Pok?mon: Destiny Arrived

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Ok guys, 13 is goin to be really short. I'll edit this post(maybe) when i finihsed it)
 
coreystranick said:
Ok guys, 13 is goin to be really short. I'll edit this post(maybe) when i finihsed it)


can't wait for the next one,and the second season^^

I want to see all of the new sprites^^
 
..............i am soo tired. i'll fix it tomorrow. As far as you know i forgot to put her in. Sorry guys rough day
 
coreystranick said:
..............i am soo tired. i'll fix it tomorrow. As far as you know i forgot to put her in. Sorry guys rough day

nah it's alright,you must be tired after doing the updates and sprite request,you don't have to add her in yet:)
 
Hey Pokexproduction((pc sista,lol^^))

Sprites:**Makin It**
Name: Jasmine
Story: Jasmine lived in Lilycove,and was always attactched to the ocean.
Personality: She would always pull pranks on people she was annoyed by.She is nice to the people she likes,and her friends.She stands for what she believes in,and gets cocky sometimes.She hates it when people make fun of her.
Team: good/omega latios's team
Pokemon: umbreon,espeon,dragonite,ninetails
 
great your i. jsut give me the sprites when you can
 
coreystranick said:
Eppy 13 is here
https://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nq9swkhttps://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nq7pxj
if you are confused, wait until the special to come out
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Wait Let me guess the informant is Dash? Cuz he is the one who deals with mice (Pikachu,Raichu,Pichu,Plusle and Minun) and he is like Mace because Mace also owns Electric Pokemon and so does Dash...Woo Hoo I rock...
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Well Yeah great Eppys Coreystranick! Can't wait to see more!
 
Yup! Good one, yeah i was tired and couldn't hink
 
I'mtrying my best to get Mace some walking sprites since the lance sprtie dosen't have some so It may take a while loger to get some.
 
Like the others said, you have a couple of mistakes like when it went to show what was on TV, it said something like "show hat was on TV" and when it should have said she in one part, it said "hse"... And also where it said BROWN HAIRED TRAINER talking, both trainers had brown hair...
Aside from the mistakes, it was good; I don't care to much for the length, but I make short comics, not a series, so that's just me.

I'd be happy to make some sprites for you, just PM me what you're looking for in the sprites.
 
Yeah, i was stupid whne imade those. Now i check for errors, i still make them but not as many
 
I think you are doing great..KougaWolf basically covered your mistakes. I'm really tiered now..I had such a bad day..

If you look in my signature..I make sprites too..but I only started making them yesterday..so you might think they stink..
 
they are all good, i like the blue trainer with a skirt. (second one from teh left)
 
I don't mind you using my sprites, here are 3 females:

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I call her Jess, but you can call her anything;;
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Never named her;;
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My favorite female sprite;;
 
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I like them all, a V-day comic might be out today.
If i decide to make it. ALso shattered moon you cn join season two if you lke. go to the front page to get eh form
 
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