought haha.

hmmm....

what if i said that those 2 pages of buttermilk's comic were ACTUALLY the actual buttermilk comic... & not beta pages :>
i was only practice a couple of pages for it when i thought of said pages

i just have to wrack my mind & think of the actual script... ahh, but that's gonna be... i don't know what



edit at 8:47 pm: i made two new comic characters for my buttermilk comic :3

she's a young milk snake



i won't say anything about them... cause i don't really know what i'm doing, right off the bat


edit at 11:23 pm: i think i will use some locations from the tcg, after all that i feel that i won't be using for the potle :3 i've already done a couple as it is :>

Spoiler:

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

do you like?

It's alright. I'm not usually a big fan of shiny colors that aren't easily noticeable though. I'm a shiny hunter and stuff like that is hard to see haha.

also... i made the shiny of jenkita :3
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Cool! Looks nice!

i redesigned topaz & mellow a bit :3

Spoiler: redesign of mellow & topaz

& info on the inspo of their redesign :D
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other then the info, i think they got their colouring from their shiny alolan raichu dad :3
View attachment 154824& pen

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View attachment 154836topaz & emica the eevee


View attachment 154837 topaz and rilla
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View attachment 154839 as pichu/SPOILER]

Spoiler: redesign of mellow & topaz

I'll be honest, I personally liked their old looks more. They still look fine now though.

i think the redesigns made mellow cuter :o
they're still the same loveble topaz and mellow that they were before ^^

& yeah, i replaced areni the rockruff-eevee for emica...? cause she wants it :>

Emica will do just as good. ^^

hmmm....

what if i said that those 2 pages of buttermilk's comic were ACTUALLY the actually buttermilk comic... & not beta pages :>
i was only practice a couple of pages for it when i thought of said pages

i just have to wrack my mind & think of the actual script... ahh, but that's gonna be... i don't know what

Then that sounds good!
It will be tough like all script writing should be. But I'm sure there's a good story for Buttermilk! You know her better than I do, so where do you think she would want to go with her mum so badly?

edit at 8:47 pm: i made two new comic characters for my buttermilk comic :3

she's a young milk snake
i won't say anything about them... cause i don't really know what i'm doing, right off the bat

You could have Leaf be one of Buttermilk's friends, since she's a 'milk snake' and all haha. :p

edit at 11:23 pm: i think i will use some locations from the tcg, after all that i feel that i won't be using for the potle :3 i've already done a couple as it is :>

Spoiler:

View attachment 154868

Neat!

 

[popplio25]

It's alright. I'm not usually a big fan of shiny colors that aren't easily noticeable though. I'm a shiny hunter and stuff like that is hard to see haha.

:3

Cool! Looks nice!

thanks :D

I'll be honest, I personally liked their old looks more. They still look fine now though.

on the inside, topaz and mellow are still the same loveble girls that they were before ^^ nothing will change that



i just don't know whether or not the original pikachu design poster on deviantart was gonna reply...
so i wanted to redesign them a bit :>

Emica will do just as good. ^^

Then that sounds good!
It will be tough like all script writing should be. But I'm sure there's a good story for Buttermilk!

yeah!

You know her better than I do, so where do you think she would want to go with her mum so badly?

i know... but i can't think of it yet

You could have Leaf be one of Buttermilk's friends, since she's a 'milk snake' and all haha. :p

that's exactly what i was gonna do with her :D

Neat!

:3



edit at 7:02 pm: i just had a thought/idea... what if one of the monkey painters that took the photos in buttermilk's house.... yeah, i'm working on them ^^

what if they do photos like magic? that's what i thought of :D
cause i looked it up a while back... & i found out that monkey's can paint - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Animal-made_art

& i wasn't sure if it would make sense to have cameras in the comic or not

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

on the inside, topaz and mellow are still the same loveble girls that they were before ^^ nothing will change that

i just don't know whether or not the original pikachu design poster on deviantart was gonna reply...
so i wanted to redesign them a bit :>

I know they are. And... That's a very good reason to redesign them honestly. I'll still love the original looks more, but it's best to play it safe on this, I agree.

i know... but i can't think of it yet

that's exactly what i was gonna do with her :D

Great! Oh, maybe she wanted her mum to take her someplace so she could play with Leaf?

edit at 7:02 pm: i just had a thought/idea... what if one of the monkey painters that took the photos in buttermilk's house.... yeah, i'm working on them ^^

what if they do photos like magic? that's what i thought of :D
cause i looked it up a while back... & i found out that monkey's can paint - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Animal-made_art

& i wasn't sure if it would make sense to have cameras in the comic or not

That's a really great idea!

 

[popplio25]

I know they are. And... That's a very good reason to redesign them honestly. I'll still love the original looks more, but it's best to play it safe on this, I agree.

:3

they said on their cyndaquil one that on someone elses comment that they didn't mind... so torch & sizzle are staying the same :3
the other person... i've no idea about kin the fennekin... but i'm sure they wouldn't have minded :> but i may or may not redesign her... i'll think about it :>

Great!

:D

Oh, maybe she wanted her mum to take her someplace so she could play with Leaf?

i don't know.... i'm not sure if she's met her yet.... hmmm...
could have... could not have...

That's a really great idea!

thanks!


i wonder if i'll have to use clip studio paint for it eventually.... i think it'll look better cause it has more stuff to work with


edit at 10:45 pm: i just finished a family photo for them :3 i'm not sure when it was taken, though....

i think i made summer look so cute, being held by their mum, like that


edit at 11:16 pm: i think i found a way around putting that second photo, as shown above, in the photo frame... first i shrunk the drawing... then i adjusted the frame :>

but does the photo look a little squished, i wonder? maybe i should redesign the photo frame

 

[popplio25]

Great! Oh, maybe she wanted her mum to take her someplace so she could play with Leaf?



That's a really great idea!

hmmm.... i wonder if it'd be weird if i put in pokemon berries or fruits in the comic... a non-pokemon comic ?

ahhh~ i've got so many questions about my own comic... & not enough answers...

 

[Alex_Among_Foxes]

they said on their cyndaquil one that on someone elses comment that they didn't mind... so torch & sizzle are staying the same :3
the other person... i've no idea about kin the fennekin... but i'm sure they wouldn't have minded :> but i may or may not redesign her... i'll think about it :>

Cool that Torch stays the same! But yeah, might be better to play it safe if you don't have permission...

i don't know.... i'm not sure if she's met her yet.... hmmm...

could have... could not have...

That's entirely up to you. ^^

i wonder if i'll have to use clip studio paint for it eventually.... i think it'll look better cause it has more stuff to work with

I don't know anything about drawing, uh, drawing stuff? But if you think it's better then why wait?

edit at 10:45 pm: i just finished a family photo for them :3 i'm not sure when it was taken, though....
View attachment 154928
i think i made summer look so cute, being held by their mum, like that

That's such a cute family photo! ^^

edit at 11:16 pm: i think i found a way around putting that second photo, as shown above, in the photo frame... first i shrunk the drawing... then i adjusted the frame :>
View attachment 154929
but does the photo look a little squished, i wonder? maybe i should redesign the photo frame

Hmmm. It does look a bit that way, but I don't think you need to worry about messing with the frame for it. You could always include the full sized photo at the end of the comic for anyone who reads all the way through. Oh, and this first page looks sooo good now by the way! You did a great job cleaning it up and making it look nice!

hmmm.... i wonder if it'd be weird if i put in pokemon berries or fruits in the comic... a non-pokemon comic ?

Hmm. Honestly no. That might make it hard to follow for any non-Pokemon fans that would want to read it.

ahhh~ i've got so many questions about my own comic... & not enough answers...

You could always try watching a couple of animated mouse movies and see if you get any inspiration. I would listen to music or playing a videogame while working on my own stories, and being in that head space helped a lot.