Map Rating/Review Thread

[Dr Gregory House]

Here's my map:

Spoiler:

Plz rate and comment! ^^

it's a nice map, but i would recommend using the right tree tiles.
it looks a little crowded, try and have just a little bit of free space in the map.
also, try and distinguish the lab from the rest, so that it stands out as a 'lab'
i would rate...8/10

 

[Tyrantrum]

Thanx, and I think there is enough "free space" and there's no lab, it could be a starter village, but the lab is at the next town.
(Kinda like D/P)

 

[.:God:.]

This is my 2nd Post, no one replied...

Map Name: Faelniwt Town (fail-new-ta)

Map Game: Firered

Comments: First for the new hack Pokemon- The Lost Kingdom: War Lords

Mapshot: Check Attachments


@Melash

Rating:
Map 1: 7/10
Map 2: 8.5-9.9/10
Map 3: 6/10

Reason:
Map 1: What happened? It looks like a meteor hit! It's a mess! And also, how many stories does the lab have? Like 24?
Map 2: This depends on when the map shows up in the game. I mean. you need surf to get through it, so... halfway decent. What's the point of the rocks?
Map 3: Extremely boring and empty. But.... it does look a lot like Rooty.

Suggestions:
Map 1: Give it a more spicy look and not a funeral-looking type of city like Lavender Town.
Map 2: Not really a lot... just change the storyline like getting Surf after the 1st gym or something.
Map 3: Fill it up, if you want it to be intresting.

 

[Momoko]

Ok RTW, i say...6/10

Reasons: the new doors dont go well with ur mark/poke center etc...,the wierd building in the bottom is left is ...well..wierd,and looks too big. The closed tree across from it has only 1 patch of grass on its left side....??,theres a wierd house with no door on the right,the sign put DIRECTLY ON the long building look...yes,wierd. I mean they look painted on?and more importantly what is the Mart doing with a mail box? -_- oh one more thing,and i olmost missed this...you overused the vegetation!Flowers,bushes etc are all over the place, not to mention it looks very clustered....

EDIT: lol,ynow wat? i think i was to hard on u ^^ i was just pissed kuz ppl rated my maps suxish -_- u derserve an 8/10

 

[Tyrantrum]

I give it a...4/10
Reason(s):
1. Too square (common mistake)
2. Regular doors don't go very well on Gyms, marts, and P.C.s
3. Don't put signs on the buildings
4. The house in the middle has no windows and serves no purpose, unless it's a shed of some sort
5. Bottom left house is weird and also has no windows

 

[Melash]

Uhh...no one rated my new maps! Here they are again:
Hack Name: Awakened Legends
Hack of: Gold
Map Name: Cove Island

Okay, in my hack, Awakened Legends, instead of the Kanto Region, (Which got destroyed! Yes! Wait, how good of an idea is that...?) there's a different region (no name yet) that is made up of islands. This is an island that is more of a...er...comfty one. You know? Well, anyway, there are two legendaries here. The bottom path leads to Celebi's Forest (not the name!) and the bridge leads to Moltrase's Cave (no name yet!)

Map Name: Reef Island

Okay, this is the first city you arrive after you take the boat from Jhoto. Nothing else to say about it!

Map Name: Mewtwo Cave

This is the cave where Mewtwo resides. NOTE: There is supposed to be a cave entrance in the right corner. I forgot to put it in!

Enjoy!

EDIT:
Here's another map:
Map Name: Barren Island

This is actually the first island you reach when traveling from the Jhoto to the next region. Note: The tower is a home to a legedary. Maybe Ho-oh! You get into it from the cave!

 

[Tyrantrum]

Uhh...no one rated my new maps! Here they are again:
Hack Name: Awakened Legends
Hack of: Gold
Map Name: Cove Island

Okay, in my hack, Awakened Legends, instead of the Kanto Region, (Which got destroyed! Yes! Wait, how good of an idea is that...?) there's a different region (no name yet) that is made up of islands. This is an island that is more of a...er...comfty one. You know? Well, anyway, there are two legendaries here. The bottom path leads to Celebi's Forest (not the name!) and the bridge leads to Moltrase's Cave (no name yet!)

Map Name: Reef Island

Okay, this is the first city you arrive after you take the boat from Jhoto. Nothing else to say about it!

Map Name: Mewtwo Cave

This is the cave where Mewtwo resides. NOTE: There is supposed to be a cave entrance in the right corner. I forgot to put it in!

Enjoy!

They r all pretty good! ^^
Map 1: 7.5/10
Map 2: 5/10
Map 3: 8/10
The reason I rated ur map so less is because it seems empty to me...

 

[Momoko]

Alrite i gots another map.

Made in : Fire Red,o course.
Map name: uhh....dont have a name..Bloopi Town.
hehe thx pl0x rate,just felt like doing a random map....

 

[Tyrantrum]

Melash:

It's good, but there r tile errors behind the house on the left and cave on left, and a tile error on the right side ledge of the mountain.
Overall...6/10

 

[Dr Gregory House]

Alrite i gots another map.

Made in : Fire Red,o course.
Map name: uhh....dont have a name..Bloopi Town.
hehe thx pl0x rate,just felt like doing a random map....

well, fix up the tile errors first. that's important.
get rid of that dark brown path
make that tree in the middle a clump of 2 or three trees instead
The PC and the Gym's rooves are too narrow, make them longer, it's ill proportioned
overall i'd say a 6.5, mainly cus of the errors.
(and you don't normally find grass in a city/town)

 

[Danno]

I'm using some of KyleDove's tiles, this is my first EVER time tile editing and pallete editing successfully. Tell me what you think. (this is a small Starter town with an event that happens at the Pokecenter)

 

[Dr Gregory House]

I'm using some of KyleDove's tiles, this is my first EVER time tile editing and pallete editing successfully. Tell me what you think. (this is a small Starter town with an event that happens at the Pokecenter)

well, the water patches and the ledge don't make sense. why jump down a ledge if it goes nowhere?
try working on the squareness, that's the big old problem. make it special! work on a better placement of the tree stump thingies, it's either those OR the rocks that you should have on the map.
and the house really stands out o_o
i would say 6/10, but if you make those changes then post it again ok?

 

[Danno]

The ledge is for a reason, a little girl hides down there when the bandits attack, and there will also be a pokeball down there.

(The town is up on a mountain)

 

[thethethethe]

Okay my first map in probably four months or so just trying to get into the rhythm again.
Map Name: Umber Town
Map Game: Fire Red
Comments: This is just a concept, I'm going to be making a few different versions of this same map.

 

[Dr Gregory House]

The ledge is for a reason, a little girl hides down there when the bandits attack, and there will also be a pokeball down there.

(The town is up on a mountain)

ah ok, but still, if it's a mountain town then why is there only one layer of rock surrounding it? is the mountain flat? O_o

 

[Danno]

Heres my update.

And my opinion for Thethethethe:

It looks good to me except for the building with the signpost out in front and the awkward windows... so 7.5/10 from me :)

EDIT: No, its just not in the center of the mountain, its off to the right.

 

[Dr Gregory House]

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Heres my update.[/quote]

much better! but it still doesn't look very [s]mountainous[/s] hmmmm...well, a little more rocky... 8.5/10
it's just something about the house...i dunno what...try editing the [s]brightness of everything else to suit the house.[/s] outlines of the house so they aren't as dark.

EDIT: oh and thethethe, 7/10...mainly because i cant see any paths! but other than that it is good

 

[Danno]

.try editing the outlines of the house so they aren't as dark.

Tried that... I had another attempt at it, but it sucked. There are no other colors that are dark but not too light to screw everything up.

I cant fix that...

 

[Dr Gregory House]

Tried that... I had another attempt at it, but it sucked. There are no other colors that are dark but not too light to screw everything up.

I cant fix that...

oh, that's a shame, it really is a shame. based on that i will up it to 8.5/10!
anyways, i shall post a map up here soon O_o
my last map was last week or something O_o

 

[Danno]

oh, that's a shame, it really is a shame. based on that i will up it to 8.5/10!
anyways, i shall post a map up here soon O_o
my last map was last week or something O_o

Alright, thanks for your help :D