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- Seen Apr 23, 2012
Hmm ... Shogundah looks great, but I can't make out the shape of his bamboo-covered gun(?)/claw. My only tip about that is to fix the outlining on that part and give it a more distinctive look. Also, the shading and outlining on the bottom of his stomach and the shading on the neck need to be more rounded to give a more 'organic' look. Finally, I think the leaf stem at the top of the sprite was meant to look as if he was chewing it (correct me if I'm wrong), but right now it looks as if it's coming out of his nose. ^^
Your work seems to have greatly improved since Dragonice and Buneggi. ;)
Your work seems to have greatly improved since Dragonice and Buneggi. ;)